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  1. chris191070

    Straight Lines

    That was a difficult moment for both brothers, but they are both just realizing that they need to be apart. They can't have what they desire.
  2. chris191070

    Prologue

    Awesome beginning to the story, as we learn more about Kent and his love for Ken.
  3. The wildfire on the moors near where I live, was started deliberately by someone setting off fireworks.
  4. There's never gonna be a good time to reveal the truth, Owen and Margot need to rip off the band-aid and admit everything about them was a lie. It will hurt alot of people when the truth is revealed.
  5. I wonder if she swallows 🤔 or spits.
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    Chapter 20

    Johnny and Sam are slowly settling into there new home, putting there mark on it. It will be interesting how Johnny and Sam, handle him being famous going forward.
  7. Owen finally reached breaking point. Beth was amazing, she understands Owen fully. I was so worried that the 8 year old, was gonna be a seahorse. Finally plans are gonna be discussed between the 4 four of them and put in motion. It's good that Ryder, is communicating with Colin. I think Colin will see him at practice.
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    Chapter 16

    Lady Adela, would probably lock the 4 boys in a room together and tell them are to solve there problems, one way or another.
  9. Diana doesn't win Mother of the year, she's enemy number number one. Caleb going voluntarily suprised everyone. Blanchard needs to get involved and fast. Caleb just needs to remember to spit.
  10. I can just see Diana on her knees, mouth open wide giving the judge oral. Just to get a warrant.
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    Chapter 16

    Richard will just have to be on top of Thomas. Whilst Arteus will be on top of Casimir.
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    Chapter 16

    Areteus was magnificent and won the tournament. He good friends with Richard, has Casimir lusting after him. But the three of them need to ensure Thomas has there friendship.
  13. Some amazing stories on this dive, from just a few of our amazing authors. Thanks @Myr for this dive.
  14. That was hot 🔥 Fletcher and August are good for each other. They will learn from each other, as there relationship develops.
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    Chapter 15

    The first day at school went reasonably well for Levi. He's started to form a friendship with Jimmy. Hopefully Jimmy can tell him all about the school a-holes. The nickname isn't to bad and will soon disappear as he makes friends.
  16. Owen needs to talk to Beth, he's gonna need support when he tells the family. Ryder and Owen ensured they had there own fireworks, when they made love. Ryder needs to make contact with his brother.
  17. Grey Harbour has quite a few interesting people, who were all being blackmailed by Vicki and all have motive to murder her.
  18. The drugs are slowly leaving Caleb's system, he's starting to remember things. They need to keep him in the safe environment.
  19. chris191070

    Chapter 1

    A wonderful full of great characters, love and tickles.
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    Chapter 15

    Thomas, wearing Vanguard Colours, using Vanguard tactics to defeat Gautier. His father isn't gonna be happy.
  21. chris191070

    Chapter 14

    This was a wonderfully moving chapter. Rico got his Baba Stephen, Granny Abela and Uncle Darien. Baba Ashot has to be told it's a boy. Rico is gonna be a mischievous boy, who is loved by everyone.
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    Track 20

    This should be amazing, Ryan proposing by song.
  23. Things are slowly unravelling and Theo, Jack and Vince will be reunited.
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