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    The Change

    chris191070 commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Change

    That was a wonderful chapter. Brian was a scared teenager, who didn't know how to tell Tommy.
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    Margot is still being very manipulative of Owen, she doesn't care what he wants. That scene between Ellie and Owen, Owen was being truthful and talking about himself.
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    Stupid auto correct
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    This is a wonderfully written story of the Wild West in 1891. We meet Devon, a young man banished from his community and hunted by the boys, who helped get him banished. We have Alverez, a bandito who has a six shooter, a stolen fortune and a well pampered cat. You need to read on to discover how they meet, the danger that is created and much more. Give it a read, you will not be disappointed.
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    Chapter 16

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 16

    An awesome story, with a great. Acosta fell out of the window, and shot himself 3 times. Poor Jeb racked with guilt, committed suicide, so he wouldn't be hanged. Devon and Alvarez are together.
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    Chapter 2

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Julian performing the deed, to get an heir. Obviously turkey basters didn't exist just yet.
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    Chapter 2

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Arteus sees a wonderful new sword from the king, he doesn't realise he's being manipulated by Radsolsv.
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    Owen needs to man up, he's just letting Margot run his life. Margot is a great spinner of lies, she has made this wedding so believable. Has she stopped to think that her planning and lies, is probably hurting Jules.
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    Congrats on your GAversary.
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    You've written some great stories. I look forward to many more.
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    So OCD isn't one crusty dick
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    Chapter Eleven

    chris191070 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Eleven

    Does She Blow
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    Chapter 1

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I look forward to Arteus, resuming his fight with Richard. Diplomacy, is gonna be more difficult that a battle
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    Prologue

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Prologue

    I love Arteus, he definitely takes after Darien.
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    The Quiet Boy

    chris191070 commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Quiet Boy

    Awesome start. I look forward to more of Brian and Tommy's story.
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    Chapter 16

    chris191070 commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 16

    Johnny is ready to conquer Hollywood. Violet gave him a huge bonus and wants to work with him again. Bruce ends there relationship, by taking a new job and moving away. Whilst Johnny is sad at the moment, he will survive.
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    Ximo needs to follow his Dad’s advice. He also needs to be more careful.
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