spyke
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Totally agree. Although I doubt that @Mark Arbour would have let that play out. There would be too many comparisons/parallels to the Brad and Robbie college years story line.
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The bottom line here is that Mark doesn't need anyone to grant permission or approval to write his story the way he wants. I fully understand that some may find this type of behavior upsetting, but this is a work of fiction. The actions of the characters are entirely realistic for the time frame and circumstances. If people find it too upsetting to read, then they always have the choice not to read it.
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I can't wait to get to know them for the first time. Yet another @Wayne Gray story that has me captured from the very beginning. I feel as if I am standing right in the room with your characters when I read your stories Wayne. Thanks in advance for what I know is going to be another great adventure.
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Brilliant idea about having Lex and Ian foster Liam so Jarren and Nash can get their ducks in a row. I got the giggles when Lex dropped the magic 8 ball response on Liam. It was like he was letting Liam know that he wasn't the only smart ass in the crowd. This was great chapter and I liked the way that you wove Lex's ability to see auras into the story and pull Nash right into it. I'm anxious for the next chapter!
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This is a really great transition from A Tatoo for Lex. Many of the characters are familiar, but it is Jarren's story and I'm very much enjoying it. You are a talented writer and storyteller. Please don't even think about abandoning this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Well, talk about throwing a big curve ball after your hiatus from this story! Kinfolk killing kin and then trying to throw one another under the bus? Talk about brotherly love! LOL And where in the world did you come up with the idea about the black walnuts? Now that's just master class mystery writing material! I remember those from my child hood home. They did smell foul, and they left stains all over the concrete walkway, but the squirrels sure did love to eat them. I loved Fleeting Eternity and I understand why you needed to concentrate on that, but I have missed the adventures of Bluegrass Symphony and Silverwolf. Can't wait for the next chapters of both of these stories.
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Carullo did apologize to JJ and told him point blank that he couldn't be JJ's boyfriend. He gets major points for that alone. I'm not seeing him as an ass. IMHO, he's trying to crawl out of horrible grief in the best way he knows how. It's only been 2 years for Carullo since he lost Joey. Sometimes social graces and courtesy goes out the window when you are in that stage of grief. Welcome back @Mark Arbour This was a thoroughly entertaining chapter. I have really missed your stories and talent. You've picked right up where you left off without any indication of a break in flow, tone, thoughts, or purpose in both Black Widow and Northern Exposure. You are truly a talented writer.
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Kudos on your academic achievement. I am very glad that you are returning to writing. You are immensely talented and you have been missed.
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Dang, a thruple triad! Gotta love it. Great chapter Wayne. You really do know how to throw your readers a curve ball in this story.
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Thank you for allowing us to see a slice of your life. It was very generous of you to share.
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When someone says something (that is buried in their subconscious) that reveals their true feelings or desires. Heathcliff has already moved this relationship far past the playing stage. Also known as a parapraxis.
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Freudian slip??😉
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I was reserving judgement about Nate, but he really is a douche. Hopefully Kent will recover in time.
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Get out of my brain @MacGreg 😁. Wayne- I've said it before, but you just have a way of capturing the reader and drawing them into your stories. @MacGreg describes your writing talents perfectly. Now you've got 3 stories in rotation, so I think your fan base won't be going through with withdrawals anytime soon. Thanks for putting out what promises to be another great story.
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Leopard/Spots. The answer is no. A fantastic chapter Wayne. It seems like every time I read one of your chapters, I'm searching Google to find out the meaning of something. This time it was the rubble trench foundation. Fascinating concept. I'm glad that Caleb and Wren finally got together, but I suspect they are in for a bit of trouble with those relatives. Maybe Tracy will get in some target practice time again. LOL
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I think that Ryan is pretty amazing given that he walked into the situation without a clue. He finds out he has a son, his son's mother is dead, and his son is gay, all in the span of what 10 minutes? Yeah, Ryan's absolutely remarkable and I can't wait till you develop his character. There's going to be some Boston people at this wedding! Ryan better like Cinnamon Toast Crunch! LOL. Thank you for writing yet another great chapter.
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Congrats on the new job!!! Another great chapter. Cassie is going to go wild over the Dory and Nemo Tevis tumbler.....such a fine vessel for her Cinnamon Toast Crunch cocktails. Lol
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Oh lord, we will all need sedatives! LOL Best of luck with your interview.
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In real life, less than 1 week. LOL. I give it 3 chapters max. Another great chapter Wayne.
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Why do I get the feeling that Greg and Nate's first shot at parenthood is going to be when Kyle and Mitch move in with them to attend college? 😉
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Mothers always know. Regardless of what we tell ourselves they always know. Another great chapter Wayne!
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Birthday Bash Part 3 - The Soul
spyke commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Birthday Bash Part 3 - The Soul
Sad about Kyle. He is so mature for his age. But Greg and Nate....... Hopefully it's not a dream. Excellent chapter and well worth the wait -
Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
spyke commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
Few authors have the talent to pull a reader right in and hook them from the first few paragraphs. You are one of the few. Great beginning and I look forward to the next chapter.- 63 comments
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In Which Aidan Learns Lies Tend To Have Short Legs
spyke commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In Which Aidan Learns Lies Tend To Have Short Legs
Knowing Laura, yes we do. LOL 😉
