Brayon
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First off, you're making me want to go visit Colorado, in the winter. Second, I love the interaction between Ben and Travis. I also love how you're using Ben's experience as Toby on 'Roustabout' paralleling what he's going through. Even though as a reader we don't see the movie, it makes the connection to it feel important to Ben's reactions.
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It is beautiful country.
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I'll echo what others have said, Mac. Sounds like Ben and Travis had a hell of a night.
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Thanks, Butcher. Totally new, I worked on this the other day.
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Hang in there, girl. You got this!
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A lot of great nuggets in this chapter Mac. I love how Travis rescues Ben from the diner, and him offering to give him a ride was very gentlemanly of him. Looking forward to more.
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I totally suck at this pre-posting timer stuff. Ugh... that chapter wasn't supposed to come out till Monday.
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Thanks, BB. Only if it would go for 15 seasons, could I see it as a TV show. LOL
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i'm kicking myself in the ass, for not having started this story earlier. Fantastic chapter Mac. I loved how Ben handled the waitress at the end, and the interaction between Ben and Bryan felt very familiar. Loved it.
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It has been a long forty-years. I worked for Abrams, Santina, & Shiller since I was fresh out of high school at eighteen-years-old, and today on my fifty-eight birthday was my last day. When I was hired my first position was in the mailroom, and I’m finishing my career as a vice-president of human relations. I owe a lot to A.S.S., and I’m thankful for the opportunities they have given me. We had just finished up with one of those feel good ‘farewell’ parties, complete with store-bought c
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Damn this was good! Loved it Mac.
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Mac... this was a beautiful poem, lots of great images you painted. I could see the forest you described. Then you ended it with a very powerful statement. Excellent work.
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Gotcha. 🙂
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A good passed out, or I should be worried, because you're sick passed out?
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I'll PM ya Mac. Nothing I want out in public.
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@Mikiesboy What's that writing above the towel rack? Also, great job getting back together. Back from the lawyer's appointment. It went...
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Headed out to the lawyer's office. Wish me luck.
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Morning everyone. I hope all is well. Ugh... More Rain today, 92% humidity, and High 80's today. Whelp, I'll be carrying my asthma meds.
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Sleep Well, DiCers. While you slumber, I'll stand guard. - Me
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Sleep Well, Mac. Congrats on the win!
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Sleep Well, my Brother.
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These are both fantastic! More added to my unending list of prompts to write on.
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Sleep Well, miss molly. Sorry to hear about the family. Prayers and Thoughts.
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Sleep Well, Reader
