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    Chapter 19

    Brian saved Alex and helped him escape, completing the mission. What about Julian, he was told to only come out of hiding to Alex's voice. Broken hearts for both Brian and Alex.
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    Chapter 40

    Well things are no better for Jeisa and Leo. Devin has fallen out with Cai, after Cai called him names.
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    White Phase

    Well Mason, managed to fire his rifle with reasonable success. Someone who can't see properly, shouldn't be trusted with a gun.
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    Chapter 8

    Well we learn alot from this chapter. I love the DG, the quite, silent type who projects power. Yuri proved himself useful. Caleb knows Silas, but going against could be his downfall. Need is completely bugged up and tracke, not good.
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    Chapter 8

  6. Will Jason ever learn, straight boys are bad for you.
  7. Awesome chapter
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    Chapter 7

    Thanks for a great chapter to end the story with.
  9. What a wonderful chapter. Dexter has made a complete transformation because of Reece. The food sounded amazing.
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    Chapter 44

    We're going on a road trip. They are not stuck for studios, to produce masterpieces.
  11. So Jason and Konstatin finally have sex together
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    Hammer Time

    Well Mason certainly put Sakis to use.
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    Chapter 18

    The drone saves the data. But Brian is a prisoner of Skinner.
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    Chapter 18

    Is that Brian, ready for Alex in the panic room.
  15. The Hokey Cokey Song You put your left arm in, your left arm out In, out, in, out, you shake it all about You do the Hokey Cokey and you turn around That's what it's all about. Whoa-o the Hokey Cokey Whoa-o the Hokey Cokey Whoa-o the Hokey Cokey Knees bent, arms stretched Rah! Rah! Rah! You put your right arm in, your right arm out In, out, in, out, you shake it all about You do the Hokey Cokey and you turn around That's what it's all about. Whoa-o the Hokey Cokey Whoa-o the Hokey Cokey Whoa-o the Hokey Cokey Knees bent, arms stretched Rah! Rah! Rah! You put your left leg in, your left leg out In, out, in, out, you shake it all about You do the Hokey Cokey and you turn around That's what it's all about. Whoa-o the Hokey Cokey Whoa-o the Hokey Cokey Whoa-o the Hokey Cokey Knees bent, arms stretched Rah! Rah! Rah! You put your right leg in, your right leg out In, out, in, out, you shake it all about You do the Hokey Cokey and you turn around That's what it's all about. So that's what they were practicing.
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    Track 6

    Jasper is getting drunk for no reason. Ryan hasn't seen or read the message from Damien. Jasper should talk to Ryan, instead of assuming the worst.
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    Chapter 7

    A sad and emotional filled chapter. We witness the growing friendship between Jacob and Tommy. For just a short time we see the men enjoying themselves, with the sprogs on the new ice rink at thw PM house. In that moment the boys can enjoy themselves as children again.
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    Chapter 7

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    Chapter 1

    I'm glad you enjoyed my tale. Thanks for reading 😊
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    Chapter 6

    Thought provoking
  21. Kris worried as Mum isn't answering her phone.
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    Chapter 5

    Alexis is dead Is this connected to the boy, they are talking to. Helen and Rick will be involved with the investigation .
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