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    Chapter 14 S2

    Excellent chapter. A nice relaxing camping trip, with plenty of fishing. Rudely disturbed by a serious crime taking place.
  2. Manny and Rocky have reeled me in. Rocky is gonna be interesting, especially as he knows his Dad's past history. Manny adopting a kid, he'll do it for the money.
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    Prologue

    Sounds interesting and intriguing.
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    Catching Up

    They make a great family, full of love and tickles for there son.
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    Chapter 17

    At least the guy had the sense to plead guilty, stops a whole lot of pain for the victims. Ollie seems a completely different kid, happy and has friends. Everything is coming together nicely.
  6. Great chapter. I'm glad Simba was allowed to travel home, after brief questions about his time in Tanzania.
  7. Great questions and answers. The new story sounds intriguing.
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    Chapter 37

    A wonderful chapter. A great time had by all.
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    Chapter 5

    Thanks, I never noticed. Missing lines have been inserted.
  10. Great start. A loving family who enjoy tickles.
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    26. Symbols

    Wonderful
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    Chapter 4

    Awesome. I loved #21 and #22 we can all relate to. Thanks for these tim x
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    Chapter 5

    I'm glad the girls are safe, as for Tom and George
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    Chapter 5

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    Chapter 5

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    Chapter 5

  17. Thanks for these, I enjoyed all of them.
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    M's Secret

    So M is an alien and Connor has a tracking device.
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    Chapter 5

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    Chapter 5

  21. Tom and George arrived at their history class the next day, and Robyn pounced on them. “Joy hasn’t shown up yet, and Carol told me about your visit.” She spoke so fast; the boys could hardly understand her. “I wish I had been there. I may have some pertinent information.” “Talk,” George commanded. “Joy told me that she was going to have dinner with Ahmed at the Old Union Hotel. I did everything I could to talk her out of it. She just laughed at me. She said that not only was she g
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    Chapter 49

    We needed a light chapter. So Billy has his reasons to piss off the judge and Trevor knows, interesting 🤔 I'm glad Bryan was able to talk to his Dad's about feeling down.
  23. The retreat sounds and looks amazing. All friends departing for Uni and further education. I think Hugh and Koen will always be friends to Oscar, especially now they know about his retreat.
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    Chapter 4

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    Chapter 4

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