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    Chapter 6

    That was a sad chapter, everyone is hurting.
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    Chapter 42 S3

    I don’t like heights, so I'd never be able to do them.
  3. With the number of stories i have reviewed from many fantastic authors, I would struggle with creating something like this. Enjoy your reading Ben.
  4. Kent has finally opened up. He is beginning to realise he likes Marvin, more than just a friend. He needs help to overcome his depression and PTSD, but he's making a start.
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    Chapter 10

    Ricardo, just needs to marry to get the inheritance.
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    Chapter 10

    Ricardo can't have any brains, Simon and Lynix are both married. Where's Matt and Pip when you need them.
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    Chapter 9

    Riley has found Ben's flaw, he now has a project. So they both become trainer and trainee. At least Riley gets his release whilst training Ben, in the art of sex.
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    Chapter 42 S3

    Those ziplines sound amazing. Daniel is good for Clint, it's good that Daniel thanked Mac.
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    Chapter 6

    If kissing does that to Brant, I can’t wait until they get intimatel
  10. Thanks to all the poets, for the wonderful poetry. Thanks to @Valkyrie and the rest of the staff for organising this event.
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    Chapter 9

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    Chapter 22

    Trillion and Ember reunited. Caleo has worked out the truth about Sev, but can't prove it just yet.
  13. A great insight into James.
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    Chapter 13

    Great to see Kieran and Charlie back home. Charlie back at work, just Kieran to find work.
  15. I'm loving this already. Bring on Chapter two.
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    Prologue

    Well that was an interesting method of death.
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    Chapter 13

    Magic healing, simply does its job. Declan is fine.
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    Chapter 9

    Even with 1000 souls, Ricardo isn't likely to let Tyler and Lynix go easily.
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    Chapter 9

    Simon and Taine have acquired the 1000 souls. It's seems Gergio new jacket will light him up like a beacon, he is in for another interesting time.
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    Chapter 8

    Who is teaching who. When will Ben realise that teaching Riley to dissect people, that Riley has disected him.
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