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What an incredible chapter, one with cliffhangers on so many levels. This chapter absolutely deserves a “love” but all the enthusiasm I wanted to express is tempered by your loss. My deepest condolences on the loss of your Sky, Gary. You’ve got your own personal star in the night sky, now. I’ll come back with another comment.

My son was born looking like his father but as he got older, he looks like me, too. (His dad & I look nothing alike, lol).

Been rereading this story.thought I’d left my impression of this story previously….if Mark and Rob have to have a threesome, Nick (who is a very intriguing person himself) is the ideal someone to do it with, his attraction to them are genuine and he can be trusted to be discreet. His family and career are important to him and he’s fully devoted to both. It’s been a pleasure rereading this….U-N-I are a great band & more importantly great friends, Rob and Mark’s love and devotion to each other is intoxicating, with all the action Rob could get as frontman, he’s not remotely tempted, he only has eyes for Mark. ❤️❤️

I wonder….does Vann look like Caleb now? He clearly didn’t before, hence him being able to not be connected to Caleb but genes are funny….

That’s assuming Vann would find out Caleb is his father, which he currently doesn’t know. When he was Alpha, Caleb kept distant tabs on his son….part of why he was able to willingly leave when he was banished was because he knew Vann was being well taken care of and he didn’t know Caleb was his dad, thus sparing him shame.

Uh oh. 😮 That wasn’t a dare, lol. 🤞

Sounds like Corbin may be fixin’ to get a mate. 🐺 When has that prospect stopped you before? lol.

Reading about Asa’s tasks and equipment he uses when Caleb met up with him at the ranch he was working reminds me-Your in depth details of the professions of your characters are impressive & appreciated, it fully fleshes them out. It was nice to see Corbin again, him becoming business partners with Caleb and Asa would only enhance his standing with the pack….the fact that Caleb is making plans for the future is an encouraging step forward in his recovery, as well as hopefully a sign his wolf will respect Giles’ position as Alpha. Caleb and Asa’s mating was scorching 🔥💥, each inheriting the other’s abilities was a wonderful bonus…. I’d have to refresh my memory but didn’t that portrait of the ancestral wolves include two white ones? The newly mated wolves’ exploration of their area and each other had a very Garden of Eden like quality to it, their world consisted only of each other….my expectation of drama had me worried the one(s) who shot at Caleb would take aim at two very bright targets but that thankfully did not happen, will it ever be discovered who took that shot? Caleb and Asa’s week of mating will be an idyllic time, one Caleb definitely deserves (Asa probably as well, lol)….this honeymoon phase can only be a boon to Asa’s physical abilities, he’ll need to be as strong as possible to heal the pups; with Caleb inheriting his mates traits, they may get two healers for the price of one…. I can see him wanting to help heal the pups, though Caleb’s skills are untried, will there be some practice before they leave?

Know there’s more than one person. 😉💝

And kudos to Jed & Max’s support of Kyan’s entrepreneurial attempt at financial independence with “bed in a bag”, lol. 👏

Reid and Max clearly have a tumultuous history, to say the least. Though I am still very much Max and Sven, I remember “Three Strikes” and what you could pull out of a seemingly hopeless situation so….come what may. 🤷‍♀️ “Gracie stood over them with her arms crossed. “I done. Reder-rant is out of food. You go now. Bye.” Gracie’s business plan needs some work, lol which I saw Trudy tried to improve….it’s refreshing to see that everyone is determined not to repeat the errors of the past-then again, it’s easier to do certain things as a grandparent as opposed to a parent, as noted by Perry: You can’t say all the things to Gracie that you never said to Dayna. That’s not how this works.” Seeing hurricane Jessica arrive with her category one entrance was a reminder that both Steele sisters are very strong willed, I wonder whom they take after, I don’t get that vibe from either Jed or Trudy. Listening to the present day dreams of the kids reminds me of how fertile and limitless children’s imaginations can be….if one is lucky, real life and adulthood doesn’t dim it. 🤞💝 If Ava’s fear of seeing something sending her Uncle away is any indication, coupled with the kid’s previous sleep strike until they got their Uncle back, Perry doesn’t have anything to worry about regarding the answer to his question….his house will be full much sooner than later.

Improvement is better than nothing, even though you’re still feeling shitty. A woman I worked with had an issue with vertigo, took her months to fully heal & I think it’s always something she’ll be susceptible to. Hope today is a good day….does laughing impact it? If you can, maybe something funny can make you feel better.

HEY!! 😡 Not cool. Kage was Elijah’s first, you know. Take that malice to another palace. 🧹

Weren’t Ben and Zev mates, too?

Though he was to me, Elijah wasn’t Kage’s “mate”, that may factor into what abilities are transferable during sex.

Food porn galore in the early stuff. Food and exotic liquor.

Kage was/is important, too. ❤️‍🩹 Do we know how many other shade shifters (light and dark) there are? Was Kage the yin to Asa’s yang & is there an imbalance in their world due to Kage’s physical demise? Is Kage’s spirit (currently residing in a part of Elijah) part of the hybrid pup healing along with Asa?

The effects of Asa’s healing were immediate-Caleb accepted help he previously would have shunned and he was more communicative….his quiescent thoughts (besides providing a long missed relief) led him directly to his mate; Caleb’s wolf keeping watch over Asa while he recovered was touching. “It was raunchy and sexy at the same time.” The best sex should be. 😉 The hot sex and the tender cleansing of each other created bonds that rival what the completion of their mating bond will bring. “Asa took a deep breath and stretched. A thin strip of skin peeked through the narrow gap created by the movement. Caleb’s eyes narrowed, then flicked to Giles, satisfied the Alpha couldn’t see anything from his spot across the table.” 😍 I’m one of those people who thinks a certain degree of possessiveness is hot. 🤷‍♀️ I’m glad that Asa can be a cure for the hybrids, while it was suspected that physical healing was less dangerous than mental healing, it’s good that it was confirmed. Thing is….is Asa sure the healing will only be physical? The pups endured mental trauma from the exploitation of their hybrid state, would his empathetic nature be able to leave that damage he’d be so close to? Hope your vertigo is improved or gone.

It’s never too late to write about great characters (if you need inspiration, John Grisham is currently promoting a sequel to “The Firm”, which was written over 30 years ago.) 🙂 You don’t have to follow up but please know if the muses inspire you, there is interest….either way, thank you for sharing this journey. 🙏 🎁

What a pretty comb, looks like ivory, which I guess is a type of bone; like the boot, too. In my earlier comment, I meant to say “rooter to the tooter”….frigging spell check, lol.

Hang in there. Hope it’s a side effect of the meds (which I hope means it’s working 🤞) & not Lyme.

Antler bone comb. 🫎 I like when you touch upon the particulars of the past, in this case, the type of toiletries used before the advent of modern materials and mass production….back then, every single part of an animal was used, from the rooter to the rooter, lol. The description you gave of Lucas’ property was beautiful, I’m still partial to Larkspur but like Jubal said to Lucas: “Yep, and I see why this be the place for you.”

REEEEAAAALLLLYYYY GARY?!?! LOL!! That is definitely one heck of a cliffhanger….you had to promise a double chapter after that!! “Ah, I must admit the Lord didn’t shirk his work.” What a sweet turn of phrase to call someone good looking. I just knew Reid would happen upon a freshly shaved, fine as fuck looking Lucas, lol; It just added fuel to his fire: “Well, I’ll be. That be a welcome sight—almost forgot what your face looked like. “ Reid ain’t beatin’ ‘round the bush no more, he is forcing the issue of he and Lucas’ “friendship” in an unmistakable way….it puts me in the mind of someone trying to hold on to something they know they’ve already lost; to Reid’s credit, he’s still very cordial to Jubal, even when he clearly regards him as a romantic rival. Will Lucas lose his temper? What will happen between Lucas and Reid? What will Jubal find out about Lucas? Find out next week when we check out “Bearpaw: An Old West Tale” 🐾 🍻 Double chapter ✌️📖

It makes sense that healing such negativity would manifest in a literal physical expulsion….is being an empath a part of being a light shifter? This was not only a gesture of love, it was brave and noble and speaks volumes about the depth of Asa’s character….as he previously did for the two ranch hands, Asa would perform this task for anyone he could. It was touching that of Giles and Santos, it was the Alpha who tended to Asa after the healing; he already considers Caleb a member of his pack, Giles’ cordially respectful relationship with Asa, now coupled with the knowledge that he is Caleb’s mate will make considering Asa a pack member a small leap. I like Giles. With such an obvious effect on Asa, there is no doubt Caleb is better off than he was at the start of the day….how much better remains to be seen.

I saw your post about vertigo…. Thank you for posting this chapter but please don’t feel the need to read and respond to a lot of comments if it will hurt you right now….the comments’ll keep until you’re ready, okay? Feel better soon. 🙏 Going to read….