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    Chapter 20

    I don’t know why, but this setup doesn't sound like something that Mr Davis could do alone. There was to much tech for one person to manage this on his own. Did he have a partner, or was there someone else involved
  2. This is a wonderfully dark, psychological thriller. We have two high school kids, who wake up in bed together. Nothing wrong with that, until they find out they are being blackmailed. They find themselves as well as there friends, classmates and other members of the high school. Involved in a cruel, twisted game, that feels like a reality TV show. We have a GM, controlling Archivists, who's job is to follow rules. Get ready for tension, frustration, twists, cruelty and much more. Read on to discover much more.
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    Chapter 20

    Mr Davis, the GM got everything he deserved. A live broadcast and a tire iron. Tim, Justin and Ben got the proceeds of the live feed and a wonderful car. They also got the HEA, but they need to decide where the three of them go.
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    Eighteen

    Awesome chapter.
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    Chapter 19

    That was a wonderful thing to see, Carlos making love to Brandon, after he had received lessons from Jody.
  6. We learn alot in this chapter, plenty of valuable information for Arlo and his companions.
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    Chapter 51

    So 30,000 words
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    School Starts

    Willie is probably a stupid bully, who will do something far worse.
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    Chapter 51

    BOTB was perfect. Runner up, fan favorite and offered a record deal. A good day for the band.
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    School Starts

    Scott dealt with Willie, hopefully he doesn't bully Sam and Art anymore.
  11. This was an amazing story. Thanks for sharing it.
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    Chapter 18

    The forces are gathering, ready to try and defeat Septimus and his evil reign.
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    Chapter 7

    Tune in tomorrow, to see if any of these are answered.
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    Chapter 7

    The pink stuff has created quite a few events, that are worth attending. Tyler dressed like that, will have most of Leamington Spa wanting a bit of his body.
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    Chapter 19

    So have we got a Director and a GM. They don't want to lose there game, it's making them alot of money.
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    Chapter 19

    The fight/lovers tiff was brilliant, they all played there part's perfectly. Tim and Ben hiding in the bathroom was a good move, as long as they disabled everything. Justin going to confront the director on his own is very risky.
  17. Matt turning up like that, really shows his love for Kitt. At least Kitt spent his birthday, with his new friends.
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    Janderhoff

    I think we're in for an exciting time, when they go shopping.
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    Chapter 6

    I think we're too old for a 17 year old and probably not rich enough.
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    Chapter 6

    And not in a good way.
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