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  1. @mastershakeme is gonna take us all on the ride of our lives, with her latest story.
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    Chapter Nine

    It was good to see Ryder and Owen. Owen has revealed alot about himself, but we don't know much about Ryder yet. Owen is gonna go to the diner on Saturday, to meet Ryder because he's curious.
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    Chapter 12

    That was such a hard chapter to read. Ephraim is a brutal murderer, who escaped Alvarez this time. But he will get what is coming to him. Jeb's death whilst being sad, means that Devon and Alvarez will need each other.
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    Chapter 15

    Erik and Wylan meet up and have plenty to discuss. Seb will be worried.
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks for the wonderful comment and reading Barnaby's latest adventure 😀
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    To the Team

    Frank has built a fantastic team, which works even better now that grumpy Frank has disappeared. Marc and Frank are good for each other.
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    To the Team

    Frank has built a fantastic team, which works even better now that grumpy Frank has disappeared. Marc and Frank are good for each other.
  8. Fantastic story. Zach is in for a complicated night, when Bill his Dad enters the competition.
  9. Yes, it has. 20,000 more words than Circumnavigation.
  10. Thanks 😊 It’s greatly appreciated.
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks for the great comment and reading Barnaby's latest adventure 😀
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks for the wonderful comments and reading Barnaby’s latest adventure 😀
  13. When teenage logistics clerks Leo and Julian accidentally trigger a catastrophic reality warp at work, an enigmatic, waistcoat-wearing capybara named Barnaby steps in to help them untangle the timeline. Their reality-bending adventure ultimately leads the boyfriends to unexpected corporate power and a very lavish upgrade for their favorite grumpy resident at the local zoo.
  14. The Winning Ticket It all started in the blistering summer of 1980, a decade of neon windbreakers, cassette tapes, and, for Julian and his boyfriend Leo, a shared apartment that smelled permanently of cheap hair gel and instant coffee. They were both nineteen, skinny, and hopelessly broke—the definition of two neighborhood twinks trying to survive the Philadelphia heatwave. To escape their sweltering living room, they practically lived at the local zoo, using the free afternoon hours to wan
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    Life's a Zoo

    This combines prompts #346 and #347
  16. Wonderful chapter. Don and Symonds need taking down, a peg or two. It's good to see Robbie being more forceful.
  17. Seraphina is a scheming b***h, who thinks Flynn will do what she wants, because of the treatment. Poitr didn't set anything on fire, a miracle. Poitr had to call Gary, when Flynn passed out. At least Potri got to enjoy the shrimp.
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    Chapter 11

    The only person who will get hurt is Jeb. Devon and Alvarez need to sort there potential relationship out.
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    Chapter 14

    They need the protection of the vanguard and fast. Erik rescheduled Dieter, but by fighting off the attackers. He was revealed alot to Reynard.
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    Track 15

    Damien is a self centered prick. Ryan's statement was perfect.
  21. So it was probably attempted murder, definitely not having. Lawrence was definitely the meat, during the hugging to get him warm.
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