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  1. FormerMember4

    Money Talks

    Thanks for the heads up Sir. Well worth the wait. These characters continue to jump off the screen. The unfolding continues to intrigue. Honest in delivery and holding no punches. As we saw with Ben and Travis... cues don’t have to be verbal. So much was said without words. I look forward to the interaction between Eric and Ben. It will be a big mistake for Eric to underestimate Ben. While Eric May think Travis is Ben’s weakness. He will prove to be Ben’s strength. Thank you Sir. I appreciate the detail to human nature, and psychology.
  2. Congrats Professor! Did that come with a raise? Well deserved!
  3. FormerMember4

    Lesson #4

    Thank you for telling me about the updates Sir. I know you told me a couple weeks ago, but as you know... I’ve been dealing with some things. The beginning is always so difficult. Especially when you constantly doubt yourself. What exactly will be expected? Uncertainty and not wanting to disappoint. Your writing is sometimes like looking at a reflection in the mirror. I relate to that boy on so many levels. His Dom is showing such care. Patient and kind. Setting the foundation of trust. The nurturing center that can, and does bring calm and confidence. Thank you Sir. For the eloquence in your words.
  4. FormerMember4

    Chapter 2

    There’s no mistaking the meaning of “I’ll open you up”. No shame in sex shop shopping. Maybe Officer Goodbody can assist and liberate Josh. The shop could help him open the possibilities.
  5. FormerMember4

    Chapter 1

    There is nothing worse than paralyzing anxiety. Officer Kevin seems interested. He just may be the confidence and center that Josh so desperately needs. Very relatable.
  6. FormerMember4

    The Story

    Wonderful story. The loose ends and unanswered questions are oddly satisfying. The promise is constantly evolving with no end in sight.
  7. I love the originality of this story. The descriptions of this magical land. No doubt it’s special. Sam and his clan provide the humans gold. A symbiotic relationship. Nice to see Tequkwan want to keep on the salamander tradition.
  8. FormerMember4

    The Story

    Sweet and positive. Sometimes the impossible might not be so impossible.
  9. FormerMember4

    ATGB VIII

    LOL! Oops, that wasn’t a hand I grabbed. 🤩
  10. FormerMember4

    Chapter 15

    Never lose hope and dreams.
  11. Congrats Puppi! That’s fantastic news.
  12. FormerMember4

    ATGB XII

    This was a fantastic ending. Captured the charm of Napa Valley and SF. The perfect locale to blend their loves of wine and architecture. Enough romance without being too sappy. Great installment papi.
  13. There is also the Manage followed section under account. Content Stories section.
  14. FormerMember4

    ATGB XI

    Loving this reception. Secretary Clinton acknowledging the pot... hilarious. The golden shower remark, now that’s a party. Never seen that at a reception. LOL! Damian is still a douche. No class, no personality. Cristina could do way better.
  15. FormerMember4

    ATGB X

    This was a beautiful chapter papi. The simple, but powerful vows. The loving honor given to Liz. The outfits were descriptive and very visual. A complete not to one of my favorite books. Very Hamptons, very Brooks Brothers.
  16. FormerMember4

    ATGB IX

    This was a great chapter. Good to see the gang together. Always like appearances from Harley, but Carlos is giving him a run for the money. I say we randomly place Carlos throughout GA stories. 😉
  17. FormerMember4

    ATGB VIII

    Rugby and hot, sweaty men on the field and dance floor. Sign me up papi!!
  18. Enjoyable as always papi. I always find the act of writing fascinating. Similarities and differences in approach.
  19. I either write with my tablet and Bluetooth keyboard, or my MacBook. I wish I could still write with pad and pen. It always flowed more naturally that way. Digital requires more concentration. Always in silence.
  20. FormerMember4

    Chapter 7

    The beginning shows any society has trouble balancing progress. There was a lot of teaching with pillars and tree. Prism was taught serenity, mindfulness, balancing energy with mind and body. He basically received a Tai chi lesson. Good teaching for anyone.
  21. Ace takes you on a rollercoaster of emotions in this one. Cy Walker is a gang member from the Southside, and adopted into a family of wealth and privilege. He is presented as a hood rat banger with a one way ticket to juvenile hall, or 6 feet under. While journey isn’t easy, we see his upbringing. More importantly, we see what love and encouragement provide the human soul. Well written and told. Everyone deserves a chance of redemption. A must read!!
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    Peace

    You couldn’t have ended it anymore perfectly. Riley has closure where he needed it. People to love and carry him. Love he sees is needed. It’s no longer something he sees as weakness. Riley will teach Spirit how to trust. Spirit will help him thrive with PTSD. My favorite moment was Riley talking with his grandfather. That brief time they had will mold the man Riley will become.
  23. Great work as always papi. Thanks for getting answers.
  24. I read this hours ago and had to process. You hit so close to home with pain and meds. Even the best days sometimes aren’t that great. It can be a prison, the pills a reminder, the pain a reminder, and the memories of what we used to be always a reminder. If you’re writing this now, I know it’s hitting hard. Sending you hugs. Tomorrow is a promise of a happier day. Never stop believing. ❤️
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    Chapter 6

    Ghayle literally takes on the weight and pain of the world. This is showing every species is complicit in the demise. Who is the chosen? Will they rise to the challenge and repair a world facing Armageddon? Will they face the same fate as Ghayle?
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