Ivor Slipper
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LOL. Wouldn't be surprised if the electric chair still existed in Texas in Texas then. And we sure ain't in Kentucky!🙂
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Appreciate the encouraging comment.
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You make a good point there @weinerdog
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I think kids of around their age are probably reluctant to trust their parents to do the right thing and perhaps believe they can do better on their own. Yes, Ethan's father is trying to look out for Wayne. He can see in him a lot of the same attribute as Ethan can. As for the message from his father, I'm sure Wayne will work out what it means in time.
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Thanks Chris. They're working on it for sure.
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Love the gif @drsawzall! It takes time for plans to be formulated and put into action. Let's hope it isn't a case of 'best laid plans often go awry'.
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“What!” I exclaimed. “What the fuck!” I heard Wayne almost shout. “Quiet down!” Willy said loudly in response. “I don't want my mom to hear and come down here. She's already a bit puzzled that I brought you two home as she hardly knows you.” “Sorry, Willy, but that was one heck of a shock. Are you certain about this Jerry?” He shrugged, “As sure as I can be from what I heard, but I can't prove it.” I took a deep breath. “Alright, let's assume it's true. How could Jackson get
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Chapter 9 is in the cosmetic shop having its nails polished and a facial prior to release, probably tomorrow.
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My hope was in setting this story back in time, some of the happenings described were feasible while at the same time memories would be blurred enough not to make any errors on facts obvious to readers.
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It's playing, that's for sure! I suspect that in Texas terms, there'll be a round up in due course.
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I wasn't knocking the suggestion as such. I know myself it is good when readers are involved enough in a story to make comments. But as you said in an earlier reply - 'there are too many now to keep track of'. If you've got that problem I imagine a lot of your readers also have it.
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It would have simplified matters has Mr Berenson taken a tape recorder with him. It's not really surprising Wayne's father didn't recognise him. The boy would have changed a lot in three years. Jerry has a real problem about saying anything officially because of his brother's involvement. He is already worried about what he has told Ethan & Wayne. Perhaps with his brother being the athletic one and him the nerd, his father's affections may lie with the older brother? Thanks for the comments @travlbug
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There isn't a specific date to the story, but in my mind it is set in the mid to late 80s, definitely not the 60s. By that time the tech we now have was just beginning to appear. It is though before the era of cell phones and I did say earlier that the internet was just starting. I hope some of the other points you raise will be answered as the story develops.
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Lots of questions there @drsawzall. The only one that can be answered at this point is the same one as @Clancy59 asked above and which I answered there. The other questions should hopefully be answered as the story unfolds. Whether you find those answers satisfactory remains to be seen.
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If any student had ever been paddled pants down it would almost certainly be Wayne. As he made a point of wearing heavy jeans to school, I believe it hasn't happened here. There is obviously a kink at work. Who knows how it started? We may never know the answer to that, but it does look fairly certain that the ringleader is the VP, Jackson.
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Thanks for the compliment @Philippe. I'm glad that you can both love and hate the characters. We will have to wait and see how things develop, but filming has definitely taken things to another level.
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You can have your rant Gary, especially as you have personal experience. In the circumstances I appreciate you reading the story.
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Evidently they've made sure their contract doesn't have any holes in it 🙂
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Only they can answer that question, although quite possibly one leads to the other.
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It sure does look that way, horrible though that would be.
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For a change school that day was uneventful. I couldn't wait for the day to pass, get home and find out if my dad had been able to meet with the Principal. Mind you, there was another reason for wanting to get home – I needed some more of that cream on my butt! It had become more and more uncomfortable as the day progressed while sitting on the hard school chairs. Wayne duly took care of my butt and also of my dick. He raised no objections when I returned both favors. Dad made us wait until
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If it was in the top 400 of boys names starting with R, I wonder where that puts it in the overall list? Somewhere in the top 40,000 perhaps? As for the familial connections, I can only say - you don't want much do you?😀
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I guess it did the job in a Flash...
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Great final chapter. Had me a bit worried there for a while, but the moth finally got repelled. I have just one question - won't fireworks on Myer's Hill seem a bit tame after all this?
