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Looking forward to spending more time Ariel and Tyler.
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It was great to spend more time with Jon and Rob. There love for each other is charming, sweet and beautiful.
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Tomorrow is D-day. Jules and Ryder are coming to meet Margot and Owen at the wedding reception.
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That a nice hot 🔥 shower and not from just the water.
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A wonderful chapter, bring on the next course.
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The Peculiar Predicament of Maximilian Hawthorn
chris191070 reviewed Topher Lydon's story in Fiction
We meet Max an 11 year old, who controls everything in school, including black markets, organisational skills and reducing his form teacher to tears. But when Max meets Gabriel, a theatre kid. He finds out things he never knew. Read on to discover more about Max, Gabriel and there friends.-
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That was brilliant.
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I like Max, he thought he had everything under control.
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That was a great chapter, it felt so real. Kent has Randy for know.
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Chapter 1: WARREN AND ME
chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1: WARREN AND ME
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She might surprise us one day.
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For Rachel to have spent two years searching for Taggart, we know she doesn't trust Zane Yoder. We finally got our first glimpse of Tag's branding, Ash will wait for answers. Tag doesn't know about how wealthy he is, the land holdings is the most important part of the trust fund. I suspect he owns a huge percentage of the Yoder Ranch and Zane doesn't know that. Let the real battle begin.
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For Rachel to have spent two years searching for Taggart, we know she doesn't trust Zane Yoder. We finally got our first glimpse of Tag's branding, Ash will wait for answers. Tag doesn't know about how wealthy he is, the land holdings is the most important part of the trust fund. I suspect he owns a huge percentage of the Yoder Ranch and Zane doesn't know that. Let the real battle begin.
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A fairly good chapter, but if they keep getting shorter.
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Flynn has a huge choice to make. Flynn enjoyed kissing Gary.
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Charles Carrington was bold, giving the Kratota script to Johnny, when he was enjoying a night out. The meal sounded amazing. Kratota has lit a spark in Johnny. I think Violet will be impressed.
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That was kind funny at the end Marcus being introduced to porn.
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Those pages are massive evidence, of what Tyler did to Caleb. Things are slowly getting revealed.
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Both Ryder and Owen have had there lives shaped by there families. Owen has had his life dictated to him for 18 years, change is not something he can handle without getting overwhelmed. Owen needs to talk to someone. I hope Ryder and Owen will both survive, these difficult moments in there relationship.
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Some promising developments, for our investigators
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I've just reviewed my 731 story.
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We join Darien and Wylan as they are finally living in peace. The Vanguard are enjoying the peace and quiet. But Darien has a son, Arteus. Unfortunately for Darien, Arteus is about to become the most desired teenager in Europe. The Lords, Religious fanatics, The King's of Frankia and England and there is an evil witch somewhere where in the mix. Areteus Haskal is about to thrown into a battle of teenage romance, to see which one helps shape the future of the Kingdom. New friends and Old friends are there to protect Arteus. Bring on the teenagers. Give it a read, you will not be disappointed.
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A great ending. Everything wrapped up and shipshape. Rico has a new name and his Baba Stephen and Baba Ashot. Casimir and Thomas have each other. Arteus has Cecile. All things are good for the teenagers.
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That was a nice spontaneous date for Ryan and Jasper. Despite the rain, they had great fun.
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I'm enjoying this experiment.
