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Well that wasn't the ending I was expecting after such a joyful chapter. You handled Ollies story with great care.
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Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
chris191070 commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
Well I'm glad I waited until after work to read that. That was hot š„ š„µ -
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When Ken took Joe home, Lt. Morton had a very disquieting thought. Joe Vincente had pointed out that Ken might be on the perps āto kill list.ā He shuddered to think that someone might want to do harm to Ken. He whipped out his cell phone and asked to speak to Det. Canella. When Jim Canella got on the phone, Morton issued a few instructions, and the two men hung up. All the Brownstones on Joeās street were built about the same time and had similar architecture. To get to the front door, you
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What a great start to Book 4. I love the way Charlie is developing. Unfortunately I can see a showdown between the football team and Greg and his friends. I just hope Alex doesn't get hurt in the crossfire.
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Holidays with Grandparents
chris191070 commented on quokka's story chapter in Holidays with Grandparents
Great chapter. It seems Oscar won't get to spend as much time with the grandparents, as he would like. His parents want him home. -
Coconut, mushroom and anchovie pizza.
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Book 4, can't wait to read this.
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Interesting chapter
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Interesting chapter. A hearing date, but no clue as to what for. Silas probably fucked up all the cases, because the clients were gay. Next chapter please š
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I love crumpets, with plenty of butter
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Especially pineapple š
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This rewrite gives us more depth and complexity as thoughts and emotions are explored. If you thought the original was good, then you will enjoy this rewrite as it's easier to read, but much more detailed. This is a wonderful story of intrigue and adventure, that comes highly recommended.
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Bonus Chapter - Going Home, The Final Leg
chris191070 commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Bonus Chapter - Going Home, The Final Leg
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That looks yummy š
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Fred has lodged two appeals. Will he be successful in both?
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I left no tease/cliffhanger. That would be evil.
