Jack Scribe

Hi Adonelos. A big welcome to this diverse site. Nibble all you like. Hope to see you posting in the forums often. Jack

Hi BE, Welcome to GA! Graeme, JSmith and TalonRider offered excellent advice. First, ask JSmith (Joe) to designate you as an "Author." Then, it would be interesting for you to post a short portion of your story in Sneak Peeks. In that your story's protagonist has an unusual condition - not that rare, I was a camp counselor years ago and had a couple of teen bed wetters - it might be wise to write a brief prologue. You have described conditions about some of the characters and attitudes. A plot lays out the main direction of the story. What the neighbor does with the information after the incontenance is revealed would be considered more of a plot. Fatherless boy and a friendly neighbor (a man?) father figure? Maybe there's a love interest between the neighbor and the mother? A younger brother who drives the older brother nuts could be fun. Once you're designated as an "Author", do visit the Writer's Corner and Editor's Corner often. There are some excellent topics concerning writing with which you could participate. There are so many things to consider: punctuation, typos, tense, dialogue, spelling. Are you going to write in first person? Although I now prefer third person, it is usually easier to start out in first person. Seeking out an editor is key to any author's success. Don't be shy in getting advice. Finally, pick out a fun avatar and think of creating something in the "signature" area that says something about you. There's a good group of men and women of all ages and stripes with whom you'll enjoy interacting here at GA. Good luck. Look forward to seeing your story. Jack

Ewww, to much information! Very funny, Viv! Maybe it's a bill for the boxed potatoes that Morgan didn't like? Jack

Hmmm. Two guys dancing and stripping. That theme sounds familiar. Nice chapter. Hawaii will be a nice change of pace. But they must travel to the airport, first. I think we can get a chapter out of that. Chase scene, Speedos only. And Eric must be about ready to reappear. Jack

Damn, these guys from Oz. It only just turned the 20th in London a half-hour ago. And out here in the California desert, I'm getting ready for a dinner date: it's still the 19th. Early Bird specials, donchu know? Anyway, Viv, a most Happy Birthday. Jack

You just wear long, loose boots and have at it. Seriously...GOOD JOB, CJ! Now, if we can encourage you to post in a forum once in a while. Come out of your shell. Jack

I draw your attention to a very thoughtful article - rather scholarly with some tongue-in-cheek humor - that is must reading. The author, who is gay, explores and magnifies the facts behind the biological causes for sexual orientation. Here is provocative sentence from this lengthy piece: Politically, there is something very powerful about the notion that sexual orientation is a matter of biology, not choice. In poll after poll, of the one third of Americans who believe homosexuality is socially influenced, in other words

Welcome on your return! Saw the show Wicked yesterday in LA/Hollywood. The best line, when one of the characters - a goat - disappears, is said by a guard in the Wizard's court: "A goat is on the lamb". Jack

If it's appropriate, track down the 'old man' this weekend and wish him a Happy Father's Day. I look back and regret I didn't try a little harder to let my father know I loved him. To those dads who have successfully dealt (are dealing) with GBLT issues, on both sides of the fence, a special salute. Jack

Oh, come on. Leo loses his baby fat and gets ugly? Jeez, he's turning a ripe 33 in November. The Departed was the first grown up role where he had an adult presence. I wouldn't mind being in a sandwich with Leo and his buddy, Tobby. While were on the subject of celebrity crushes, can I cast a BIG one vote for Mario Lopez?

Update? I won't even say, "I told you so." Here he is, out in the wilderness, checking out his forum and making another post (number 7,000?). BTW, be wary of bears. Don't do it with honey. Enjoy the rest of your vacation. Jack

The 61st Annual Broadway Tony Awards last night was not only a superb production (I know...like all award shows, a little long) with awesome talent, but I lost track of how many winners publicly kissed their partners and expressed a vocal thanks in acceptance speeches. The unexpected winner of Best Actor in a musical, David Hyde Pierce, publicly acknowledged his partner of 24 years. Cool!

Happy 78th, Bob! Here's to many more healthy birthdays! Fonduely, Jack

The 24/7 news coverage of these social freaks is a national embarrassment. Nicole (Smith, Ritchey...take your pick), Brittany (and the beaver-wink), Lindsey...blah, blah. We are fascinated with these PR ploys and these stories sell. Just to straighten out the facts about her status as "heiress". First, the grandfather, Barron, has the major bucks. He has a very private brother (Eric) who has retired and is a philanthropist. There is the first split in the Conrad Hilton fortune. Barron's share is around 1 billion. Rick, Paris' dad, is one of eight children of Barron's. However, Rick is independently wealthy due to his successful real estate company. So, with Paris being one of four children, her share is probably around 30 million. Not too shabby but why would she would allow herself to be videotaped in amateur porn is beyond rationality. Crazy, isn't it? This most recent five-day episodic television "news" coverage is probably Ms. Hilton's undoing. She really comes off as the spoiled, self-centered brat she is.

I received the following email from a reader. This was in response to a scene in a recent chapter of Life's a Grind. I thought the message was topical and relevant. To think that this memory has been carried around for years. Wow! It is shared with his permission. I feel compelled to comment on the attempted rape in chapter 15. It is both graphic and portrays what really happens when hatred is allowed to run unchecked. I am 63 years young. This episode brought back memories of a similar incident in 1961. In 1963 I was a junior in high school and worked at the local Newberry

Very astute observations, Colinian. Some lost attachments return at the darnest times. My best friend from high school found me through a Google search last year and now I'm re-plugged into classmates from several years ago. We'll all get together at our ____th class reunion. I used the name of an old, lost friend in one of my stories. It's a rather unusual name and I got an email from him to my pen name account. He was curious about who would be using his name in a gay-themed novella. When he discovered who I was, we had a good laugh and will see each other this summer sometime. I've found that you have to work hard to maintain attachments. Most - not some - aren't willing to take the time or effort to initiate this. Guess that's the reason that so many people feel lonely and withdrawn. Mark, I can't imagine losing your "future". It certainly tests a parent's strength. Jack

Rewarding chapter, fun pool time with Speedos and more curious danglers to munch on while CJ in communing in the wilderness. What's behind the brick wall in the tunnel? Hmmm. I can't believe that CJ won't be lurking around with a laptop in his tent.

My God, this thread is more fun than "Young and Restless" and "Days of Our Lives" with a little Corbin Fisher thrown in. I'm in Joe's camp...kind of. I like "looking good" as part of the package. Not runway model material, but someone who is trim and cleans up well. How about a movie and sex every day? Jack

To quote Wikipedia: Even though the producers seemed confident of a second season,[3] the series was cancelled by CBS in May 2007,[4] confirmed by a May 15, 2007 report in Variety[5] and the following day by The Wall Street Journal.[6] The ratings were down 25% following the nearly three-month hiatus and subsequent return opposite American Idol.[7] During its one season run, it ranked 48th, with an average of 9.5 million viewers in the United States.[8] Edit: Wiki has updated their posting: On June 5, 2007, Jericho creator Carol Barbee announced that CBS is discussing the possibility of the show's return for an eight-episode mid-season run.[25] Let's hope they yield to the public outcry.

Happy 28th Birthday Luc! Look forward to many more stories. Jack

Now: 1) Jericho - just cancelled 2) Sopranos 3) Brothers and Sisters Ever: 1) Seinfeld 2) MTM 3) Sex in the City

JK Rowling just got a whole lot richer. It's not like she is already richer than God...and Oprah. JK has agreed to a $1 billion Harry Potter theme park to open in Orlando, FL in 2009. The theme park will be part of Universal Orlando. It will be called "Wizarding World of Harry Potter." It will feature locations featured in the book as well as rides and shops.

Just in. Here is a candid photo of CJ and his editorial team working out the final draft of Ch 29.

A truely intriging beginning. Is it possible to be a little more specific about the whys of the "isolation" observation? Does this relate to the next highlighted sentence? And finally, dreams of what? Modeling, being a musician or life in general. L.A. is full of wannabes in every shape, form, color and degree of talent. Just living in that town can be isolating. Enjoy the clash of the two guys. Look forward to more! Jack

LOVED THE CHAPTER. "I say, humph, praise the Lord and pass the porno," the Rev growled in the background. To me, the dribble of one line that stated the data stick "contains thousands of..." is an important key. In a multiple choice test, this might be thousands of: 1. Credit Card numbers and porn site clients. 2. Pictures of nude pictures of Joseph Gordon-Levitt (For Myr's amusement). 3. Inspired song lyrics (For Bondwriter). 4. Shepherds Pie recipes using goat meat. Jack