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    Chapter 12

    chris191070 commented on KKirk's story chapter in Chapter 12

    There seems to be a great chemistry between Sky and Brant. 8 weeks in a secluded cabin, should provide plenty of hot sex for the movie.
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    This is the story of Kaylen, a knight and his two squires Ronan and Thomas. But there training leads to much more as the old king dies and a younger king takes over the throne. But enter Prince Louis of France, who has the support of many Lords as the king is unpopular. We then find Kaylen, Thomas and Ronan fighting off enemies galore, whilst pledging allegiance. Read on to discover more in this awesome story.
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    Chapter 31

    chris191070 commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 31

    The perfect ending. Louis defeating. Kaylen takes Ronan and Thomas as his sons. The King makes Kaylen, Earl of Wynthorpe.
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    Great outcome with the Niran situation. It may hold, but I do not think Niran is going to give up that easily. But for know Kent, Marvin and Devon are safe.
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    Chapter 11

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Everything seems too good. They have forgotten something on this planet killed the crew. But enjoy there time as a family.
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    Chapter 11

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Isaiah or Mickey, they would enjoy a good probing
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    Caleb seems to attracting the attention of the girls, there all gonna be disappointed when they find out he's gay. Gran seems to have found someone her own age, to talk too. The next chapter sounds interesting.
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    Chapter 6

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6

    We see what each side is capable of. Radoslav and Rashid are both evil in there own way. Darren is now 3rd in command and can do nothing to stop this. Wylan and Ishan are still connected and both suffering because of this, one who watches, the other who hears.
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    We all like a bit of action and adventure, some fantastic stories in this dive. Thanks @Myr
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    Prologue

    chris191070 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Prologue

    Thanks for writing Ed's story.
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    This is a spin off from the Clinton Boys. We follow Ed and Claude and get acquainted with there many meetings over a decade. Be careful when reading as there are scenes featuring emotional and physical abuse.
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    That was sad in more ways than one. People suffered because of Claude and how violent he was. The outcome was justified, but it was sad.
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    Chapter 11

    chris191070 commented on KKirk's story chapter in Chapter 11

    That was a hot 🔥 balcony scene. Hopefully they got good footage, that can be used. I think the crew will be very discreet in there comments. If the cabin scene are as hot 🔥 they are in for an amazing movie. With action like that they will be able to make two movies, one for general release and another for video.
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    James finally stood up to Sam, told him a few home truths. Dad dying like that, is gonna affect Mum. Will she be able to handle the pressure. James is very lucky, to have Evan supporting him. Will Sam turn up for the funeral, turn it into a pantomime or will he have listened to what James said to him. Mum will need the support of both sons.
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    Chapter 31

    chris191070 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter 31

    Does it come bonded
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    Chapter 31

    chris191070 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter 31

    The final battle is about to begin. Have Trillion, Ember, Sev, Caleo and Bren practised enough to make the bond work.
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    Niran is messing up, he didn’t expect everything to be discovered so easily. Advantage Kent.
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    Chapter 10

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 10

    You forgot Chief baby sitter
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    Have a great day everyone 😀
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    Chapter 10

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Mickey's family/crew is a wonderful bunch of misfits. Isaiah, his boyfriend Dimitri, his son Gremlin, maker of mischief
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    Chapter 10

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 10

    They have a Gremlin
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    This is an excellent ghost story. Well worth reading.
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