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    Chapter 3

    I didn't get notified on the chapter, but seem to be getting new comments.
  2. The school is old and quirky. I like Ali, but he wasn’t there by chance. He was sent to interrogate Lawrence.
  3. Plenty of interesting stuff in this chapter. Alex's apology was totally shit, he never meant it. Cody an Oliver have a had fight, instead of a talk, means the breakup of best friends. Logan getting Oliver to admit he still loves Cody. Logan saying they shouldn't date. Oliver loving both of them. Alex probably being a total dick towards Cody, whilst in Peru.
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    Chapter 3

    Ben showed his dominant side, when he got Rick to wank. Riley knows what was on the shoe, but not who's.
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    Chapter 3

    Well Ben has claimed Riley, the abandoned pet. Buys him baccy. What happens next, does he keep rewarding the pet.
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks for reading and your wonderful comments 😀
  7. It's good to see them trying again.
  8. A very thought provoking piece of writing. Give it a read.
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  9. Someone has a big trunk or wishful thinking 🤔
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    Chapter 5

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    Chapter 6

    Thanks for reading and your wonderful comments 😀
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    Chapter 1

    So much truth in this poem.
  13. Three wonderful poems, that will have you feeling like a cowboy. Perfect for the anthology.
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    Chapter 1

    These three poems, made me feel like a cowboy.
  15. Three wonderful poems for the anthology. Give them a read.
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  16. I love all of these, especially the 1st one.
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    Chapter 8

    Sam an Graeme take the job, getting paid a decent amount.
  18. This a stunning poem that is a dramatic piece that speaks of relationship violence.
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  19. This was a very powerful piece of poetry.
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    Chapter 23

    Awesome ending to a fantastic story 😀
  21. Kent seems to have a friendship with Marvin and Devon, which will be good for his health. It sounds like the family are gonna try and cause problems over the will.
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    Chapter 3

    And Grandpa has a car to set on fire🔥
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    Chapter 3

    So if Sabrina isn't poor, what exactly is she up to.
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