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    Chapter 1

    I look forward to Arteus, resuming his fight with Richard. Diplomacy, is gonna be more difficult that a battle
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    Prologue

    I love Arteus, he definitely takes after Darien.
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    The Quiet Boy

    Awesome start. I look forward to more of Brian and Tommy's story.
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    Chapter 16

    Johnny is ready to conquer Hollywood. Violet gave him a huge bonus and wants to work with him again. Bruce ends there relationship, by taking a new job and moving away. Whilst Johnny is sad at the moment, he will survive.
  5. Ximo needs to follow his Dad’s advice. He also needs to be more careful.
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    Chapter 15

    Alvarez brought Ephraim in for justice. Devon stopped him hanging him. Acosta needs dealing with, he's the one who ultimately caused Jeb death it seems.
  7. Margot is being very manipulative, I'm beginning to dislike her. I like Jules, her question to Owen 'what do you want'. Very Sad that Owen had never been asked that. He needs to decide what he wants, if Ryder contacts him. To be truthful or allow Margot to continue deciding his life.
  8. A brilliant chapter. August and Fletcher were very lucky, that Rob only saw them talking and not kissing and cuddling.
  9. Some truly awesome stories on this dive, from some of our amazing authors. Thanks @Myr for an awesome dive.
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    Chapter 11

    Levi is slowly meeting all of Matt and Lukes friends and is getting a picture of what life will be like living with them.
  11. There is something bothering Ryder, that we don't know about yet. Whilst Ryder might have overreacted, he had every reason too. Owen has kept alot hidden from Ryder, only revealing half truths. I think Ryder will message first, once he's had time to cool down.
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    Chapter 14

    The Elders are evil and deserve everything they recieve.
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    Chapter 14

    Devon did his duty and returned Jeb to his parents.
  14. Martin has explained about his job role, his fortune and revealed all. Things are not gonna be that simple, there's bound to be turmoil ahead.
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    Chapter 17

    A great ending. They finished a war, by killing Reynard. They have a new home to go to.
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    Track 16

    Interesting times ahead with Ryan quitting the band.
  17. Jack, Theo and Vince are all being mentored, with separate challenges
  18. So must power, in so few words. We all need someone to sit and listen at times. Thanks Tim x
  19. I hope with Bert recognising Taggart, and revealing his surname doesn't set Taggart back. He was just beginning to open up to Ash. Hopefully when they talk later, he reveals a little bit more of his past.
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