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  1. The embassy has come together nicely, with some friendly faces as staff. It will be interesting when the Embassy is open for business and the Ambassador starts his job.
  2. chris191070

    Chapter 12

    Danny has feelings for Jake, that are gonna give him some big decisions to make. I think Nate has Danny worked out and it doesn't bother him. Then you have to face the dreaded questions from Mum, let's hope his alibi of being with Nate was watertight. Whatever Llachie has done, I hope he stayed safe.
  3. Another fascinating chapter, with a great history lesson.
  4. What the surviving 10 mins.
  5. Awesome chapter. The family are coming together nicely, with so much love and tickles for each other.
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    Chapter 29

    I think you both have most of the same readership.
  7. Your brain 🧠 blown up, we would have a different ending if you survived 10 mins to write it.
  8. I always use demerara sugar when making Apple crumble. I also use demerara sugar when I make flapjacks.
  9. Perfect for a wet Friday
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    Chapter 29

    Ruby needs neutralising. I hope Chris and Andre sort her out, good and proper and Ollie gets what is his. Ollie was generous towards Toby, which was good to see. The Dad's having to wipe away a tear, was a beautiful moment.
  11. Wonderful chapter. The Ambassador will soon find himself very busy, at least he has a good staff.
  12. A fascinating sci-fi which will fill you laughter and introduce you to some amazing people. Plenty of wonderful ideas, that will astonish you. Highly recommend giving it a read.
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  13. An interesting take on sci-fi, but a wonderful story. Just think what those powers could do in the wrong hands.
  14. I'll have to read it later, 6.30am and on way to work.
  15. chris191070

    Chapter 11

    Danny and Nate are both growing up, but they have a great friendship. Jake and Danny are getting closer it looks like, dinner, wacky backy and what next.
  16. chris191070

    Chapter 34 S2

    A nice pleasant Thanksgiving had by all.
  17. What a fantastic way to save the world. Eliminate a few world leaders.
  18. chris191070

    Chapter 10

    Lachlan, Nate’s brother sounds a bit of a badass who deals with problems.
  19. Only a couple. I think @Lee Wilson has scrambled all of our brains.
  20. chris191070

    Chapter 8

    Awesome chapter. Greg has certainly been left with a huge mess to clean up. It's no surprise that you can add crook, to everything else the old Baron was doing.
  21. Famous Five, Nancy Drew, Hardy Boys, The Hobbit and then in later life, Alex Rider, Harry Potter
  22. I don't like faggots.
  23. chris191070

    Chapter 9

    Poor Jake. At least Danny was able to clean him up, before the Police arrived.
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