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I’m thinking Penn.

Fuck you, Lee. Back stabbing bitch. Lee has already proven he can’t be trusted; Nash is being naive in giving in to Lee’s demands to wait six months and keep things quiet. Lee and his lover are clearly planning something, something not good for Nash. I only hope that he realizes something is up before that and blows them up but I’m thinking that’s not how you’ve planned it, lol. Even knowing that Lee was going to prove a faithless prick, I was still so upset reading this. I wonder if Paul is using Lee or if they are equally complicit in whatever they’re planning. So now the fall has started. I wish you posted daily....twice daily.

The Knotts brothers know something about Lee....if they like Nash as much as they do, they should tell him; Either way something is going to come out to break Nash and Lee up. The interest the Knotts brothers have in Nash is so intriguing, it seems more than just genuine like; I wonder if they will support him when the shit hits the fan. Whatever you have coming for Nash makes me sad, he seems like a really nice guy.

This was a surprisingly nice start to TC’s visit with his parents (though it isn’t over yet 😉); I’m glad David was there as support/buffer. I hope if TC does have the heart to heart with his parents, it works to better his relationship with them (and maybe alter his perception about what kind of future he can have with David). Thank you for my you learn something every day tidbit-a group of stingrays are called a fever.

Feel free to post often. ☺️

Is Lee faithful? What is with the Knotts’ determination to have Nash socialize with them so much and without Lee? Is Ryan playing matchmaker? I'm very intrigued....

TC and David are coming to that fork in the road, I’m wondering how divergent (or convergent) their paths will be. I also know that TC and his father will butt heads; That might prove detrimental to being flexible with David, as it’s his father’s heavy handed attitude that birthed TC’s dominant nature. I’m from the Northeast and did college for a couple of years in Southwest Georgia. Summer is my least favorite season so guess where I didn’t stay? Lol. There isn’t enough inducement to make me willingly deal with that heat and humidity on a regular basis. The winters were decent....even got some 30 degree mornings a time or two.

Blu reminds me of Nan when he’s dealing with Sage.

Hmm....does he wind up with Penn or Ryan? The set up is complete. I dread the tide turning in Nash’s life and wonder what part Paul plays in it. “Well thank you. Didn’t realized missing me was an option. I almost didn’t post this story because I wasn’t sure anyone really cared lol” Your other two stories were incredible and this one seems it will be more of the same. If you have other stories, I think it safe to say there will be plenty to read it here.

Between the story summary and this chapter, I feel a set up for Nash’s current life to come crashing down around him. With all the love between he and Lee, something is not quite right and I detect and interest from Ryan that I’m not sure what to make of yet. I get the Colin and Charles/Donovan and Shane vibe between Nash and Ryan. If they are whom you’re going to put together, I sense a hell of journey on their destination to each other. Looking forward to more.

This is also one of my favorite chapters of the story. TC and David really do make a perfect couple and having family approval (especially those of your children) is BIG. David’s car sharing analogy was a perfect description of his and TC’s dilemma, with TC clearly being the one who always wants to “drive”. Compromise would be the perfect solution for them, obviously and while TC has seemed too much a control freak to loosen up, it is also he who has pursued David; I think with TC’s heart involved (as it clearly is, friends with benefits be damned) he may be more flexible that he realizes.

There was a neck and neck contest on the F💣 and 💩 as my favorite swear word for a while, F💣 won out-It’s more versatile, lol.

“Time” will tell, huh? I think “time” just did, 😂

I like how you explored that not everyone has parental instincts through Elliott and TC’s choices; The smartest thing is to recognize who you are and not force the issue. Life may show you otherwise but people generally know who they are. It made me a little sad that things have kind of cooled romantically between David and TC....I’m hoping it’s a case of absence making the heart grow fonder, as I feel the two have the makings of a great relationship if they decided that D/s would not be a dominating factor. As there is a Book II and we are already at midpoint of Book I, there’s clearly more to explore between our two Doms. Liking the occasional profane word, I determined I wasn’t going to be a hypocrite about it when I became a parent; I now have an eight year old whom I regulate by letting him know “those” words are adult words and he has to be a certain age to say them. He tests me on it every once in a while but that benchmark has generally kept him in line, lol.

“He and David were careful with their boundaries and that was exactly what TC needed. He wasn’t ready to share his emotional side with someone new, but David was an old friend and they had their own emotional history that surrounded their friendship. It was familiar and comforting and best of all they both knew it wasn’t going any further. They had sorted all that out at the beginning of their friendship and they were both OK with how things were.” Life has a way of throwing a curveball when you’re swinging at a different pitch. I feel that TC has been sharing his emotional side with David since they reconnected. “Let’s face it TC, what we’re doing is not meant to be long term. Sooner or later I’m going to have to let my Dom out to play. Your Dom doesn’t play nice in the sandbox unless there’s a sub involved. One of these days TC you’ll be ready to move on and find someone who can be what you need. We both know it’s not me. Don’t get me wrong, I love what we’re doing. But you and I both know that it has an expiration date. It’s not tomorrow and it may not even be this year, but eventually the benefits will run out.” David said.’ Understanding the personal preferences of both David and TC being Doms and that there aren’t two Doms in a D/s relationship, this passage still made me question “will it?” (Run out, that is) There is something here more than I think either man wants to acknowledge.

What an amazing way you have with a narrative❣️❣️ I was already a huge fan of “Still You Want Me” but I think I like this one more. I was sad to leave their world but equally grateful for the glimpse I had in it. What a beautiful, beautiful, narrative. Thank you.

Hope you’re feeling better, thanks for the chapter.

Whether you rage in prose or literally as you’ve described, it your right and I hope you do so. It’s when we keep in the toxic feelings that they turn on us. You have such a gift for making your point resonate in the most poignant chords. Thank you for sharing it, Beautiful Man.

How beautifully, erotically stimulating, with a dash of melancholic longing. I’m glad you had it and I’m sorry you miss it. 😘 🍻

CONGRATULATIONS❣️❣️🧑‍🎓 🎓 🎉 🎁 👏 Your son is a graduate. Period. That is true with or without a cap and gown and is a major accomplishment in and of itself....even more so if additional challenges come into play (as you’ve indicated). Most people like weddings but weddings symbolize the start of a marriage; That walk across the stage is symbolic and while it would be nice to do, your son’s accomplishment stands; He is on his way. A heartfelt congratulations to your son and to all of you who have loved and supported him. (and continue to, I’m sure) Nice chapter, by the way. 😊

And your food content!! Lol!! I swear, you, Wayne Gray and mikiesboy always leave me hungry reading your stories, 😄

How David “turns out” or how David is “turned out”? 😄 Very intriguing story. I think I’m somewhere in between, not vanilla but not hardcore; I enjoy reading about different journeys and perspectives, you never know where it’ll take you. You're batting a thousand, kbois....I’ve yet to read a story of yours that isn’t engaging.

Bratty will be found and Aidan is right, Rick going with his brother-in-law is a bad idea....

I think Bratty added to her family, in more ways than her pending litter. I hope Rick gets to have his own place soon; He definitely needs away from his brother in law.

I’m thinking Rick is going to change Aidan’s life (and heart) in more ways than one and that Rick will be similarly affected. I like what I’ve read so far. 👍