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This was a great story with scary, frightening, lovable, happy and sad parts. I really liked the story and look forward to the next installment! You both make for a very good pair of authors with your own impact and traits woven into the final product. Keep up the great works, each of you and both of you! Onward to the next page.......

I hope after the retest is done and confirmed Tristan's family gets a half dozen or more mage levels, oops I meant boots, shoved up their a$$es and then down their throats. As @Kitt said, What a shitty thing to do to a kid!! Would it not be fitting if Tristan actually saved his family when they could not save themselves!

Rob's the one I watching ....

This story is wonderful. Trish needs to play catch a bus on the freeway and Jaces mom similar but not quite as permanent... I see some trying times in the future, but hopefully, Brody can keep Jace grounded. At least the boys will have a safe haven with Brodys parents if everything goes sideways. I am sure even Lara could find a place there if needed. I see many possibilities and challenges headed our way. Keep up the great writing!!

Loved the last line... Rob needs to explore his options......

Good short with a very good statement about the value of the things we may be tasked to do. Great job James!!

Great chapter! It should be fun to read about the dehinging of a door AND the education of an old vampire mate in the art of communication. I just hope there are no crosses or garlic involved, scorched garlic can really ruin the moment . I am sure they will soon see the errors in their ways!! Love this story!

I agree that it is nice to see the guys back. I really liked the part about brothers. It also was great to see Jay and Miles drop their shields and let their fears show to each other. Great job! A little faster on the next chapter.....Please!! Fast or slow, we will be there to read it .

Keep a backup in a safe place and rub the lucky stone three times .

Things are still slipping lower, but now that Nicola knows just how low Robbie has gotten I think things will change. I really hope there is hope for Robbie and Connor. Alex needs help, but at least he needs to go away.........

Great chapter Caz! I think it is so obvious that the innocent is Fran, that it really can't be.......... Back to waiting for more .

Welcome to the asylum @Mike Arram!!!! Grab a clean white suit and stay a while. I am also looking forward to reading your stories.

Well the secrets keep getting more intense. We now have a way to get more information from the other side. I hope that this is not discovered and bad things happen to those involved. Kitryn has been 'educated' in the perceptiveness of children and will now undoubtedly put much more faith in the things Fran sees and says. This story is just pulling me in deeper and deeper! Great writing Caz. Keep it up. We need the secrets and plans to be revealed!!!!

Wonderful and happy chapter. I too loved it when Kitryn got dressed down by Frans mom with his full name. Fran is going to be a big help in solving the current problems. Keep up the great writing!!!!!!

Short sweet and wonderful. Geron, you have the gift for telling stories within stories without even giving a lead in. Keep the tales coming so we can keep smiling!! Also, I had the excessive width problem with Chrome. I was able to solve it by reducing the text size with the tools at the top of the page.

Another great chapter! Another mating is near I think. What will the elder mage find out when he sees Frans room? Could her vision actually be a helpful soul and not a spirit with bad intentions? Hopefully some of these questions will be answered in the next chapter. Keep up the great work Caz.

Great chapter! We will find out what the Mage feels soon. Simon has some learning to do.... Vampires are supposed to hiss, Werewolves howl .

Great chapter with several great highlights. Rory is just a great and caring friend. Robbie showed a lot of growth by finally seeing that good friends are worth much more than a quick fuck... Alex is continuing to show his rough side and will undoubtedly be a problem for Robbie and Conor. We can only hope that Robbie continues to grow up and manages to avoid much of the homophobia that Don and Sue are keeping at the top of their minds. Nathan is ok in his own way, but never really a good match for Robbie. Him being a friend of Daniels and over the top camp just had very little chance to work long term. He could be a good friend if both could let the past be the past and move forward without the bad feelings. Robbie really needs someone to take his mind off of Nathan and Conor might just be that someone! Keep up the Great writing! Your story is always a welcome highlight when new chapters post!!!

Great chapter! The mysteries keep building and the pile is already roof high. It will be interesting to see how that pile is carefully removed .

Great start to what will surely be a magical story! I think that following Kippys skwish is magical in itself. These boys always cause the great feelings of love and caring to just radiate from the page. I know there will be magic when Charlie is involved, but what magic and surprise will the towns folk bring? The mayor warned them to be ready for pranks from the people around them. I think the one that is going to be the most caught off guard is uncle Bob. What is an illusionist going to do when the magic is REAL? The fun will begin in the next chapters . Geron, Keep the magic coming, You go it so well!!!!!

Great chapter!! I simply hope Walter brings in the hounds of hell on Don and Sue for child endangerment or some equally frowned on reason. Another thing that would be gut busting funny would be Don getting a summons by the adoption judge to explain why there has been an inquiry about nullifying the adoption. I know this just me, but it would be great to see Don stroke out due to the bad press......

@Ethan It is the right of every author to create their stories their way. With that said, you are a great writer with the ability to draw readers into the world of your characters. This is why you are seeing the rebellion against Jordan and the developing situation. If your goal was to develop empathy for your characters, you hit the nail on the head! Now as for myself, I am a hopeless romantic and do enter the worlds of my readings. To see the lead characters hurt causes my negative reactions. This is not really your fault, as you are creating that world the way you need it to be for your story. Bravo. I can and have waited until a story is complete to read it through. This allows me to sail through cliffhangers and rocky moments and quickly get to the happy solutions to the problem. I will even admit to skipping to the end of the last chapter first to see if the main characters are still alive and happy. If they are, I read the story. If they are not, I move on before I grow attached to them. Just my way of dealing with personal pain I guess. Keep writing your story in YOUR way and us readers will read it our way!! I do love the story, but I have developed a great empathy for both Noah and Jordan and do not want to see either one hurt. I know there are rocky roads in any relationship. This is life. But to have to wait for the next chapter, while feeling the characters pain, detracts from the enjoyment of the story. This is my style and others will disagree. I respect that. Keep writing, your work is great!!

I think @Tonyr has it right. Getting close to stepping away for a bit and letting the cliffhangers settle out.

Wonderful story CG. Family goes a long way to make Christmas a great time for all. I could feel Jerrys pain as he felt it would not be possible to make Jays present come true. Keep writing and we will always read your works. Happy Holidays

This is a great short story with both humor and a message about the holidays that needs to be remembered. Give it a read and you will be laughing and smiling by the end!!!!