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Sorry, dupe.

johnnyboy2285, you’re asking for me too, lol.

So does Loren. I think he likes mind games but didn’t realize Jay can put him in his place; That’s why he’s perfect for him.

Love that you’re giving the backstory of Jay & Loren and I love that Jay has the upper hand now and again. It will be interesting to see “Boss Nanny” events that relate to their relationship dovetail within this story. You’ve a very masterful, creative hand in the crafting of your love stories, they are always an enjoyable read.

Brownie points to anyone who understands the meaning of Alex’s name thus far! AAA rescues cars, did Alex rescue Nicolo?

Looks like Ben has found a place to plant roots.

Assholic is a disease, ain’t it, lol!!

I’m torn between an angry & sad emoji. 💔 As sad as it would’ve been, throwing Reilly out would have been enough, if his father and brother’s disgust was just about Reilly….They tortured and left him for dead because he was a “failed” reflection of them and their narcissistic, little dick, quick cumming, insecure, incompetent, small minded selves (can you guess that I don’t think much of them? Lol). I truly hope you have many bad things in store for these fuckers. Good story, lol!!

Seeing Lambda makes me wonder if Omega Mu will make an appearance (I’m dating myself, with my “Revenge of the Nerds” reference, lol)

👏 Congratulations.

Something’s telling me he might not be….

I love Reilly and Kellan’s ease with each other, they are true BFF’s & brothers; their exit strategy was sadly impressive-each acted as the cog in a well oiled machine, the sad aspect is from the fact they’ve clearly done that many times before, (this being # 6, if I recall). Are Reilly’s sore knees a “memento” from his father & brother’s reaction to his homosexuality? Or could they & his other physical issues be because he’s a Kappa? I feel like all his physical issues would resolve themselves if he shifted regularly. I hope Sebastian truly accepts his mate…. ‘it’s nice to know Kellan & his dad will be there for Reilly no matter what.

Happy New Year 🎉🍾🥂. I hope all is well and safe with you and yours. I don’t know how I’ve missed this story from you….while I needed no further inducement to read, the end of the chapter hooked me but good: ”Reilly shrugged, then as Kellan looked on, the soft feminine features shifted slightly and became more angular. Soft curves morphed into sinuous muscle. The narrow shoulders widened slightly and curvy hips narrowed until they were more in line with the waist. Ice blue eyes met the amused green ones. “OK Kells, time to drop this damn charade. No more girly shit. I finally get to live as a guy again. Now what?" The plus side of discovering this late is having 15 chapters to read all at once. “Rubbing my hands together”, lol.

Hi Terry. Happy New Year and thank you. 🙂 I would be fine with your reaching out on any future comments. Gary is an excellent writer and his stories often incite intense commentary, as you have witnessed. He is one of my favorite writers….I was going to say on this site but he’s one of my favorite writers, period. This site has been a blessing of wonderful stories and authors. I hope you enjoy your time here, as well.

Happy New Year, Gary. 🎉🎁🍻 Seeing raven1’s notification of a posted comment to this story pulled me into reading all the comments for this chapter and brought back great memories. I remember your trepidation with this subject matter….I also remember the in depth and at times spirited, analysis brought forth in the comments; I fondly recall the interaction on this story & dare say this may have evoked some of the most spirited commentary of all your stories. (Just thinking the name Kevin pisses me off, lol!!) I hope you look back on this with great pride Gary, this was an excellent journey. All the best to you in 2022.

Like sands through the hourglass, huh? ⌛️ I won’t rush (I also won’t hold my breath 😉) lol.

Do you mean Boone’s dad? 😊 (That’s who I’ve speculated he could be)

“And they all lived happily ever after….” 👬 There is so much I like and can touch upon but I think this covers everything best, unless it’s phrased: ”And they all lived happily ever after….As Larkspur Turns” 🌎 Thank you, Gary. 💝

I love the grandmother’s presence in “Gone Fishing”❣️❣️ I also love @Albert1434‘s reference to Wes and Lee being characters of this story, they’re the reason Mitch and the boys (and now Will) became a family.

⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️ ⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️ Love that❣️❣️

LOL!! I think He does….reads and creates. 📖🖌💌

This chapter left me with extremely happy feels. Witnessing Coy’s loving tenacity balanced by Boone’s calm, cool yet passionate patience put me in mind of a phrase I used for the guys before: Yin and Yang….these two complement and balance each other per-fect-ly. The comedy show displayed with them waiting for word from Mitchell exemplified that. The payoff from the good news was worth it, as was the watching the safe space these four are creating for each other to be themselves and love the way they want to love. (I loved Mitch and Will kissing in front of B & C….how free and trusting they felt to have done that!! payback be damned, lol). There is a bountiful harvest of more than apples due from that area; About that…. It further gladdened my heart to see the burgeoning moguls Boone and Coy are on the way to being, with the deal they made with the hotel for their apples and the future forecasts on their cattle. 👏 “Not the first time it feels the Lord is on our side, is it?”….No Boone, it’s not the first time it feels like that at all; While I love this outcome for these four, Gary, I know you could have written a story with a far different outcome for their fate at that time of life….pioneering ain’t easy, still isn’t, as land ain’t the only new territory to cross. What will the end of this story look like? Will anyone tell Will who Willard is? 😄 🐴 Guess we’ll find out the next time we tune in to “As Larkspur Turns” 🌎 🍻

“We” are impressed you don’t do it more often, lol!! 👑 🏰 🍻

“Outhouse in the tree line to the north of the house?” Every time I read about outhouses, it makes me glad I was born when “water closets”were moved indoors, lol!! This chapter was enlightening in that Mitch admitted to all the fears he harbored during M & W 1.0….fears that would have likely resulted in issues they may not have been able to recover from. He is correct in saying they were meant to be together now, it makes M & W 2.0 all the sweeter (I loved how much Mitch kept kissing Will and while Will’s words were moving, I’m not putting M & W in the sweet talk league of Boone and Coy yet, lol.) It was very nice to see the gents making plans for the future….good times abound for M & W and their neighbors….speaking of, the relay of all the recent developments will have B & C’s heads spinning and their hearts overfull with happiness. Fishfry next week on “As Larkspur Turns” 🌎!! 😄🍻

💗Swoon💗 💝