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I don't care how or by whom, but I want Don to suffer badly. Maybe Stephs dad can sue Don for all he is worth and give it to Robbie and Nathan as a wedding present!!! Jesus, I hate that Mother#$@%&!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I would not piss down his throat if his guts were on fire!!!

I very much liked this story and look forward to future volumes of the series. This story follows a younger rich kid that is a disappointment to his parents due to a perceived flaw in his abilities. As the story builds the characters develop into those we cheer for and those we curse and on occasion the characters may change groups. I recommend this story as it does an excellent job of building characters, developing society norms both good and bad and adding both crisis and relief as needed to enhance the plot. Give it a read and let the author know what you think!!!!

Great chapter. This one really made things move forward! I know the next chapters are already written, but I will still chime in for the Beta/Delta duo for a neighbor!!!!! It might even be possible for Vinny to stay "Alpha" of HIS land. Just subcontract everything out to his "New" beta and Delta 🤣. Now would not Stuerm piss in his fur with TWO gay lead packs as neighbors???????

This story is developing extremely well. Kailen needs to make it crystal clear to Lex that his ONLY chance to charm AND stay alive is to loose the domineering attitude! In this vain Lex needs a reminder that his sore arm does not even amount to a slap compared to what could happen. A puff of ashes blown into his face might get his attention. A much more respectful version of this might need to be mentioned to his dad...... Also remember, Kailens power is far different from his parents, so something different is in the works.....

Just like me in the mountains......

I agree with @drpaladin. Do we know how tech things work in the shadows?

Great chapter! With land comes power and with power comes conflict. It is almost assured that with a new alpha in a previously unclaimed territory, someone will eventually challenge for the land. Might it make more sense to keep the land and contract the oversight to someone else? Say a very capable retired alpha and beta team. Just a thought... As for alpha bigot... Might a reliable contact listening from the shadows (hmm) add to the evidence list for discipline of he who deserves it?

I saw this coming. I just have no idea of the issues as we have no point of reference. As everyone seems scared, concerned, sad, etc. there must be some hidden information in the rule book none of us has access to. I will not even try to speculate on how this is going to resolve going forward. The only thing I am sure of it that NOTHING is going to be able to split Mason and Vincent. With that said I am fairly sure that Lei, Elaine, Dave, Caleb, Ty, DIrk and many others will step forward to make the rules conform to the specifics. Add a few powerful mages into this equation and you, most likely, have a force that even the EQ will submit variance to..... Great work!!

Great chapter. I do feel for Vincent, but he needs to learn that there are times that require final actions. I am sure he will heal with time and friends. Mace will help greatly. Stacy is doing very well with how she was introduced to the supernatural. Wait till Vince takes her on a day trip to New York for a shopping spree on 5th Avenue. Well, the end of Kordell was much more humane than I wanted, but the end result was needed!!! Keep up the great work!

Gary has a talent with making words mean so much more. This story takes you on a coaster ride like no other. The torment and agony are described so realistically that they make the reader suffer the feelings of the characters. The real life actions and reactions make this story real! Read this and you will understand what a great author can create with words. Great work Gary!

Gary this was a wonderful story. I was so frustrated by Drake being such an idiot until the last two chapters!! Y did very well with this chapter. I really thought Jack was a 7 year old person right up to the leash dragging the ground. Bad Gary. Boo, Hiss, ... Aw shucks.....forgiven!!! Great writing buddy. Keep them coming.

Great to see the guys back in the exploration game. Caution and common sense is a very good idea for unexperienced galactic explorers. I am wondering why Mike has a dislike of oceans if he has no issue with lakes.

I know I am going to be dissapointed, but I want alpha a$$ hat to die very slowly with his guts shoved literally up his a$$ and his balls down his throat and Dave pi$$ing in his face!!! Yea I can be slightly vengeful 😇. I hate cliffhangers and that is one reason I seldom read works in progress... This chapter just proves my point! Hey Aaron, how about an early release on the next chapter 😢? Great chapter.

I actually liked this chapter except for Nicola the bitch!!! I am really hoping she gets knocked up by Mr. Lube. I think Robbie will make for a very good dad as he knows what it is like not to have one. Can you imaging having Nathan as a step father 🤣. Nice seeing you Nathan was a great line and Nathan fainting was perfect. I guess Nicola will get to clean her own bathroom....serves her right!

This was an interesting chapter. We now have a second god in the game and she is a wild card. Dave is moving forward and the spars are getting closer. Looking forward to the next chapter!

@Wesley8890, You just made me empty the Pepto.... I can't unread that comment 🤢. This was a good chapter! It is very nice to see Sue having a real moment and supporting Robbie! It will be very interesting to see Don implode. It won't really matter as there are professional cleaning companies that can even clean up that type of mess.....

Great chapter. I did like the before leaving warm up. I am in agreement with the majority on the above areas. I really want Wagner to be beat down and made to cry. Bullies need to be taught a lesson they never forget. Alpha Drego just gives off a bad stench. He may turn out to be a great ally, but I feel caution is a better first step. Stacy seems to good to be true or could it be Gwyn? I think something is a bit off with this quick forming relationship. Oh Well. We will find out more as the story continues to build!! Great Writing.

Great Story!!! I am sad it has ended with Boone and Coy just getting their feet firmly under them. A sequel following the guys through good and bad times would be received with a lot of smiles!!! Great writing!!

This story is very well written and includes nuances of the old west way of life. It is a serious tale with sorrow, loss, hope and love. As said above, it is very much worth a read. The author, Gary, has a wonderful way with his words that draw you into the story and make you want to reach out and help. Give this one a read. You will not be disappointed!!!!

This story follows two main characters as they move through a pivotal time in their lives. We learn of past sorrow, current discovery, and future times in the lives of all the characters. This is an amazing ride through real life with many snapshots of interesting times for all. I will stop here before I give anything away, but I urge anyone reading this to board the train and prepare for an amazing adventure through life presented in 29 captivating chapters!!!!!!!!!!

Wayne, this is the first of your work I have read and it is an AMAZING story!!! The care you put into each character and every scene has made this story LIVE. When I read I feel like I am in the story I am reading. With this story a was able to smile, frown, cuss once, laugh a lot and cry both sad and happy tears as I lived this time with your characters. You should be proud of your work as it is wonderful!!! I would love to see a sequel to this story that lets us live on with these people through the good and bad that life dishes out. Wayne, you have a great talent for story telling and I am looking forward to jumping into another of your works..... Just which one .

This chapter had a lot of interesting things show up. Vincent tackling Caleb into the shadows is very interesting considering we really do not know if Caleb was in any shadow. In the past Vincent had to have his second in a shadow for him to bring them both into the shadows. This is a real show of power. Another is Vincents ability to control his hybrid form so well so soon AND being in full control of his magic.... Oh can we even imagine what he could do as a hybrid with a fully charged bracelet???? As for the new a$$hat alpha.... Maybe he should be the subject of a four way team tag tennis match with Mason, Vincent, Cyrus and Ty as Hybrids and the racket holders..... zero zero SERVICE ..... Just saying. Aaron you are weaving an amazing tale (or tail). Keep up the great writing!!!

@Wesley8890, Thank You for the compliment . Glad to be part of the family!!!!

@Wesley8890, I was not specific enough..... Don seated by an emergency exit, not wearing his seat belt. Everybody else on the plane securely seated and belted. Just to be totally evil, lets keep Don sober so he can watch the ground getting closer and closer and closer .............. SPLAT!!!

Yep as said above. I saw it coming, but really hoped I was wrong. Well one glimmer of hope.... Stephanie most likely has a rather varied track record. We can only hope... @Wesley8890, Horrible NO, but why would you want to damage a perfectly good train? I am more for a airplane door blowout at 30000. It leaves absolutely no doubt about the result . Even expecting it, the last 50 or so words left me really disliking this chapter. Robbie seemed to be starting to grow up and look forward. This could really set him back... Ok @Dodger, you need to clean up this mess, in which ever way you see fit... Great story!!!