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Timejun

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  1. Timejun

    Chapter 86

    He should have married Tony
  2. Timejun

    Crisis

    Ok, just to remind you, you haven't posted since last year. If you only knew or realized what a treasure you are and how your story is so needed in these dark days...
  3. You are so cruel...you write this epic book and then just end it....you're a mean, mean, but brilliant author. Please don't make us wait too long.
  4. hello, . I have just finished a marathon read of all 32 chapters. I haven't commented on any of them yet. Honestly, they were so good I just rolled from one to the other. YOu have built complex yet believable and loveable characters and I find that Gorgeous. I love each and every one of them. Even the bad guys. My heart was truly broken when I realized I was at the end of the chapters. Please continue to produce such great writing. Oh by the way. I have noticed you are having grammer issues. If you need somebody to iron out the links I'd be more than happy to help. on a personal note... Congratulations on your marriage. Robert
  5. Timejun

    Crisis

    Please, for the happiness of your realm, for the people of this story, cast yet another magnus chapter quickly. Thank you
  6. Timejun

    Chapter 36

    You know, as much as I love the story line the chapters are so short. A few paragraphs doesn't make a chapter.
  7. This is an excellent way to both inspire the readers and to reward faithful followers. I love it.
  8. Timejun

    Demon Slayer

    EXCELLENT chapter. Well worth the wait.
  9. Timejun

    XD Ch 7

    So far this is the most boring story I've ever read. Where is the one-on-one interactions with people? Where is life, love, aggression, anything?
  10. Timejun

    Song of Soul

    It's sad to say but it's been so long between chapters I'm really losing interest. It's sad because it is such a phenomenal story and I really looked forward to each chapter. Now all we do is wait and wait and wait for a midsize chapter. Please do something soon. Robert
  11. Timejun

    Song of Soul

    First let me say thank you for giving us the next chapter. I was pulling my hair out waiting. Now, on to the story. I loved every part of the story. And I am really hoping for the next general.
  12. Ok, I never thought it would come to this but........PLEASE GET ANOTHER (sobbing) CHAPTER OR TEN PUT UP. (snot running, on my knees begging) PLEASE
  13. I've thoroughly enjoyed these last 5 chapters. I am looking forward to the next 10+ chapters
  14. I've thoroughly enjoyed these last 5 chapters. I am looking forward to the 10+ chapters
  15. Timejun

    Meet the Humans

    First, no democrat or worst yet...socialist. But all seriousness aside. Awesome chapter. Ethnar is the man.
  16. Hey GABZ2000… the story never said that the four people from the flow are the four past monarchs. All it said that they were emissaries of the flow....
  17. Timejun

    The Keys

    There needs to be a talk of a marriage soon
  18. Timejun

    Chapter 28

    I mean I'm glad you don't big us down with every little day-to-day thing but you took less than a paragraph for a 3 month vacation.
  19. Timejun

    The Keys

    Albiet short, in relative terms, it was very informative and packed with emotion and knowledge. Very well done, you should be proud of your creation.
  20. Timejun

    Songs of Magic

    Ok, I know who the voices are and I really like it but...how can you intagrate that?
  21. Timejun

    Songs of Magic

    Ok, we need to know your height and weight. We will make a dome of elvin crystal and encase you in it for you are a National Treasure and need protecting. That was friggin AWESOME. Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter. I will definitely be reading this one several times. Oh, by the way, thank you for continuing this take. Your mind should be at the Smithsonian...after you're done with it of course 😁
  22. Timejun

    Chapter 19

    Short bit great. I think Alan and Cody should buy that restaurant and foster gay kids tossed out of their homes
  23. Timejun

    In the public eye

    Ok, I've read, reread, then refereed the last 5 chapters. I am now ready for the next chapter, so let's see it. Katar sounds very beautiful and very elvish. I'm thinking that big book is the true Astra spell...just saying
  24. Timejun

    Chapter 17

    I am so livid with how you rushed the ending and the ending itself. I will not continue to follow your story
  25. Total Aces...you work the characters around like water filled with the power of the elves. It's amazing
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