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    Chapter Twenty-Six

    spyke commented on Ethan's story chapter in Chapter Twenty-Six

    Although Jordan said it in anger, maybe this was exactly what was needed to snap Noah out of his ridiculous idea that Sebastian could be trusted to not release the video.
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    Chapter Twenty-Six

    spyke commented on Ethan's story chapter in Chapter Twenty-Six

    I respectfully disagree. After (as we say in the South) pitching that hissy fit, Noah got exactly what he deserved. All throughout this chapter it's apparent that Jordan bends over backwards and thinks of Noah first and foremost. Noah acted like an ass. That parting shot was mild compared to what I would have done, but then I'm a vengeful bastard. LOL. I'm 💯 Team Jordan on this one, and yes @Ethan you do have a whole bunch of work to do to repair this mess.
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    Epilogue

    spyke commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Epilogue

    Thanks so much for the great story Laura. And after the roller coaster ride these two had, a sweet ending is just what was needed. The only problem is I won't have my Sunday reading fix of Box Shaped Heart. Guess that means I'll have to re-read it!!
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    Subject To Change

    spyke commented on MericCotton's story chapter in Subject To Change

    I think the story is paced correctly and is realistic. You're writing about a complex character going through the grief process and that doesn't occur in a linear progression. The whole grief process is at best erratic and I think that you've done a great job projecting that to your readers. I'm really enjoying this story and your talent as a writer. Can't wait till the next chapter!
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    Chapter Twenty-Two

    spyke commented on Ethan's story chapter in Chapter Twenty-Two

    Great chapter. I can imagine Jenn having fun with this like a cat playing with a mouse. She is really going to make Jordan squirm if he doesn't tell the truth. 😉
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    You do realize that a whole bunch of us now want to reach through the screen and slap the snot out of Alex right? LOL What a great chapter. Thanks Laura!
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    👏👏👏 A great chapter, but now I'm in deep 🤔. I'm going to speculate that Aron has been in love with Carter since high school and that's the meaning of the “I should not have left,” comment. So could it have possibly been Aron who used a little magic or made a deal with the devil to initiate the initial body switch to make Carter fall in love with him? Mmmmm.... Had to have been magic because Alex is most certainly the devil! LOL
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    Wow! Carter really went for the jugular when Simon attempted to blackmail Aron. I really look forward to Sunday mornings because I get my Carter and Aron fix!
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    I've really enjoyed reading your stories. You don't let things get stagnant and boring and that really kept my attention. Can't wait for your next story!
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    Loved this chapter. Seems like the man-child has really grown up in the past couple of chapters.
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    Sometimes the happily ever after is that two people don't end up together. They just don't know it at the time.
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