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  1. chris191070

    Chapter 21

    Thanks for a wonderful story, i really enjoyed this stage of Jody's journey.
  2. I wonder if Mum will ever except Oliver's sexuality.
  3. chris191070

    Chapter 19

    Greg and his council are getting a technological upgrade and a new coat of arms.
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    Chapter 11

    When Will runs for President. The Secret Service are gonna have there hands full trying to guard two fourteen year old teenagers.
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    Chapter 11

    I feel sorry for Will, in his role of Dad watching the boys grow up. With Tommy being so smart I don't think the boys will need much of a talk.
  6. That was intense. Michael is not just an idiot, he is clueless as well. Percy saved Krista, but doesn't see himself as a hero. Five was distraught, when he saw Percy hurt. You can see the love between the two of them.
  7. You can post a chapter from both stories as they are different, so post Gabriel's Gambit in the morning and Frosted Hearts in the afternoon.
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    Chapter 11

    I'm surprised Will didn't choke on his coffee, when Jacob asked what use is a long tongue.
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    Chapter 11

    The Democrats are doing all the legal work and helping with the information needed to allow Will to reject VP and launch his Camgain for President. Jacob and Tommy think they are doing so well, in hiding there relationship from Will, but they are not.
  10. It's good to see Liam, happy to spend some time with Adrian. Friendship is important.
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    Chapter 2

    I like Kaylen.
  12. Louis did good.
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    Chapter 7

    Tarquin has revealed to Oliver, how much of a monster he is and how he has control of Orel.
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    Chapter 7

    Tarquin definetly needs a session with Bubba, with Lydia managing the show with Finn, Orel and Olivers help
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    Chapter 10

    Andrew has confirmed to Biden and Trump, that he is alive and Well. Running the Canadian Resistance Force. Will is gonna let the Democrats sort out the legality of Clause Four. Of course Biden and Trump, don't realise that Will is a caged animal, who is ready to fight.
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    Chapter 26

    Nice cliffhanger. I hope Nate's Dad has calmed down.
  17. chris191070

    Track 28

    Jasper needs to talk to Ryan, even if it's a quick hello.
  18. I'm looking forward to seeing if I can come up with something for this year's anthology.
  19. chris191070

    Chapter 38

    Coop is a hero, he saved Nick by the knife for him. Benevti killed Cochran. Adam, the boys and Helen were all near by, as they waited for an ambulance. What an emotional chapter.
  20. chris191070

    Chapter 3

    That would be a fascinating story.
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    Chapter 6

    Unfortunately, that is very true.
  22. chris191070

    Chapter 6

    Finn and Orel have started the slow process of healing. We are starting to find out that Tarquin, was a bigger monster than first thought. He had a PI following Finn for 10 years, using money from the trust.
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