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Sussins

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  1. Putting the rape in was not the problem it was how you wrote every other characters response to it they are treating it like it’s nothing I think you should have done a bit more research on it before writing it the fact that you think the next option to heal is a three some 🙆🏾‍♀️🙅🏾‍♀️🙅🏾‍♀️🙅🏾‍♀️ I can’t handle it as a rape victim it’s giving me a lot of ptsd am not having it easy reading it at all I think you need to go beck to the drawing board if you are going to write about trauma pls do better in the beginning i almost stopped reading now I wish I had
  2. I have read about characters that are really selfish but Trents selfishness is on another level altogether who wants to have sex with a rape victim like that he needs help a lot of help I don’t think he should be in a relationship until he gets some and Kayden needs to be able to stand for himself
  3. Sussins

    Chapter 60

    Sometimes you just have to read a story again learn something new everytime I always thought the captain 👨‍✈️ was human and the age difference wasn’t that much but it looks like it’s a lot and in the beginning you mentioned Kohans height but we never really found out how tall he was nice to read again
  4. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂that was a good one Avengers assemble loved it
  5. Am happy for this chapter I was hoping Laner will come to her senses I asked for it on chapter 32 happy reading it now it’s even better than I hoped thank you
  6. I thought Aoi was a girl but this chapter you wrote him and I that Shan was close to his cousins Kiyans children but this chapter it was like they were just meeting But I loved 🥰 this chapter was great to read about this characters again thanks
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    Chapter 24

    Nice story didn’t like Sage though seems really selfish but am happy in the end Brandon wasn’t killed sad Christian died he would have been a great adviser for Adam
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    End

    I thought something new had been added so I came to read this chapter again and it was a great read again how old was Meep/WYN when Kalian found him sad the parents didn’t try to reconcile with them thanks
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    End

    Great story worth reading had so much fun reading lost some sleep 😴 cos of it really enjoyed it loved the ending thank you
  10. I thought James was Dean’s uncle not brother anyway cool sequel
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    The Talk

    I get the not wanting to mess up his family but is his life important to him at all because the rape has started again why is Dean allowing it to continue love your neighbor as your self not more than your self his uncle should be in jail now I feel so sorry for him I thought this time you will write about him getting help but looks like it’s not going to happen 🙅‍♂️ am sad
  12. I hope 🤞 Dean eventually tells his parents about what his uncle did to him so something can be done for him because all that anger is going to get him into trouble
  13. Love this do much enjoyed reading it as always great can’t wait for the next one
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    The story

    The title should have been in the mind of a shy teenager 😹 a lot goes on doesn’t it interesting happy he eventually forced himself out of his comfort zone he needed that thanks
  15. Sussins

    Chapter 1

    Great story reading about Janine and how she is living without her parents makes me angry about all those selfish anti maskers and anti vaxxs they don’t realize that their selfishness and reckless is keeping parents from there children and vise versa and because of them this pandemic keeps mutating am so frustrated if they will suffer alone that on them but they don’t we all suffer with them so annoying
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    Chapter 8

    Reading about the mask 😷 made me realize two years from them 2020 we would all be wearing mask 😷 before then I didn’t know what a 95 mask 😷 was now I do
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    Chapter 13

    To have someone love you like that is beautiful but it usually always happens in stories and movies 🎥 🍿 sad
  18. Nice story enjoyed reading it my only critique was the unprotected sex very dangerous I think but it was nice
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    Obsessions

    Is he ever going to change his surname he should do that before he starts school 🏫
  20. I will love to know what’s happened to Duyi and Laner how they are coping since Jihan has taken so much power from them and will Laner make an effort to get to know her children and grandchildren anyway thanks for the addition
  21. Thank you felt sad for Christopher in the end his death was needless all because he had a bad papa 👴 but it was a happy ending really happy for Bill thanks for a beautiful story
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    Chapter 30

    Loved it had me at the edge of my seat reading it thank you love all your stories you make love sound so beautiful 😻
  23. I love your stories it always lets us see how the lives of true crime victims are affected for the rest of their lives perpetrators just think of their fix at that moment but victims relive it for the rest of their lives as a victim of child abuse I know you never get over it but you live a good life inspite of it and be happy 😆 you stories always inspires me there is hope for happiness haven’t found mine yet but I know I will one day I really loved reading this story like all your stories thank you
  24. This is really degrading I feel so sorry for Mike no one deserves to be treated like that at all
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    Happy New Year!

    Still waiting for the zone wars love this story too much
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