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  1. We all like a bit of action and adventure, some fantastic stories in this dive. Thanks @Myr
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    Prologue

    Thanks for writing Ed's story.
  3. This is a spin off from the Clinton Boys. We follow Ed and Claude and get acquainted with there many meetings over a decade. Be careful when reading as there are scenes featuring emotional and physical abuse.
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  4. That was sad in more ways than one. People suffered because of Claude and how violent he was. The outcome was justified, but it was sad.
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    Chapter 11

    That was a hot 🔥 balcony scene. Hopefully they got good footage, that can be used. I think the crew will be very discreet in there comments. If the cabin scene are as hot 🔥 they are in for an amazing movie. With action like that they will be able to make two movies, one for general release and another for video.
  6. James finally stood up to Sam, told him a few home truths. Dad dying like that, is gonna affect Mum. Will she be able to handle the pressure. James is very lucky, to have Evan supporting him. Will Sam turn up for the funeral, turn it into a pantomime or will he have listened to what James said to him. Mum will need the support of both sons.
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    Chapter 31

    Does it come bonded
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    Chapter 31

    The final battle is about to begin. Have Trillion, Ember, Sev, Caleo and Bren practised enough to make the bond work.
  9. Niran is messing up, he didn’t expect everything to be discovered so easily. Advantage Kent.
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    Chapter 10

    You forgot Chief baby sitter
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    Chapter 10

    Mickey's family/crew is a wonderful bunch of misfits. Isaiah, his boyfriend Dimitri, his son Gremlin, maker of mischief
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    Chapter 10

    They have a Gremlin
  13. This is an excellent ghost story. Well worth reading.
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    Chapter 5

    Some letters sounded good and others a curse, reminders of debts to be paid.
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    Chapter 5

    The only one of them not moaning about the rain and mud is Bran. He's keeping them alive with rats for there fresh stew.
  16. Well we meet Theo, the 10 year old tasmanian devil version. Jack and Vee survived his inquisitive nature. Look forward to what happens next
  17. Kevin is just a perv, who likes looking at Caleb. Caleb played with the gay water polo team. Gran rescued him just in time for lunch. Cougars after Caleb, will have to get past Gran.
  18. 👀 this perfectly
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    Chapter 9

    That particular closet, because he's next door to Gremlin.
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    Chapter 9

    Well it does have 3 heads
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    Chapter 9

    Isn't that what Mickey and Isaia use in the shower, to help relieve pressure 🤔
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    Chapter 30

    I've changed my mind, Sev has grown on me.
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