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House of Cards: Renewal
chris191070 replied to Page Scrawler's topic in Headstall's Paddock's Headstall's Topics
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House of Cards: Renewal
chris191070 replied to Page Scrawler's topic in Headstall's Paddock's Headstall's Topics
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Awesome chapter. I'm glad Shaun kept his job, his Spanish has really improved.
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That was awesome
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That was a wonderful chapter. Everyone happy and grateful to Maggie/Grandma that they don’t need to move.
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Awesome chapter. Simon sharing with demon and Charlie making out with a demon. This should be fun.
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That was hilarious. Tying the boyfriend up and hiding on top of the fridge, all because of a love potion.
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That's to gentle, she needs to be publicly humiliated, along with the rope and electric cattle prod.
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That was a brutal chapter, it's not just a game anymore. They are playing with people's lives, there friendship and state of mind. Sam is just a 14 year old kid, who they attacked. They took everything from him, especially his friendship. It's no wonder he's become mentally unstable. That was a brutal ending to the chapter, two boys both mentally braking down.
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Liar, Liar, Groomer Fired
chris191070 commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Liar, Liar, Groomer Fired
Leo, gave Carter a few home truths. Carter of course tried to deflect them, he needs to be punished for what he has done. -
Game Night Revelations
chris191070 commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Game Night Revelations
Paul has settled in nicely with the team. He's enjoying the after game activities, only one step left for him to take. -
Arlo and friends, discover that the Queen is killing the city.
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House of Cards: Renewal
chris191070 replied to Page Scrawler's topic in Headstall's Paddock's Headstall's Topics
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@Mikiesboy has given us a wonderful story, that will make us stop and think. A truly amazing story of love, lost and found. We join Lonnie as he stumbles through loss, grief and the many emotions that it left behind. Loss is never an easy for those left behind and tim has shown us that it's never easy for those we lost. Give it a read, you will not be disappointed. Highly recommended.
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I really enjoyed this tim x A truly wonderful story of love lost and found. Lonnie has found love twice. The conversation between Lonnie and Leo in the barn, was good way to end there relationship. We don't know what happens when we die, but Lonnie will always have the memories of Leo. A perfect ending. Thanks for writing this x
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Who is Hank? Ex Millatry it sounds like.
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Chapter 9 - The Mask Falls
chris191070 commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 9 - The Mask Falls
Despite Marcus hurting so bad at the moment, he finally got Hunter to reveal the truth. Hunter is still a bully, but had learned to hide it. -
It was a lucky escape for them.
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This is a witty and entertaining story that will drag you in from the very first page. A supernatural story, featuring demons and more. It all starts on a train journey with a 73 year old professor and a 17 year old boy, who are forced to swap bodies. Read on to discover the wonderful cast of characters and there entertaining adventures. The author has promised us at least 3 more book.
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I'm loving Chloe, she likes bossing the boys around. A great ending and I look forward to the next book.
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Justin needs to pay better attention. The group needs to work together, whilst playing the game.
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The GM has probably made his first big mistake, by giving Tim power. Tim will learn the game and fast, he's out to destroy them. Like they have destroyed many people.
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The Cat's out of the Bag
chris191070 commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in The Cat's out of the Bag
I think Kilby will reveal the truth very soon, as he feels guilty lying to Edward. Gran an Caleb have argued, they will soon reconcile. -
Everyone is starting to form new lives. Kitt has work and a place to stay, but doesn't have happiness. Matt has applied for university, but is missing Kitt. Mateo is lonely. The parents are slowly falling apart.
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Arlo needs to work out how to defeat what holds him. Whilst he's waiting, he wants a night with Godwin and Coradiel.
