Brayon
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Really hot scene. The whole chapter was really good. Love the progress.
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Ben looking after his man! Loved it.
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Some great character development in this chapter. Excellent.
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One more, and I'm going to bed, I said... Now I got to see what happens the next morning! I like how they are both admitting that they actually care for each other. In their own way, of course. Now if they could let go of the bullshit.
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Fucking Onions... My opinion of Travis has changed again. For the better.
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Thanks for reading, Jeffrey. AC did several great O. Henry prompts. There's another one I might tackle, sometime in the future.
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Thanks, Chris. I appreciate the comment. You guys are talking me into maybe doing something more.
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Wow. WOW... Great chapter, I'm loving Ben a lot on this. He's coming to terms with himself, and trying to work things out. But his movie star life is getting in the way, or his perception of it. And, what the hell is it about sisters?
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Their first fight... Yeah, there's a lot of bullshit going around, like others have said, and it's going to take a lot. Granted I'm reading these chapters 3 years later, so a lot of stuff has bound to have changed.
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I'm still loving the story, but I am lost for words on this chapter. As a reader, I'm feeling Ben's head is not in the right place for this. His self-loathing is not healthy, and that's coming from someone that has a lot of practice in that department. Katy... no words. My instinct with Travis, is starting to change. He's gone from gay man, helping someone find themselves, to something of a predator. Scary. That just maybe a bit of projection from my past there. It's funny how 2-Dimensional characters can come alive, and remind us of parts of ourselves.
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The only springs, I've been in, have been COLD springs. I would love to try hot springs once. I'm loving this story a lot. A lot of different dynamics here.
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I was hoping someone would pick up on that. LOL. Thanks, AC. No plans currently, but you never know. It'll have to wait till after the current project.
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Sleep Well, my Brother.
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Goddamn! Katy is a bitch, she might be 15, but wow. WOW. Wondering what she meant, about turning him, but I don't think that's an issue. Ben hating himself, had some signs in the first few chapters, and even before he shaved, and what was said here at the end. It's like this whole group is bundle of sticks soaked in kerosene and Katy/Travis rivalry is a match.
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I'm worried about Audra now. Still liking the two men's relationship. There is a lot of stuff there that they need to work out.
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This was another great chapter. Still loving the interaction between the two young men. There's a Prince and the Pauper feel to this at times. Ben's Hollywood life, and Travis' Ranch life, that Ben is finding he is liking. Or that's what I'm seeing.
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Yeah, it was. And it's awesome. Got another 40 in the bookmarks. I think I need to trim them down some. Get rid of the ones by people that just suck, that I thought were good.
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It's been in my 'Too Read' bookmark folder for too damn long. Have some spare few hours, and decided to go for it. Kicking myself in the ass now.
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Sleep Well, Reader.
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Each chapter is making me want to read the next. I am loving the interaction between Ben and Audra, but Ben and Travis are awesome together. That front room scene made me feel like I was right there sitting with Ben. The cold rock blowjob... was really hot. But I'm kinda partial to sex in the woods.
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Damn... right straight to the feels. Loved the poem Wayne.
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LOL. I'm finally getting around to reading Mac's Dissonance, and now every ad on GA is about traveling to Colorado. Damn this story is binge worthy!
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That bathroom scene was damn hot. Had me visualizing it something fierce.
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I thought it worked at first, and then I had to fix a format error. I think that may have done it.
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Excellent chapter. Loving the characters even more.
