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    Chapter 1

    chris191070 commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 1

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    Chapter 13

    chris191070 commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 13

    A beautiful chapter. Joshua and Oliva, make a cute couple and will be good for each other. I just loved how Daniel and Kevin kept taking looks at each other, a friendship developing.
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    My Creature Feature story has already been sent.
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    Carlos Ramirez entered the subway car holding a paper bag in his left hand. The bag temporarily housed his favorite treat from Dunkin’ Donuts, a cream filled, powdered donut. In his right hand he clutched a container of black coffee, no sugar. It was past rush hour, and he had no trouble getting a seat. As soon as he was seated, he began to eat his donut and sip his coffee. Carlos had overslept that morning. He was so late for work, he neither shaved nor showered. He had a very spars
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    Let's find out what happens when Andy loses his mobile on the subway and Carlos finds it.
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    Chapter 5

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Well that's one way to have sex, pouring of rain, muddy and in a layby at Beachy Head. I've lived in both Eastbourne and Brighton.
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    Wow, I certainly didn't see that coming. George needs to watch his back. Ed isn't right in the head, to murder Claude, just for a bit of teasing.
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    Chapter 3

    chris191070 commented on Inkognito's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Very dramatic. At least they are out of the water, for now.
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    That sounds amazing and very yummy😋
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    A great vacation had by Jeff and his Mum. I like Paul already, he sounds the perfect roommate for Jeff.
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    Chapter 19 S3

    chris191070 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 19 S3

    Cruella has really gone a step to far this time, she deserves all the shit Devin and Mac get on her and the car. Especially as they are graduating and not coming back.
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    Ace and Leo seem to be settling into there state of relationship, where Leo gets Ace, but under Aces rules.
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    Chapter 13

    chris191070 commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 13

    JJ has grown in confidence and his new look proves that. Dallas and JJ are gonna be good for each other.
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    Elijah is such a stand out person, he's helping Simon so much with his recovery. They both have things they need to talk about, but neither of them are ready for that sort of discussion.
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    Chapter 20

    chris191070 commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 20

    A beautiful chapter chapter. Elias has formed a great friendship with John and Ethan. Janet sounds perfect for designing John and Ethan new home.
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    Snippets

    chris191070 commented on Late to the party's story chapter in Snippets

    Awesome 👌
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    Awesome deep dive @Myr Some wonderful pieces of writing in this dive.
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    Chapter 8

    chris191070 commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in Chapter 8

    That's good news. You can think of even 🔥 chapters whilst waiting.
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