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  1. What highs and lows The future will be dangerous for Vincent--Stefan is back and has decided to take on the bearded Vincent. He does not know how well Vincent is trained or more than he has three affinities. Stefano might be surprised at Vincent's talents and fighting abilities. Stefano will be focused on killing Vincent and taking away a magic power he has. Vincent is going to have many powerful people in his corner. Key personal relationships in Owensville are developing very well, Dave and Stacy are Heather and Gwendolyn and Tierny and Morrine are enjoying the new lives free from immediate problems and each couple is in love and committed to each other as humans and shifters/vampires, I love their ending scene where Tierny and Morrine are in lust ready to make love and become mates. Morrine wants a child and they both are going to do their best to create one.
  2. scrubber6620

    Chapter 61

    Now we know why Tony was upset by the representation of the village, He and his wife were wronged and kicked out. His wife's father vehemently opposed their marriage and took retribution on Tony and his family. The father and his wife have died and the village now thinks he was wrong. Carmella believes the village folk would welcome them back, She is going to talk with her friend Tony's wife. Maybe , the pain can be taken away. Armand has signed papers at the orphanage. Colin does not know this. Armand has asked Colin to consider adoption as a concept without any person mentioned. Colin said he would think about it. What will he say when Colin tells him what he has done without telling him? Has he already agreed to adopt Thomas or at least taken a first step at adoption.
  3. scrubber6620

    Chapter 40

    From Chapter 39 Evelyn is a new board member and will be attending her first meeting on March 9th Will commented----"He smiled at me. “You are correct. I have made another change to the board.” “You have?” I asked. Grand didn’t look surprised, so Stef had obviously talked to him about it. “One of the independent members resigned, and I am going to replace him with Evelyn Somers,” he said. I smiled at that because I really liked Evelyn. She had been Robbie’s assistant at Anders-Hayes, the production company we used to own, and had now worked her way up to operations manager. “I’m excited to see her,” I said, then a thought sparked in my brain. “You think she could help Tony get a job in the industry?” Tony was a huge film nut. “If she cannot, I certainly can,” Stef said, then got this seductive voice and attitude. “I am not sure he would be willing to pay my fee.”
  4. scrubber6620

    Chapter 5

    What a critical, intense send off from the orphanage! Both the head nun and his friend Jill worry about him being corrupted and killed, We lean the he is taking Jill with him. They are a pair and feel connected. The sister discusses Van's sexual relationship with a male tutor. Van felt they both were in love and hated the sister for firing the music teacher. Tomorrow van begins to see the dimensions of his inheritance, He should start learning about those who want to take it all away from him. The next period of weeks and months will be serious and contentious and so new. Who can he trust ? Van could live over 1000 years. He is building a career and place in society for the extreme long haul. Good luck with your schooling. I am sure you will be busy.
  5. scrubber6620

    Chapter 40

    Stef is really integrating major forces in Hollywood. He is being sought out to re-buy a movie production company and a to fund the creation of a comprehensive talent agency that might , in part, have some artists for movies. Sounds like synergy--and a man who has a vision, Soon any problems will be potentially more of execution if things go as planned. Adding to this mix and enabling the new approaches are important personal relationships. Good friends are not forgotten and will be helped out. As an example of this tight knit network, Evelyn who proposed the new Anders-Hayes deal is soon to be attending her first board meeting of the family foundation. She is trusted. Will is going to bring her up to date on what he has going on examining staff morale and a potential CEO problem. Evelyn as a very senior manager of active , intense business will be sensitive to the importance of staff morale. She has dealt with staff problems in the past and right now she is working with a ineffective, non-constructive CEO. She will read what is emailed to her with more than normal concern and insight Stef, Evelyn and Will briefly discussed the March 9th foundation meeting “Excellent,” Stef said, then stood up to end the meeting. “I am looking forward to seeing you ( Evelyn) on March 9th. Will is working diligently to make sure it is a very exciting meeting.” “I am,” I said to her with a smile. “If you want, I can update you on that.” “I would appreciate that,” she said with a smile, probably remembering what a pain in the ass I’d been when I’d been younger. I got her email address and then ushered her out of the room.
  6. You said-- I imagine Jake enjoyed himself, but having your partner run away from you after sex must be concerning! Not to mention he was told things that are hard to swallow. Jake cares about Nic, He knows he is in pain, Jake has helped his sister with her attacks Won't Jake try to reach out and help Nic. Heck, even having more intense sex can be therapeutic. But it is your story and people. I will await your next ideas
  7. scrubber6620

    Chapter 40

    Amazing--Stef is at the center of so many systems and is a consummate networker with vision and real money. Will this time was his student or apprentice as he worked through potential deals. Stef had a very extensive knowledge of the key players and liked to link up situations. Stef caught what was essential with an Anders-Hayes deal. The company is not in good shape. He trusted Evelyn( and did not yet mention a board position at the family foundation). He seemed to ask the right questions and got the answers that made sense to him. He is not letting emotion rule his mind. Evelyn had a plan for success. Stef and Will met with Cody and Stef gave his terrific career advice and a potential new role with a new business, Things rapidly turned optimistic. Will listened and learned .He agreed to a new party with Cody and Darius. He has a hotel room to cover him while he is in town for more parties this weekend. No word from Zach yet. I bet Will's bed won't be empty anyway.
  8. You said---Working on it! Hopefully by Sunday, if not, early next week. The creative juices are waning Good Luck. You have a appealing creative gift and I hope you find new inspiration Your chapter ended ominously. Jake is called to the office. He should be safe and should not crack. JHe should be feeling awesome from his last sex session. Jake and Nic had great sex bareback on a new connection level and Jake showed he better understood and really cared for Nic when he had a panic attack. They should have more sex soon elsewhere--say after school- to better recover from the pressure they are under. They might talk afterwards if not kept to the time limits of classes at school. Jake has to get close to NIc and maybe mention his sister's problems and her need to get away from a bad situation with a girl and her drugged bf Amos. Nic will take this shocking revaluation from there ,I bet.
  9. scrubber6620

    Chapter 13

    Wow--we now have motives by the characters and then suggested ulterior motives by the author Can't we just get along? Nah-it would not be fun
  10. scrubber6620

    Chapter 13

    Ok--this is the calm before the storm--with some great blow jobs to add spice Kage and Elijah said their piece. We saw insights into tactics and motivation. Elijah is closer to Kage than he realizes. He wants to help him take out Huntington, Kage under constant pressure relents and says he will ask his boss if and how Eliljah can help-from home. I bet his boss will want a more active role for Elijah. Kage has also not thought yet that Elijah could be at risk at home without his protection. Home may not be safe The protected one said--- “Thank you, Kage. I just want…no, I just need you to understand this is something I feel like I have to do. It started in Idaho, and I don’t know where it’s going, or when it’s going to end, but I have to see it through.” “I think I get it. I’m pretty sure I’d feel the same if the roles were reversed. I still want you safe and to stay here, but I think I’d be okay with you helping me gather and sort through all the information I get.” We may see that a team is formed and Elijah has a more active role. Kage's boss might see a use for Elijah when he studies Huntington and his habits in greater detail. The boys might be starting up their planning for a complex Mission Impossible or even a simple Day Of The Jackal assassination operation . Could this be the genesis of a team that lasts?
  11. scrubber6620

    Chapter 64

    Two further points-- Granger gave Pitcarin figuratively more rope to hang himself and be insubordinate to another superior officer. He is being held and guarded in the orlop away from his former room with other officers. He won't be a pox on morale. Written reports are being sent to Granger as evidence --perhaps for a court martial. Mark, you gave this a better military' action and solution. I have been too bloodthirsty and wanted an immediate solution. Matters dealing with sexuality are evolving. Daventry was not happy with his experience on shore with a lady of easy virtue. He expressed the opinion that Fitzgerald was wise to leave, He will not have a reason to doubt Fitzgerald's interest in women. Tomorrow in the sauna Granger and Fitzgerald may become intimate and not worry about or cause any whispers . Taking Douglas to the sauna the next day will appear to be a further mentoring experience and not show he singled out Fitzgerald for special treatment. Anson who is Fitzgerald's midshipmen may seek advice about an "evil " matter from Granger. Will Granger think about his experience as a midshipman with his first LT and Captain? Granger can be an excellent teacher at the level Anson wants and give him a healthy perspective on sex and other related matters ( if sex with men is the subject he calls evil) as he carries out his career.
  12. scrubber6620

    Chapter 64

    Granger was masterful and generous and good hearted. You have threaded the needle so he showed his humanity and leadership qualities and demand for naval command standards, He can accept he was wrong and act to correct it. As Daventry later said, Granger sought to counsel and improve the performance of his first LT. Daventry thought many other captains would not do this. Granger effectively taught him and LT Douglas began to act as he should towards others. Douglas handled Pitcarin when he returned and did not show proper respect. Granger only stepped in at the end to order Pitcarin confined and guarded. I think he is being set up for a court marshal; when the ship meets the fleet. News from home was mostly good, Granger thinks he will get at least part of his Aunt's estate and expects her lawyer wants to be sure he is not anti-Catholic. Granger may have a home for his soon to be displaced tenants. Daventry found out he was being given full credit for the Russia success and he knew it was not true. Granger was also key and Daventry was troubled that he was being ignored. Granger soothed him and said he was not bothered. He claimed he had enough fame. I also think he knew the government did not want any military connection with the succession or coup in Russia, Daventry as a diplomat would seem benign and not a plotter. The only discordant theme was that Granger said to Davenbtry that he was not sure of Lord St Vincent's attitude toward him Granger is serving as a stronger , more balanced and insightful Captain, He can take charge and lead and teach and inspire and win respect. His sauna schedule has been expanded from Fitzgerald to Douglas and Anson is troubled and may seek Granger out for advice, Years ago in my state . Governor Arnold S "the terminator" had a tent a set up outside the capital and invited people he wanted to schmooze and influence to smoke cigars with him. Granger is using the sauna.
  13. scrubber6620

    Chapter 63

    I am thinking of as a somewhat similar situation. Granger commanding a ship in war off enemy land was faced with an enemy officer who broke his parole on ship and knifed an native leader. He was attempting to kill a man Granger ordered protected. When ask why he did it, the enemy officer said God told him to do so. Granger did not accept this defense. Granger had him thrown overboard far from land and said it would be up to his God to save him. Pitcarin , I think, is on a knife's edge, He can offer matters of extenuation and mitigation. What did the former ship's captain tell him? However, Pitcarin was clearly wrong to not follow orders from Granger and committed gross insubordination. But ,he first has to say so. When facing Granger and perhaps the other officers in his cabin will he accept and state that he was wrong and will he be believably contrite and promise to accept his new understanding that the marines are not his . Will he affirm that he was wrong to not follow his orders. Or, will he refuse to accept that what he did not do was wrong since the marines are his and not the ship's captain? If he refuses to change his views, how can he be trusted in the future?
  14. I suggest----Ray and Dex and Kane need to bring the other three love birds together to talk and shout and state fully their fears and issues and then maybe reconcile . I hope they take an active peacemaking role soon. Maddox is rightfully hurt and wrongfully jealous. Can he separate the two? Can he realize that Xpress is malicious and always tries to find or create a scandal? When he learns Connor is behind it, he will lose faith in the story. The longer this cauldron bolls and bolls , the more trouble and harsh words can be said and scares can intensify . It can be the harder to make up and take back any painful assertions.
  15. scrubber6620

    Chapter 60

    Very nice and mostly satisfying. Old friends from Italy were reunited. Armand worked his magic and brought people together. We still do not know why Tony is mad but should know the answer soon. I hope the problems can go away with Carmella's help. Also, Carmella rightly thinks Thomas belongs as a son with Armand and Colin. She thinks he should be adopted by them. Armand ponders the idea. He will discuss Thomas with Colin.
  16. Joie J. I like your idea that Maddox will find the note Jonathan left in his book. See he was not hiding his past visit. I hope he wrote something touching and heartfelt to Maddox. Maybe the note could start a thaw and reconsideration.
  17. What a touching communication over the BCC to his family. Karl spoke from the heart simply and earnestly. His trip to London moved him and made him think of those he left behind in the town. He was fortunate to be included in the meeting with Churchill. Three new Spitfires will be bought for a Danish squadron. Maybe, Karl will fly one of them.
  18. Wow--what a mess--nicely done--a full on soap opera....... Maddox wildly over reacted to the news and misread the situation thinking Rusty had stolen his former boy friend as Xpress tattled. He had it out with both Jonathan and Rusty. Staying here. Looking intimate in pics. Having Jonathan's sweater--all tore Maddox apart. As commented, it v burned inside his chest By not coming clean to Maddox the boys are at fault and the rest of Xpress driven drama is made up BS. But getting a resolution , apologies and a reunion are far away. Maddox has to burn out. I hope Johnathan and Maddox do not say anything they cannot take back. Along this rocky path, we now know shallow Connor is behind Xpress and Maddox's friends Dex and Kane are seeing clearly that the situation is not what Maddox assumes it is. They can begin to help Maddox see things in a new light. I am looking forward to see how you dig all three out of the holes they have dug
  19. scrubber6620

    Chapter 12

    OK--so we could have 14 7 day periods to go or so
  20. scrubber6620

    Chapter 12

    40 chapters at 2 a week would be 20 weeks give or take an emergency or personal need or covid Next time a chapter is published we will have read 12 chapters over 6 weeks We could have 14 more weeks to read chapters if the schedule is kept with precision--things may come up and go wrong so 14 weeks can be just an estimate There are 168 hours in a week. 14 weeks total 2352 hours
  21. scrubber6620

    Chapter 12

    And Thor is my boyfriend. kbois--You are one very fortunate lady
  22. scrubber6620

    Chapter 12

    If Kasar realizes he is being targeted for killing, he might increase his efforts and amount of killers to take out Elijah and add his friends, Tyler and his family. Perhaps if Kasar is killed the danger will not end. The killers could seek revenge and carry out their final orders
  23. scrubber6620

    Chapter 12

    OK kbois--you said--You know what they say about assuming Yes assuming can make some as ass But as night follows the day, it is true to our human nature to want to assume when you write such compelling stories that intrigues us --it is your fault-mostly--lol
  24. scrubber6620

    Chapter 12

    If Elijah stays behind even with other bodyguards and does find the laptop, he could be immediately targeted for death by any forces Kasar has watching him. Assuming the laptop or its equivalent really exists.
  25. scrubber6620

    Chapter 39

    As Mark envisions JJ he is a " high maintenance prima donna" who is loved by his family. His absence is not missed for periods of time. I think Will has to work out his life and relationships and that is rightly the current Gap Year focus. JJ will add whole new dynamic and could consume all the available air for a while. JJ is finishing high school. His family should be turning to him and at some point figuring who would be best to help him take his next steps. Will he fly to California and seek educational and money advice or will others make the trek to NY? Stef and Brad are setting up a NY office. They have enough reasons to fly to NY or have a plane available to fly anyone to CA.
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