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I like Caleb’s interpretation of entering the afterlife. Orpheus is great. A knowledgeable guide with the right amount of wit and snark. Great job @Cynus.
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2-2 - Questions and Memories
FormerMember4 commented on Cynus's story chapter in 2-2 - Questions and Memories
Poor Liz. Still dealing with loss. Just an alternate version. Will actions eventually merge together their paths? -
On to Orpheus. You now have my attention. One of my faves in mythology.
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1-11 - From Night to Day
FormerMember4 commented on Cynus's story chapter in 1-11 - From Night to Day
Your introduction to death is oddly warm and comforting. 🤗 -
1-11 - From Night to Day
FormerMember4 commented on Cynus's story chapter in 1-11 - From Night to Day
A life for a life. Should have seen that coming. Monumental Ohh crap moment. -
1-10 - A Spell's Simplicity
FormerMember4 commented on Cynus's story chapter in 1-10 - A Spell's Simplicity
The best laid plans... The vision brought forth shows to be manevolent. No doubt feeding off conflicted emotions. -
Can you say awkward? Different chemical properties. I don’t see this going well.
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Wow! That’s friendship and love. Sacrificing your pride and body. For something you’re not even sure will work. Lying to protect your friend from an awful truth.
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I figured he planned his suicide to coincide with Caleb leaving for college. Pandora’s box is being opened, closure won’t be happening anytime soon. Great story and pacing my friend.
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Now we’re getting into the interesting stuff. Magic and mythology. I’ve always been a mythology geek. Nothing good comes from black magic. Even with good intention. This should be good.
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Grieving is a bitch. Everyone deals differently. Emotions running the gamut. Sometimes you need a loved one to set you straight without judgement of mood or feelings.
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I knew what was coming. Yet I still cried. Life can be cruel.
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I’m already invested in these two. Things don’t look good. Only if Caleb declared Love long ago.
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Of course Ethan had to show. Innocent, but nonetheless devastating. Especially if it seems feelings are reciprocated for Caleb.
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Looking forward to this. First chapter sets things well. Waited to read this. Had a death I was dealing with when first posted. Wasn’t ready for a death story.
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Satisfying, and left wanting more. Intriguing world and characters. Love your creative imagination. Looking forward to the next chapter. Things aren’t looking good for him at the moment.
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I’m sorry tim. I meant to tag you. Deepest apologies. Powerful...
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I would do what you did. Sometimes with heart/mind conflicts, people can’t walk away. Until heart says I’m done. We can only advice and support.
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These words hold so much truth to the son of an absent alcoholic father. Just powerful. Thank you Sir.
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Love the significance of the poem. It paints you in a peaceful space. Hope that continues. 💋
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Teddy was honest and upfront. With himself, and everyone else. He will never find peace without trying. Whereas, if Ryder fails again... closure. Good chapter Ace. Thanks for showing hints of old mom.
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Great chapter. Sweet with just the right pacing. Memories of high school for me. I was the quiet one who dated the football co-captain for 2 years.
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Chapter 91 Feeling the Heat
FormerMember4 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 91 Feeling the Heat
It also fits with (All the closeted guys) remark. Look forward to the next, my friend. 💋 -
LOL! If sending Mark, I need resuscitating!!!
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Chapter 91 Feeling the Heat
FormerMember4 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 91 Feeling the Heat
I almost forgot... I think Nathan has a romantic past with Alex, or knows about him. The (If I wanted to date a tough guy, I...) remark.
