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As for sex in the tent at the campsite--I know the boss won't give anything away now We all certainly learned how turned on each guy was when they traded blow jobs But it has been two weeks with no sex play--wow Is it not time in the tent at the campsite to explore new sexual acts that will connect them even more If I get a vote, they should try trading off making love to each other
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drpaladin said-- "With an actual cliff present, I don’t see how you could resist.' A cliff is near the campsite It could be a clear cliffhanger in the story--figuratively and literally. It sounds very interesting and possibly shocking, too.
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"The offspring is going to have a lazy eye, twelve fingers, twelve toes and a third nipple. " BTW--who said this and brought up feet by saying 12 toes ? Who are you giving the foot fetish--Elijah, Kage ? Someone has to put themselves in the corner--just saying...
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Love the family dynamics, The tough mama really loved her family and they loved her. Kage was smooth and was a delightful pest controller. He charmed the kids and mama. He was approved . I am glad mama didn't ask Kage to help her get rid of some ants or wasps. I think I would have loved her spicy meat loaf--but it would need to be accompanied by milk to really cool things down. So the house and garage are cleaned out and searched. The laptop is not around, They are at a dead end. Where to search next ? The camping spot is secluded and well known to Tyler and Elijah. It's has got to be a draw for anyone wanting to kill Elijah without interruption or police, But, right now Elijah isn't worried and being killed, He is worried about being close to Kage and hoping for more sex . Elijah has to be extremely horny and almost cross eyed. Kage took him to a new world of pleasure and them left him excited and wanting lots more. They have been so close in bed ,but not done anything sexually since two weeks ago, if they do have passionate sex, will Kage be distracted and not be able to detect intruders?
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Thay are perfect for each other--wow--in and out of bed
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You as a drug supplier--mm--CJ planning to be the President--what career chioices !
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Nice--the added text shows that the renovation and gallery projects are moving forward. A friend will visit and Colin and Armand will travel back to Europe to attend a wedding. Time has passed fast for Armand, He did not realize he and Collin would soon have their second anniversary.
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What Siblings Are For
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What Siblings Are For
When first we practice to deceive, what a tangled web we weave.... Maddox comes clean to his parents and causes a ruckus. His father and mother are shocked--His mother cannot accept that Maddox has a boyfriend. But, his sibling accept Maddox's statements and support him. At this point, He still has to eat the big dinner tomorrow so there is time for more discussion. Maddox will be on the firing line under pressure. But the lying between Maddox and starts when Maddox calls Jonathan and he implies he is along on campus. Rusty asks him to not tell Maddox he is present. He knows it will upset Maddox. That will fall apart easily when Maddox gets to the campus and holiday tales are exchanged. Rusty and Jonathan will be forced to lie more Plus, Rusty will make a big mistake. He will wear Jonathan's hunter green cashmere sweater. When Maddox sees it, he will likely jump to conclusions , He will think Rusty and Jonathan are really too close and have been lying to him about their relationships and about being alone at Thanksgiving . Rusty did not have the sweater before the holiday. Maddox might get very vocal, and the boys will have their first big fight. The conflict won't be solved easily or fast. The mess will be of their own making. But talk of the fallout will likely be all over campus.- 51 comments
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Mailing the laptop to himself or to a friend to hold until requested back --hmm-Sounds like a method used by Perry Mason to hide material. Elijah's parents could have seen that option on an old show on cable TV. Just staying in the house, Elijah and Kage would be present when the holder calls for advice and/or the package is delivered. I think even with a wonderful birthday meal tonight to improve her mood, we are not going to be given a hint yet. Let us see in due time what crafty solution the author has devised
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In the intel business, there is term called specially compartmented intel. Information is segregated and protected so that if one source is discovered the others are hidden. For example, the pilot of the spy plane does not know the capabilities of his plane's sensors nor how any data is used and what is learned from his flight. If he is shot down, he cannot reveal other secrets. So, the scientists do not need access to data on the pups being sold. What part of the project Huntington has on his laptop is unknown. Its data may not be that obviously helpful to an outsider. I expect the buyers would demand anonymity and they might not be clearly named or located but given only coded references which may be identified only by the highest authority who has the key to the code --Huntington or his top aide-- and not a staff person.
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Just to clear the air--I agree with drpaladin that recording everything is not a good idea. People get in trouble for email and social media posts which are prejudiced or biased or sexually provocative--ask former Congressman Anthony Weiner who chatted with underage girls and posted his cock and bare chest We see in the news that one idiot apparently recorded his debauched drug and sex life and left the laptop to be repaired and now is in the possession of the FBI However, the status of the concerned Huntington laptop is not certain. Is it the only copy or a backup for one found in the mine? Has it really been found when the parents were killed and are the killers just removing anyone who could connect Huntington to the laptop? We need more information and final answers are going to take time, it seems.
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OK--the boys have accepted the renovation bids and will go ahead having the apartments renovated for a renting to students in the fall term. Armand is exploring what is needed to protect the gallery and apartments and club from fire. He talked with the local fire department and got good advice. What I think is missing is working an insurance specialist. Both the gallery and club buildings and their contents should be insured. As part of that process, the agent would make security and fire protection recommendations . If the recommendations are followed, then the insurance costs will be lower.
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Happy, Happy Birthday Kbois Hope your day is great and you have a warm pleasing celebration with those you love.
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You said--"And there wouldn't have been seven Harry Potter books if Dumbledore had come clean right from the start. " And Harry would not have been so tormented..... OK--You have a valid reason.. You need space to develop your creative ideas and make a rich, complex mystery and entertaining narrative and this method of commenting serves to get us wonderfully connected into a community and also takes us on to some serious reflections and wild goose chases. You can't tell us too early which are which.
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You devil kbois--you did not answer the question about the laptop found in the mine with all the pup data If it was the same laptop and the parents had a backup copy, then Kasar's goons are just cleaning up loose ends to keep his involvement hidden. They just need to make sure anyone tied to the family and laptop is killed. The data is already available.
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Just for a thought for a down the road outcome---Down the road, could Kage and Elijah be a team working together either for Kage's boss or Sebastian? They have skills that can help each other on investigations. I could see Kage 's love for Elijah might cause him to leave his boss and work for Sebastian if offered an alternative. But, then Sebastian has to be brought into this laptop holding data on the hybrid pups matter ( as he should be).
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BTW--not quite monkey sex between Kage and Elijah but they are getting there--Love all the intimate , approaching romantic play. They are a fun couple who are slowly realizing how connected they are becoming.
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First , thanks for addressing some of the issues raised in past chapter comments. We are still left with not knowing what Kasar is doing and why Elijah's parents have the laptop. Their continued searches could not find the laptop. Second, thanks for the great blowjob scenes. Both guys teased and pleased each other. The expert Kage was amazed by Elijah's blow job talents and sucking strength. He realized at the end he was committed to Elijah fiercely. How could he leave him? "As he tried to catch his breath, Kage came to the unequivocal conclusion that he was truly screwed."
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Chapter 23: Shifter Sorrow
scrubber6620 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 23: Shifter Sorrow
I wish you success in resolving your issues as soon as you can. You show us in your writing that you are creative and considerate and can think up ways to tackle tough issues. I view this chapter as mostly revolving are family and friendship. Dirk and Ingles have better defined their professional relationship and ways to operate at work. They will be a good team with uncommon, useful skills. The bad guys in town will be at a disadvantage. Vincent excelled at his evaluator's job and realized it was tough to be separated from Mason. Vincent showed what a good son and friend he was. Vincent took time after his job was done to see and update Caleb's happy parents. They had a warm and friendly conversation. He also visited his parent's grave site and both he and his wolf talked to them . He has reasons to come back and will encourage Caleb and his family to visit. It will be interesting to see Vincent meet the Mason's huge family. As an only child, he will be on new ground and bit disoriented remembering everyone. The ending segment promised a resolution of the housing mess in New York City. Harold was surprised by visit first thing in the morning by the head vampire and alpha of the pack. They must have the data and must now be ready to confront him and end the corruption, I am looking forward to seeing how you describe how his reign of evil ends. The undercover investigation worked, and he was caught off guard.- 28 comments
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Ok how about a 24 sided room--with 48 corners to cover all cases?
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We could be using more than one corner.--good idea , Chris191070 How about a hexagon-sided environment? One corner could be reserved for anyone mentioning feet?
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Another nasty fight ahead and the lead bad guy is the odds-on favorite to bust our hero Any chance of a rescue? Damn--how do our good guys get out of this circle of violence?
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Sounds like this is the start of a beautiful relationship--what can go wrong?
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BTW--Elijah was carefully and sensitively taught about anal sex as a top. They have lots more to do. Maybe, they will even get primeval and throw themselves at each other. I can't wait to use a term you invented for the best friend of the real hero to say in another story for gay guys fiercely getting it on --full on money sex. Although, I hope Elijah does not feel motivated by a passionate Kage to turn into a monkey--lol.
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According to Kaiser Health News this morning "In America, Cancer Patients Endure Debt on Top of Disease--Medical breakthroughs mean cancer is less likely to kill, but survival can come at an extraordinary cost as patients drain savings, declare bankruptcy, or lose their homes, a KHN-NPR investigation finds." I think Henry is now saddled with paying up for all of Mae's medical bills for her extended cancer care--which had to be sizeable. He must have borrowed against the house since it was his only real asset, and his job did not pay much. He must not be able to pay the higher debt charges and will have to sell his house.
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