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Scenery also depends I’m less critical of a place like NYC. Author should have basic understanding. However; I lived there for years. Stores and restaurants come and go so often.
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I don’t mind stories about hometown, or city I live in. With that said; I am more critical. It’s sloppy writing when author doesn’t research locale.
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Nice chapter! I like January. I see a pattern and have a theory. The stone is producing pride flag colors, which means 6 mates. Red means life Orange means healing Yellow means light Green means nature Blue means harmony/peace Purple means spirit.
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Jason is home from college to celebrate his sister’s Sweet 16. He is introduced to her boyfriend Blake. There’s a definite connection for Jason and Blake... Will anything develop? A well written story of attraction, and what you know to be right, or wrong.
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Cal is the baseball player hiding sexuality. Jake enters the picture and changes everything. Cal is left analyzing his life. Will he choose his true path? A well written story. A story of courage, regret, change, and love.
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I think they are friends. Carter may think he’s helping, but he’s being selfish. I understand he has no friends, but his experiences aren’t TJ’s.
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Great job Comsi. There’s no doubt there’s gaydar. I don’t know how many times it flashed when I was younger. Sometimes it was like laser focus. I’m happy you had Jason turndown Blake. It was a lesson for Blake. You also don’t highlight the pedo-lech stereotype. Thanks for not giving any credence to that notion.
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story review Featured Story: Shifter
FormerMember4 commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Great review Puppi. I read this long ago, and was left in awe. The way Skinny narrates is extremely difficult. He pulled it off effortlessly. The repetitive chaos of Etthan’s story is a definite must read. -
TJ is going to be a tough nut to crack. Almost impossible with Carter’s interference. He isn’t looking to help TJ. Carter wants TJ to stay miserable with him.
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I have no doubt that this district will lose. In past administrations federal funding could be pulled. Won’t happen now. I also feel this type of case should have personal liability to principal and superintendent. Would make people think twice before violating someone’s rights.
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A topical story full of courage. Risking everything for a forbidden love. Even when your actions might put lives on the line. Well written and gripping.
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A blossoming love never to be. Memories and what ifs that taunt you. A well written story of the forbidden love two young boys never fully realize.
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A story of two brothers in love. Doing so without regret. A difficult subject tackled with care.
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Sayonara douchebag! Don’t let the door hit your sorry ass on the way out... YAY Ryder! You’re making progress.
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Well written. Thankfully not what I pictured. When you ran the second time, I was hating this professor. I thought it was a revolving door of students. Nice ending.
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This was well written and so damn sad. If your love doesn’t hurt anyone, it doesn’t matter. While he had a life. Was it really a fulfilling one. Thankfully the youth now don’t endure to that extent anymore. Poor Jamie!
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You totally threw me off. I did not see that coming. I’ll be craving cake for the rest of the day. Well done Puppi.
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So many emotions in this short. Never would have considered this route. Otis did a wonderful thing. Very well written.
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Wow! So different than anything you’ve done Dodger. I really like what you did with Forbidden. Makes you think of what’s going on. Well done.
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Where do I go from here?
FormerMember4 commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Where do I go from here?
Very nice job Tim. It’s been awhile, but maybe a revisit to Valdemar is in my future. -
An ending I didn’t anticipate. Subject handled delicately. Not something normally read, but consenting adults not coerced. Well done A!
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Really well done. I understand Robert’s reluctance. You sometimes can’t help who you love. I can’t wait until the bug nags you again Sweet Pea.
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Thanks for your input. My fears are of failure, rejection, heights, snakes, spiders, bugs. The most severe has happened since going blind. Not seeing surroundings in big crowds.
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I look forward to these. Bravo to the participants. Thanks for the image description @Cia.
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