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A great start to the expedition.
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Well that was an interesting chapter. Jeisa and Leo need to find common ground. Leo needs Jeisa to teach him everything he needs to know.
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The Drop In Centre 3
chris191070 replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Topics
I'm in Crete, at a beach bar with a cold bottle of cider Have a good weekend all -
What a wonderful chapter. Great back story. With plenty of love, fun and tickles.
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The Bridges of Parke County
chris191070 commented on Altimexis's story chapter in The Bridges of Parke County
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Sinclair might have made a mistake asking Enrico to kill Ezra. Templeman Is slowly working things out.
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Great start, a hidden entrance found.
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Adam and Ross are good for each other.
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Awesome chapter
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Part 2: Sitting on Jace's Lap
chris191070 commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 2: Sitting on Jace's Lap
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A wonderful short romantic story.
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An awesome battle, it's good ro see good triumph over evil, everyone killed except Zereth. Kieran and Rory have a beautiful baby boy. Cian blessed Desmond and gave him forgiveness. A perfect chapter.
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So a 40,000 word epilogue, would be perfect.
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Finally, Jasper and Ryan are communicating. They make a cute couple, but things are not gonna be easy for them.
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A great chapter, things are starting to happen. The friendly faces the sub crew are expecting, are not coming, instead they get mercenaries who are out to cause mayhem and maximum damage. Will the HMS Richmond arrive in time, to save the day.
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Part 7: Mission Successful
chris191070 commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 7: Mission Successful
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Angus doesn't seem happy, with a lawyer speaking to his clients and suing him.
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A wonderful use of the prompt #296. A short, but we'll written piece on what it's like to suffer from a hidden disability.
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Wow, what a wonderful piece of writing. Many of us have hidden disabilities, myself included (I have epilepsy) Thanks for the understanding policeman and his medical card.
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The conversation between JJ and Pete was very impressive. There's something about Dallas, he looks like he's missing his friend JJ, the way he keeps searching him out. The dangers on this trip are immense, but so far no accidents.
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The Drop In Centre 3
chris191070 replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Topics
Nope, not until tomorrow. 4.30pm flight from Manchester Airport, to Crete. (I'm off school for 5 weeks) So depending on WiFi coverage, I'll not be around as much for the next 12 days. Have a good day all. -
Awesome chapter. Alot going on. I'm wondering if Marie is still going to be bitcy. Amy, the new Nanny sounds really nice.
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Equipment sorted, permits granted. All ready for the expedition. With there being a small glitch, the engineer that operates the machine from Dad's company is female.
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With the brief synopsis you have given. The title sounds perfect. You have both Will and Andrew possibly needing to give order's, without knowing who gives Carter his order's.
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This was a truly awesome battle, everything was perfect about it. Cian giving his blessing of the relationship, perfect. Elion and Ezra completing their love bond was beautiful. Them winning the battle just leaves us to see them regroup all together and us to see them start to resurrect the two kingdom's.
