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Chapter 6: Healing Heart
wenmale64 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 6: Healing Heart
This was a great chapter. The emotion between Cy and Kap was so heartfelt and special. Those two are going to be the next POWER couple. If we ever see a situation where Cy, Mason, Kap and Vincent are together against a single threat it is going to be road pizza without the road 🤣. I have no idea where Vinnys powers are going to top out at, but watching the show will be over the top. As for the shadow travel with a guest, I think Vin needs to take Mason out for a very nice dinner. I am thinking somewhere on the west coast. Maybe the Gotham Steakhouse in Vancouver British Columbia, Canada. I understand their 32 ounce Rib Steak is fir for ....well a Wolf 😇. I am loving this story. Keep it up, you are doing great!!! -
I like the idea... lets get started
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Chapter 4: Egotistical Enforcer
wenmale64 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 4: Egotistical Enforcer
Yep, with an ice cube hanging around his neck 😇 . Bullies need to be taught a memorable lesson....... -
Chapter 4: Egotistical Enforcer
wenmale64 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 4: Egotistical Enforcer
This chapter was very interesting. The new alpha at the end seems like trouble... The alpha want-to-be delta needs to be taught a lesson. I think Ty should require him to be the warm-up, or should I say...cool-down, opening act at next weeks sparing session. A bit of humble pie would be good for him. Look what it did for Dirk 😂. -
Interesting chapter. It feels like Sue is finally beginning to figure out that Robbie is not trying to go against her. I hope she digs much deeper into Mr. Symmonds as I think there is something very foul about him and his group. I to am very curious to find out what Sue finds out and what it means. Only 5 more chapters... Sounds like the countdown to oblivion 😢.
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To Counter..... It is me BEFORE I have my coffee
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This is a great snapshot of the love and concerns within this family. Zander knows what to do, but he just questions if it is ever enough. I hope we will be able to follow A & Z from time to time. I would also vote for another book of their lives...
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Parker, you have given us an absolutely fantastic story (journal) to read!! I was glued to it from the very first chapter. Your ability to capture the emotions, pain, fright and unknown with your words is amazing. This is an outstanding work of literature that should be read by anyone wanting or needing to see that there is the possibility of light even in the worst darkness. Thank you for sharing tour talent with us. I will read more of your work and watch for future works. Be Well.
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There are only 10 types of people in the world... Those who understand binary and those who don't 😇.
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Chapter 33: Concluding Challenge
wenmale64 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 33: Concluding Challenge
Aaron you have crafted an amazing story that grabbed me with the first chapter and would not let go. I am not one for cliffhangers so I am grumbling a bit, but I will survive. I tend to wait for stories to be complete as I have been disappointed when authors abandon stories without finishing them. With this story I may just have to make an exception as it is that good!!! I will keep an eye out for book two and go from there. I absolutely love that you have mixed different animal shifters as it add a whole new look into the interaction of the characters. I can just see in my mind Caleb tied to a tree by Vincent with ice ropes. A lion bested by a small human... how wrong is that 🤣!!!! -
Hi Justin and welcome to the asylum!!! I joined 4 1/2 years ago and still find myself binge reading quite often.
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This was a great story! I was hooked on the first chapter. I still have the epilogue to go. I wait for stories to be completed before reading. I also go not leave many comments, but this story really deserves one now!!! You are a fabulous writer and have a gift to be able to create a world that allows the reader to exist as a shadow within the action. This makes the story live in the real world. Keep writing and we will keep reading! Now on to the epilogue and some final answers and wedding cake 🤗.
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Geron you have done it again! This was an absolutely wonderful and magical story that brought peace and happiness to the end of an awful year. The feelings you create with this cast of characters just makes the read joyful. I love the guys and all of the family and friends they have. I really like Auggie! A large magic cat would be so awesome!!! This was a perfect way to give a pause to Charlie, Kip and crew for a while. We will always look forward to future adventures, but your other stories and projects will be awaited with great anticipation. I look forward to seeing and reading whatever is your next released story. Please do not keep us waiting to long, but take the time you need for yourself. You must live for yourself, family and friends while we just have to take a secondary place. Have fun and be well!!!
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Great chapter. I am really looking forward to seeing how things develop when the demon generals pick their butts up and begin to look at what they are facing. I am also sure that Havar is up to his balls in the bad happenings. He will be another fight waiting to be had in the future. Keep up the great writing. We enjoy your story and will support your continued work!!!
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Chapter 144 Looking After My Interests
wenmale64 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 144 Looking After My Interests
Good to see Robbie finally growing up a bit. Something is very off about the guy watching at Nathan's house. I am glad Nate's mom called Sue and set things right. I am sorry to hear this story is ending, but it has been a fun ride. -
Welcome back!! Wonderful chapter. Many things are now in motion. Leo is going to be much happier with August close by! Chris needs to understand that he needs to take care of himself. He will do nobody any good if he is unwell, stressed or simply not in his A game. Sometimes that means you have to step back and relax a bit. I hope he does that and simply takes a bit to enjoy Victor and everyone who cares for him! The next chapters are sure to be exciting. Keep safe and well!!!
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Great start. I wonder what will come of the scholarship meeting... Nice to have you back Hunter!!
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This is another of the Charlie Boone holiday stories that Geron writes so well. This one follows the boys into and through another mystery of the "paranormal", but with this group, paranormal may just be normal, you read and decide.... Geron has done a great job building these characters and growing them through the holidays and years. I encourage you to read this story, but if you are new to these boys, I recommend you start with the first story and work your way forward so you learn what the group has learned and understand some references that started in earlier books. Read and ENJOY!!!
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This was a great story! I like Horace a lot. I think it will be interesting to see him in future adventures. Geron, you always create magical places, characters and feelings with your words. I look forward to your next tale!
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@bubby1234, That is something I never thought about. Thinking more it seems unlikely that HE is a demon general, but he may have a deal with a demon general that would benefit him directly. I still say Chris will be forced to take him out.....
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Loved this chapter. Havar is a snake that will bite any and all to better himself! Chris needs to figure this out and realize he may (will) have to take out his cousin for the sake of all elves. On a lighter note... Who are the interests of the uncles and dad?
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Chapter 143 Unfinished Business
wenmale64 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 143 Unfinished Business
I agree with everything said above. Unfortunately I can see Connor being spiteful and going out of his way to hurt Robbie. I also think Don is going to become an even larger threat to Robbie and the entire family. Sue is going to have to make a hard choice and stick with it. Now it could be interesting to see what could happen if Karen got into the fight to help Robbie 🤣... -
This is my first comment as I found this story by the recommendation of the week here on GA and binge read it in a couple of evenings. I really liked this story and am glad I found it after you completed it. You have created a great story with all the elements of life. I really liked your ending, even if it felt a bit rushed. Now with ending this story with the boys meeting for a summer to enjoy, it screams for either a sequel (please) or at least an epilogue showing a peek into the future. I look forward to trying some of your other works. Keep at it, you do it very well .
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Outstanding story with a beautiful ending!!! Encore ?
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Hip hip hooray for mom. I think she is finally realizing that Jack is still Jack and she loves him!!! I only wish that Lyle and Jimmy would have ended the fight with a kick from each to the balls. That would have solved Claytons sexual issue for a few months at minimum ... It seems that Jeff is going to be an unfortunate problem unless he finds another who is willing to be a toy....
