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A jumble of snapshot memories with no rhyme or reason. Hard to see what author wanted to achieve.
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Good story with a good ending. A lot going on. Make sure you’re paying attention to not miss anything. Could leave confused.
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Mark's journal entry, April 27
FormerMember4 reviewed JulienGregg's story in 2006 - Spring - Day of Silence
While not truly journal style, a story of friendship, coming out, and homophobia. Concise with a good message.-
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Anthology Flashback: Spring 2006 - Day of Silence
FormerMember4 commented on Myr's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I’ll read these with great interest. Silence brings peace and calm. Great topic. -
Nan is going to put that judge 6 feet under. He is way more reserved. She wants grandboobies.
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Definite depression. Tired, irritable, anxious, erratic, insomnia all signs.
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Good prompt tim. Some chuckles escaped. I’ll gather all the furbies. Zendo can have all that survived.
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Good job A. Intrigued by the characters. Interesting setup so far.
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A great chapter. The boys deserve some happiness. I’m so extremely confused about something though. A few chapters back, Kyle was said to be African-American. Yet, his nickname is blondie. This chapter said Caleb had a white ass. Huh!!!
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Hilarious! I thought the same. Good times!
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OMG! Can you say Fatal Attraction!!! Josh is a little scary obsessive.
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I’m quickly losing patience with Josh. He’s selfish and only thinks about himself. You can’t bully someone to reciprocate your feelings.
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Prompt #640 – Creative – Alien
FormerMember4 commented on Brayon's story chapter in Prompt #640 – Creative – Alien
I really liked this short and characters. Big story in a small package. I would like to see how you expand on these characters. -
Well written! I have to agree with @Defiance19, felt like it stopped mid sentence.
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This was well done A. Intrigued by the silver dragon. Look forward to more installments.
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This was informative. I like the psychology angle. I try to do review as soon as story finishes. Go back to older ones as time allows. So many read before I was a member.
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Liam certainly needs therapy. It has helped tremendously in my life. A talk to his brother at cemetery, or letter would release a lot of emotion.
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All too understandable. My mom died 4 years ago this month. Sometimes hurts just as much now. His emptiness is normal grieving.
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Good chapter. Should have had nan work the stripper pole for the boys surrounded in condom balloons. 🤣
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The Gap Year (Part One)
FormerMember4 commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Gap Year (Part One)
This was an unexpected chapter. No problem with the hookup. Fresh from breakup... Big fricken deal! That’s the age to get out of system. I was surprised by Hot Asian Boy every other word. Too funny, but shocked no remark from @droughtquake -
Where There’s a Will, There’s a Way
FormerMember4 commented on Rip Skor's story chapter in Where There’s a Will, There’s a Way
I appreciate the complete honesty. I learned almost immediately to prepare myself before sex. Never a bad experience. I remember in last story that you referred to the gaping hole after sex. You show the honest and not always sexy part of sex. Good chapter! -
Chapter 89 The Invincibles
FormerMember4 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 89 The Invincibles
Robbie is showing great maturity. The headaches are concerning. It’s quite remarkable to want to give Jamie an experience he doesn’t get with his life. In spite of his circumstance, I see Robbie showing Don up. -
You never disappoint with your storytelling HB. This pairing captures the intricacies of a complicated relationship. While layered in multiple issues, feelings are the simplest to decipher. They compliment each other on many levels. Not just attraction, but understanding.
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I’m so incredibly happy to continue this complex relationship. So raw, vulnerable and real.
