Ivor Slipper
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Just when everything was going swimmingly...😁
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Rick's had his perfect day, but will he be plumbing the depths tomorrow??
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Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Ivor Slipper commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Dang! So I can't claim the credit for it.🙂 -
Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Ivor Slipper commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
So Boone & Coy ride off into the sunset (theoretically speaking) as the curtain comes down on the story. I guess all good things do have to come to an end, but this has been an excellent story and a very enjoyable read. Mondays are not going to seem the same.... Thanks, Gary. -
Like Rick I sure discovered a lot from reading that chapter! Seems all of the party are enjoying a great day out. Wise of the organisers to place the bagpipes a good distance apart from everything else though. 🙂
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Boone & Coy have come a long way. Not only in terms of the distance they had to travel but also in their relationship. Now though they have finally reached 'The Promised Land'. Just hope they do eventually end up sitting in their rockers on each other's porch.
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Differently cute!
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Well, you might have seen Boone and/or Coy doing a different sort of haymaking 🥊
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Good to see the pair have bought their land and started acquiring the necessary hardware to work it. Bit surprised though they didn't buy those scythes while they were in town so they could begin the haymaking.
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Chapter 17 Lessons Learned
Ivor Slipper commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 17 Lessons Learned
A beautifully crafted mind blowing chapter. Well worth having to wait a week for. -
I have used the angry icon on occasions, but as @Headstall said, it is to express 'anger' at the actions of a character in that particular chapter/story. I would not consider using it to express anger at an author. Pity there can't be a difference between stories and forums where an expression of 'anger' almost certainly has a different meaning.
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Hmmm..... so why is Rita involved with Zoltan & Magda closing on the lodge? It appears her web has many strands.
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Your house had an oubliette?
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What a magical (in every possible sense of the word) story. Loved it from start to finish. And it was nice to spend time just relaxing with Charlie, Kippy and the gang without having to worry about any anti-social aliens up to no good. The image of Kontus wandering around being unable to use the hairdryer 🔌 is going to live with me for a long time I am though worried on two counts. Firstly, that you are about to get kicked out of the Magic Circle. Secondly, how the boys are going to explain their collection of unearthly gifts to their parents when they get back home for their second Christmas 🎄.
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Chapter 16 Explorations
Ivor Slipper commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 16 Explorations
At last the penny has dropped for both of them! No doubt in tent tonight they are both intent of taking things further... Enjoy it while you can boys as I see problems arising when you get back to town tomorrow. -
LOL! And a Happy Christmas to you too, Gary.
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That's not difficult in my case!
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Aah, that was sad - beautiful but sad. Guess it does no harm to remind most of us how lucky we are. Thanks to both of you for writing these stories.
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Heinrich senior and Rita need to be let loose together on Eagle Lake in a frail canoe - preferably when a storm is due 😜
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Cloud Nine perhaps?
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I thought they were out west not north. 🙂
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Gabe hot footed it away again. Perhaps there's a fire somewhere? Nicely done. 🙂
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Two adjoining plots does look the likely outcome - provided there isn't solid rock just below the surface. Coy sure is changing and getting to like the idea of settling down - with his friend.
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Yep, the taps nearly got turned on even before Mr Gonzales received his new bathroom!
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You could almost say Max found a shoulder to cry on. 🙂
