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I'm worried about Audra now. Still liking the two men's relationship. There is a lot of stuff there that they need to work out.
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This was another great chapter. Still loving the interaction between the two young men. There's a Prince and the Pauper feel to this at times. Ben's Hollywood life, and Travis' Ranch life, that Ben is finding he is liking. Or that's what I'm seeing.
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Yeah, it was. And it's awesome. Got another 40 in the bookmarks. I think I need to trim them down some. Get rid of the ones by people that just suck, that I thought were good.
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It's been in my 'Too Read' bookmark folder for too damn long. Have some spare few hours, and decided to go for it. Kicking myself in the ass now.
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Sleep Well, Reader.
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Each chapter is making me want to read the next. I am loving the interaction between Ben and Audra, but Ben and Travis are awesome together. That front room scene made me feel like I was right there sitting with Ben. The cold rock blowjob... was really hot. But I'm kinda partial to sex in the woods.
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Damn... right straight to the feels. Loved the poem Wayne.
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LOL. I'm finally getting around to reading Mac's Dissonance, and now every ad on GA is about traveling to Colorado. Damn this story is binge worthy!
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That bathroom scene was damn hot. Had me visualizing it something fierce.
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I thought it worked at first, and then I had to fix a format error. I think that may have done it.
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Excellent chapter. Loving the characters even more.
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First off, you're making me want to go visit Colorado, in the winter. Second, I love the interaction between Ben and Travis. I also love how you're using Ben's experience as Toby on 'Roustabout' paralleling what he's going through. Even though as a reader we don't see the movie, it makes the connection to it feel important to Ben's reactions.
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It is beautiful country.
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I'll echo what others have said, Mac. Sounds like Ben and Travis had a hell of a night.
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Thanks, Butcher. Totally new, I worked on this the other day.
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Hang in there, girl. You got this!
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A lot of great nuggets in this chapter Mac. I love how Travis rescues Ben from the diner, and him offering to give him a ride was very gentlemanly of him. Looking forward to more.
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I totally suck at this pre-posting timer stuff. Ugh... that chapter wasn't supposed to come out till Monday.
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Thanks, BB. Only if it would go for 15 seasons, could I see it as a TV show. LOL
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i'm kicking myself in the ass, for not having started this story earlier. Fantastic chapter Mac. I loved how Ben handled the waitress at the end, and the interaction between Ben and Bryan felt very familiar. Loved it.
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It has been a long forty-years. I worked for Abrams, Santina, & Shiller since I was fresh out of high school at eighteen-years-old, and today on my fifty-eight birthday was my last day. When I was hired my first position was in the mailroom, and I’m finishing my career as a vice-president of human relations. I owe a lot to A.S.S., and I’m thankful for the opportunities they have given me. We had just finished up with one of those feel good ‘farewell’ parties, complete with store-bought c
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Damn this was good! Loved it Mac.
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Mac... this was a beautiful poem, lots of great images you painted. I could see the forest you described. Then you ended it with a very powerful statement. Excellent work.
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Gotcha. 🙂
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A good passed out, or I should be worried, because you're sick passed out?
