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And yet out of the gate, you lead with "Kung Fu Panda." @Laura S. Fox 🤣

Very well said and that's why I'm such a big fan of @Mrsgnomie. This story hits close to home for a lot of us. Mine cheated after 16 years. I didn't find out about it until he packed up and left without a word. Slightly different details, but still the same story.

I read both of your other stories and enjoyed them. The comment count says that I'm not the only one. Welcome back.

You've been missed @Mrsgnomie So glad that you're back. I'm really enjoying this story. The character development is on point and the story has me hooked. More please!

Out of the mouths of babes---problem solved. LOL. This was a great chapter and the dolphin scene was really amazing. It's apparent that whatever happens, TC has won over the kids.

My thinking is that because they've been friends for so many years, this relationship is going to be quite unique with respect to typical BDSM/Dom/Sub "norms." Particularly given the fact that you've created two doms with one wanting to explore the sub side, I think that there really aren't any mistakes, just a different approach or view. It's great that you're getting guidance and input from folks here on GA. Oh, and I second what @chris191070 said above. Great Chapter!

"He called you a 'cheap date'." So Bailey has a sense of humor and just pulled one over on Harlan. It seems that he's got Harlan's number and is going to have fun with it. Harlan better step up the ASL lessons and learning. It was really distressing reading how Rayne thinks that he is broken. ☹️

There are maybe 4 authors who have the talent to pull me right into a story. You do realize @kbois that you're one of those authors, right? I'm glad that you're back and I look forward to reading this and more of your stories!

Amazing story and format @Wayne Gray. You've managed to condense a novel into a short story and not sacrifice anything in the process. The characters were fully developed and the story was complete. The time transitions were so smooth that (once or twice) I had to rewind to find where the shift had occurred. Thanks for sharing your talent with us once again.

^This. Maybe not right away, but don't dismiss the possibility. I can see lots more developments and adventures for this group. As always @Wayne Gray, another excellent chapter. Take care and be well. We all are doing our best to cope during this difficult time, but your writing makes it a lot more bearable for many of us.

Thank you for sharing such an intimate glimpse into your life. I hope that your family can continue getting the help that you need. I don't think that anyone fully "recovers" or "heals" from such a horrific trauma, but my wish for you and your family is that you find peace and a way forward. While writing is "cathartic" and allows you to get lost for a little while, reading for me has the exact same effect. You and the other amazing authors on GA may not realize how many of us need a bit of diversion and escape particularly when life as you know it gets derailed and your brain gets overloaded and overwhelmed. I'm sure that you can relate. Thanks so much for the stories that you've written. I look forward to your next creations. And a shout out to @Wayne Gray for the subtle direction to your blog.

We hate cliffhangers! LOL. Another great chapter Laura. It's going to be a long week waiting for the next installment.

Get out of my brain @chris191070 . LOL I was thinking the exact same thing.

And here I thought I was the only one to use that expression @kbois! But I'm glad that you've overcome the writers block. I've missed your stories and am looking forward to your return.

Love the way that you crafted Grant's confession about the journal and Troy's reaction. It was so well thought out and kept with the nature of the characters. I'm glad you didn't change it. So it's smooth sailing from here on out right @Wayne Gray??? NOT!! LOL.

The two exes getting the two exes back together again after Ike screwed up was just over the top. I'm loving this soap within a soap. Thanks for providing such great entertainment @Mikiesboy and @Wayne Gray. You're both very talented!

Very powerful and touching @Wayne Gray

I laughed so much at this line. This entire story is so entertaining and a bit of a departure from your usual work. I'm thoroughly enjoying it @lomax61 Can't wait for the next chapter!!

This is going to be really good; both the story and the comment side banter with @Wayne Gray, @Mikiesboy, and @MichaelS36. Keep it up guys!

Great chapter Laura. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

What a nice little Christmas present for your readers @Wayne Gray Thank you!

Well alrighty then! Elias is starting to really come out of his shell with a bang! Before long, he's going to be a real smart ass. Great chapter Wayne.

You Did Good Don't doubt your talent. Your readers sure don't.

....."the patience of a saint and the balls of an elephant." I am so appropriating this saying. LOL Another great chapter.

A lack of hot water can also run off unwanted guests quickly or at least make them re-think any future drop in plans. Think about showering before anyone else, running the dishwasher, and doing a load of laundry in hot water. They'll get the idea. 😜 Another great chapter. Liam and Cassie are so much trouble in the making.