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    A beautiful chapter. Tom finally knows the truth from Kitt. Tom has met Matt, but wouldn't reveal anything about Kitt. Tom will be important in bringing Matt and Kitt together, but not until Kitt is ready.
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    We have Ace a psychology student, in a toxic relationship with Carter. Not the uni experience he was after. Along comes Leo, a frat leader. Who offers Ace a way to escape his toxic relationship. It comes with rules, No Sex, No Kissing and No Falling in Love. Read on to discover much more about Carter, Ace and Leo.
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    A bittersweet ending. Carter is arrested. Leo and Ace parting the way they did was heartbreaking for the both of them. It's goodbye, but hopefully they meet again.
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    Our four need to plan, before they rush into there next battle.
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    Chapter 14

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14

    Sam has been removed as a player, safe with Ben's Aunt. Pink becomes Green, for her failure. Justin thinks he was doing, a liability, so the GM removes him from the board. That leaves Ben and Tim. Tim is so angry, he wants to kick ass and hurt the GM. The GM is winning for know, but he’s left Ben and Tim in the game, will that be his downfall.
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    Chapter 49

    chris191070 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter 49

    Awesome chapter. I'm glad Shaun kept his job, his Spanish has really improved.
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    Chapter 1

    chris191070 commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter 1

    That was awesome
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    That was a wonderful chapter. Everyone happy and grateful to Maggie/Grandma that they don’t need to move.
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    Chapter 1

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Awesome chapter. Simon sharing with demon and Charlie making out with a demon. This should be fun.
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    Prologue

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Prologue

    That was hilarious. Tying the boyfriend up and hiding on top of the fridge, all because of a love potion.
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    Chapter 13

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13

    That's to gentle, she needs to be publicly humiliated, along with the rope and electric cattle prod.
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    Chapter 13

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13

    That was a brutal chapter, it's not just a game anymore. They are playing with people's lives, there friendship and state of mind. Sam is just a 14 year old kid, who they attacked. They took everything from him, especially his friendship. It's no wonder he's become mentally unstable. That was a brutal ending to the chapter, two boys both mentally braking down.
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    Leo, gave Carter a few home truths. Carter of course tried to deflect them, he needs to be punished for what he has done.
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    Paul has settled in nicely with the team. He's enjoying the after game activities, only one step left for him to take.
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    Call to Action

    chris191070 commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in Call to Action

    Arlo and friends, discover that the Queen is killing the city.
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    @Mikiesboy has given us a wonderful story, that will make us stop and think. A truly amazing story of love, lost and found. We join Lonnie as he stumbles through loss, grief and the many emotions that it left behind. Loss is never an easy for those left behind and tim has shown us that it's never easy for those we lost. Give it a read, you will not be disappointed. Highly recommended.
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    Chapter 6

    chris191070 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Chapter 6

    I really enjoyed this tim x A truly wonderful story of love lost and found. Lonnie has found love twice. The conversation between Lonnie and Leo in the barn, was good way to end there relationship. We don't know what happens when we die, but Lonnie will always have the memories of Leo. A perfect ending. Thanks for writing this x
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    Chapter 11

    chris191070 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Who is Hank? Ex Millatry it sounds like.
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    Despite Marcus hurting so bad at the moment, he finally got Hunter to reveal the truth. Hunter is still a bully, but had learned to hide it.
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    Chapter 16

    chris191070 commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 16

    It was a lucky escape for them.
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