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Accurate:

DOH.... Still, I hope it's a good day.

Have fun, my Brother.

Sleep Well, my Brother.

Heya sean. Good to see ya around.

Had to look up both places (not walmart). The Mall looks nice, real nice on the Google images.

Thanks, Mac. I wrote that after being up over 24 hours. I'm glad I didn't offend you. I'm defiantly looking forward to more Ben and the crew, in the future. 🙂

Back at ya, Bro. I hope all is going well with the Toronto Tour. So far so good. I'll be in and out today.

Morning everyone.

We[come back!

LOL, thanks, comicfan. What can I say, you come up with some great prompts. I got a list of numbers I want to try to tackle. Yeah, I've pretty much decided I'm going to make this a series. Repost this as a prologue, with the official first installment. BUT that will happen after I finish my current project.

From Prompt #748: The Ring

Also it's DERBY DAY!!!

Enjoy your time outdoors. I found a secret to help cheer one up. The laughter of a 2-y/o, when your making dino-roars chasing them.

You're welcome Mac.

Another excellent chapter.

I remember us talking about the plot idea, before you started posting. I feel that you did a great job with this opening chapter.

A 2-hour nap is better than a no hour nap.

Thanks, Parker. I'm glad you liked it. That's a common theme I'm seeing. I'm seriously considering it, once I'm done with my current project.

A.S.S. and small shorts. Yeah, I like them too.

Happy Star Wars day! may the 4th be with you!

Very true, Kitt. Thank you for reading, and for the feedback. Small shorts sounds good.

Morning DiCers. Bad case of insomnia last night, so I spent it being productive. I binge read @MacGreg's story. 200mg of Trazodone and a cup of natural calm, and I'm still wide awake. Anyway, I'll be over here, just doing my thing today.

My lack of comments on the last nine chapters, shouldn't be taken as a reflection of what I thought. I'm loving this story, every chapter. Some parts are a little hard to read, but it all adds together. Oh, where to start. Christine - First-class Witch. Especially bringing up the abortion. Katy - It all makes sense now. Curtis - Someone needs to handed to him his ass. Eric - No comment. At least no comment where I would post it publicly. Travis & Ben - Have to do this as a pair. While I like the story, and the pairing of these two, as a reader, I'm starting to think it's a mistake. Ben is just at the point of acceptance of himself as Bi/Gay/Whatever, Labels Suck, and Travis said it best, he needs to have more partners than just him. May feelings on this is because of Travis. There is a lot of trauma there from abuse, and I feel he's treating Ben the way he is, because he was powerless to prevent it, and now he's doing it to Ben. With Ben being new to relationships with guys, with Travis being his first one, it doesn't feel like this would be a healthy one for him to start with. As an Author, I love how you wove this story, and are exploring these themes. I might me completely ass-backwards on them, but that is how I'm perceiving it. As for this chapter... Ben just made a huge fucking mistake. He's letting his lust cloud his judgement, and it's going to bite him in the ass, once Eric double-cross him.

Shocked! Face! Holy Hell... Travis is on the warpath, and what the hell did Eric just do to a 15y/o!