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In Love With A Time Traveler
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In Love With A Time Traveler
BTW--what is Drew doing at Jonathan's home? I sense Drew was there with his parents. Jonathan was not expected so Drew was not needed to apologize in person as his dad indicated on the phone. The scene is set for a verbal joust at meals or over tea or drinks. Jonathan will not back down. His new found backbone might surprise his parents. Let's hope Jonathan's resolve frustrates Drew and turns him back to cocaine later so he will lose credibility. It will take Maddox time to get there. He needs a plan first and may ask for help from his good friends. Will Maddox free Jonathan from his misconceptions and show him he loves him even more?- 51 comments
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In Love With A Time Traveler
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In Love With A Time Traveler
Best Things--they made glorious love, well described, soul enriching--Jonathan wrote a wonderful love letter to Maddox Worst Things-Jonathan ran away and shockingly met Drew in his home for the holidays Now what ? Maddox needs a plan and maybe friends and has to reach Jonathan at his home. Maddox confronting Drew will be fascinating. I hope love conquers all- 51 comments
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I wonder what reaction Admiral Nelson will have when he learns a second man has committed suicide in Captain Granger's brig. Ramsey was the first when he was found being fucked by two Spanish officers. He hanged himself on his chains in the brig. He might charitably consider Granger a fierce some commander who would not accept breaking naval law, so the persons knew they faced a terrible outcome.
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Congratulations and good luck to you on your engagement !
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Why are snickerdoodles called snickerdoodles? “A New England favorite, these large, crinkly-topped sugar cookies are probably German in origin. Their name may be a corruption of the German word 'Schneckennudeln,' which translates roughly as 'crinkly noodles. '”
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The 11th Earl of Sandwich survives today and has started a sandwich chain in America. The chain is called--The Earl of Sandwich. One store just opened in my California town, John Montagu, 4th Earl of Sandwich (1718–1792) (eponymous inventor of the sandwich) John Montagu, 5th Earl of Sandwich (1744–1814) George John Montagu, 6th Earl of Sandwich (1773–1818) John William Montagu, 7th Earl of Sandwich (1811–1884) Edward George Henry Montagu, 8th Earl of Sandwich (1839–1916) The Honourable Victor Alexander Montagu (1841–1915) George Charles Montagu, 9th Earl of Sandwich (1874–1962) (Alexander) Victor Edward Paulet Montagu, 10th Earl of Sandwich (1906–1995) (disclaimed 1964) John Edward Hollister Montagu, 11th Earl of Sandwich (b. 1943)[
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Ok--the vid is on the Internet now--so a sharp computer person could find it using imaging software to find Jonathan's face on a vid or even find it when surfing posted on Xhamster or a similar porn site. Drew does not have to be involved --hmm. But, I still do not trust Drew. Also, the reveal of the vid from Drew's phone was suspicious -- Drew's phone was unlocked. I can see Drew leaving his phone open and unlocked so others could see his success and his ability to control goodie two shoes Jonathan. When a guy sees the vid on Drew's phone, then he could email it to himself and send it out to others. Once on the Internet, it can last and be watched for years if hot enough.
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Karl has passed his pilot's test and now he will be sent on a mission in a week. With some difficulty he wrote and notified the Hopkins. George's memories traumatized him. He might feel the horrors of war too soon. Jorgen and Kristian have not returned from their mission. His mission might turn deadly. But for now, Karl is staying innocent and not letting himself get afraid.
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Sounds like an awkard fight in a marriage--you never asked--such a shame Kage never asked
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Right, we all want snickerdoodles--the smell of them baking and the taste of warm ones right out of the oven---heavenlu Hey, the cinnamon is an added plus for diabetics, too
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Hooray! Over 100 comments in 4 hours
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I love warm snickerdoodles. They can be a balm to make things better. Plus, the cinnamon is healthy,
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Zulu was Michael Caine's first movie. He played a novice LT leading rifleman who fired volley after volley. The soldiers were surrounded, and the situation looked hopeless. Unknown to these besieged men, a much larger British force was wiped out a few days before by the Zulus. Fans loved one scene when the Zulus charged singing their chants and the Welsh sang Men of Harlech in response. The Zulu thought these British warriors were men of honor and did not massacre them as they could have given their superior numbers. It was based on a true story. Many Victoria Crosses ( England's highest's award for combat bravery )were awarded afterwards.
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Hey, the Welsh are fierce warriors as well as outstanding singers. Did not you see the movie Zulu where the outnumbered Welsh soldiers survived the onslaughts of Zulu fighters and won their respect?
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Well, they seem to have made a truce with Timok. They need each other and assume the Kardoval have Garjah They travelled to meet the rebels. If Timok is working with the Kardoval as a spy, Essell has given up his ability to save Garjah. Now we will see if the Timok is a true friend and if the rebels trust them and help them free Garjah.
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Three things Did Elijah slip up by not telling Cassiel that Kage was killed by a poisoned knife? He must have seen in in his body and on the floor when he dematerialized. Cassiel should be ready for a knife attack--even if he cannot be killed by one. You said you dropped hints. Was all the rambling by Cassiel about a wide range of shifters meant to educate Elijah in case he faced a different type of opponent ? Sebastian and his crew are not beholden or controlled by the Fae king. If warranted, they can go after and attempt to kill Huntington. They can go after his team and those who help hide the pups.
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Ok--You squared the circle. You tied up loose ends, made sense of what happened, gave Elijah the news that his true mate was out there if he accepted him, and connected him to Cassiel, Mr B to Kage. If any of your fans are in a forgiving mood, you went a long way to placating them with this new information and reasoning. Guess someone likes Thor--Wonder who? Cassiel looked like Thor--go figure Cassiel was very upset at Trevor's role. Was he sponsored by the brother who protected Huntington? I was impressed by Elijah's sensitivity concerning Kage and his willingness to speak plainly to Cassiel. He learned from Cassiel he has a bigger role to play. Cassiel wants Elijah to call him if needed. He likes Elijah. The boys are on the road to Montana and are expected. Will Trevor or a bad guy b try to stop and kill them along the way?
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I suggested and you said The future Queen Victoria ? Not through Anson Then Granger perhaps might meet her through her uncle, currently the Duke of Clarence and future king, who thinks very highly of Granger
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Chapter 29: Mountain March
scrubber6620 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 29: Mountain March
I especially liked finding out Vincent is going to get more and different shadow mage training by the EC mages in advance of his upcoming rigorous training with Yakob. Vincent needs lots of help to be ready for Stefano.- 30 comments
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So Granger might have two potential sexual partners on his voyage to London. He said he had had no partner on the voyage before the sauna and his libido was quite highly charged. Anson could be fired up by his experience with Granger and want more knowing they both will only certainly available until the ship reaches London. They can practice music in the captain's cabin and more fun could follow. Fizgerald might worry Nelson will want him back when the Calliope reaches Nelson's fleet so has little time to act on his desires for Granger. We will see how Mark handles Granger's sexual opportunities IF they are presented to him.
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Thank you Mark--I love mysteries So clues will happen along the way and we need to be observant
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So Mark are you willing to give us any more hints on who the prominent figure Devon Anson, 15 year's old ( born estimated 1786 ) will introduce Granger to---? I do not see his name listed as having a title later in life on the Wikipedia source. His not so distant relative was an admiral of the fleet and a series of ships and now a new submarine are named Anson. The Royal Navy is in his blood --but later relatives served in the Amy, including one against Napoleon. So Devon has connections to both services. Is it a military figure, an engineer, a scientist, an artist, a teacher, a writer, a politician, a member of the nobility,,,? Will the introduction happen in Northern Exposure or in a later story?
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I like your generous words of praise haines87 and your mages of a welcoming family homecoming. This 5 year journey began in 2017. I can guess that Mark might be in a position to end it in two or three chapters, perhaps extended if Granger captures a few ships or Nelson needs him. Of course, the pace and story arc are defined by Mark. Mark has created a magnificent, very fascinating tale of adventure, bravery and serious adversaries. I am looking forward to reading how Mark ties things together as he completes this story I am drawn to read stories about Granger every time they are posted. He has room to grow and serve his country and battles to win ! Thank you
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The future Queen Victoria ?
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Mark--any hints on who the person is ?
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