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    Chapter 15

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15

    That was a brutal chapter. We see what the game has done to Tim, as he suffers a breakdown. Hitting Marc and vandalising the trophy case. The only person that is left to help save him is Ben. The GM will not know how to handle this episode, he is without a blue and pink archivist. They need to remove orange.
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    I'm pleased Kilby was brave enough to tell Edward the truth. The perfect father and son moment.
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    Stephen is lucky to be alive. Tom and Mateo, both know the truth about Kitt. Our boys are getting closer to being reunited.
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    Ardent

    chris191070 commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Ardent

    Interesting chapter, with a nice twist and a great cliffhanger. Sean was having trouble, because of pain in the butt. Gabriel was distracted by thoughts of Sean. These guys need a rematch. Was Tom set up?
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    Ardent

    chris191070 commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Ardent

    Interesting chapter, with a nice twist and a great cliffhanger. Sean was having trouble, because of pain in the butt. Gabriel was distracted by thoughts of Sean. These guys need a rematch. Was Tom set up?
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    When will Ollie and Logan talk properly, they need to clear the air. Loved the friction between Ollie and Alex.
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    When will Ollie and Logan talk properly, they need to clear the air. Loved the friction between Ollie and Alex.
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    Arkona Palace

    chris191070 commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in Arkona Palace

    When will the villains learn.
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    We rejoin Detective Jules Ross. As he goes about solving, his latest case. Give it a read, you will not be disappointed.
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    Chapter 1

    chris191070 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Chapter 1

    An awesome chapter. A fantastic way to wrap up a murder mystery. Great characters and a wonderful ending.
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    Divine Delays

    chris191070 commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Divine Delays

    Chaos ahead, if they are making plans.
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    A wonderful chapter
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    Chapter 18

    chris191070 commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 18

    Through all the battles, Kaylen, Ronan and Thomas stood firm. They are showing there love for each other in private, but true squires by day.
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    First Blood

    chris191070 commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in First Blood

    Is this practice, before the main event
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    Chapter 2

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2

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    Chapter 2

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I love Mrs Hartley, she's adorable as a mother. They are gonna be regular customers in that shop.
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    Chapter 2

    chris191070 commented on J92's story chapter in Chapter 2

    The story of how Tom and Arjan broke up, whilst they still loved each other was quite sad.
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    A beautiful chapter. Tom finally knows the truth from Kitt. Tom has met Matt, but wouldn't reveal anything about Kitt. Tom will be important in bringing Matt and Kitt together, but not until Kitt is ready.
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    We have Ace a psychology student, in a toxic relationship with Carter. Not the uni experience he was after. Along comes Leo, a frat leader. Who offers Ace a way to escape his toxic relationship. It comes with rules, No Sex, No Kissing and No Falling in Love. Read on to discover much more about Carter, Ace and Leo.
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    A bittersweet ending. Carter is arrested. Leo and Ace parting the way they did was heartbreaking for the both of them. It's goodbye, but hopefully they meet again.
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    Our four need to plan, before they rush into there next battle.
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    Chapter 14

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14

    Sam has been removed as a player, safe with Ben's Aunt. Pink becomes Green, for her failure. Justin thinks he was doing, a liability, so the GM removes him from the board. That leaves Ben and Tim. Tim is so angry, he wants to kick ass and hurt the GM. The GM is winning for know, but he’s left Ben and Tim in the game, will that be his downfall.
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