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From Ch. 8: “She’s single. She’s got a daughter, though.” Which was usually when prospective dates withdrew, or so my sister had told me. Some even ran, according to her. “Good, she’s fertile. Get me her number, I like the fiery ones and I’m looking for a sequel.”

You hit it out of the park a-gain, lol.

Welp….put a fork in her, Meg’s done. LOL!! 🌭 Thank you for this; much as this story is about Adam and Kai, in one chapter you created extremely strong rooting value for Callum and Megan. They are made for each other….his easy acceptance of her being a single parent, instead of it being a deterrent (even before he met Nikki) was wonderful (but shouldn’t be unusual 🫤)….getting Nikki’s seal of approval was huge-she’s ready for her mom to have more in life beside work and raising her (not to mention the “sequels” to come, lol). Megan’s occupation (as well as being the sibling of a member of the military) lends her an understanding perspective of Dr. Kincaid’s experiences. Dr. Callum Kincaid, he of the eidetic and echoic memory, is an original in more ways than one….he was probably always outspoken but his wartime experiences likely confirmed for him that life is too short and you have to say what you mean, mean what you say and go after what you want….he clearly wants a life with Megan and Nikki; at least he knows he’ll definitely get along with one brother in law. 😊 If that “sequel” ain’t already in the works, it soon will be, LOL!!!!

So very well said.

This chapter was EVERYTHING❣️❣️❣️❣️ “You may have no idea what a letter feels like for a military man. And I’m not saying that to guilt you into continuing to write. It’s just - it’s a real, physical connection. Someone touched that paper, held that pen. Made an effort for you. And when we’re deployed? That connection is what makes it bearable…” *Sigh* 😍 This same feeling translates to anyone isolated, far from home, feeling alone. “Very,” he returned, humor in his voice. “I read that Capricorns are very well matched with Virgos.” “Who told you that?” “Your letters.” *Sigh* 😍 Historically Virgos are most romantically compatible with Capricorn, Taurus and Scorpio; more recent additions include Aries and Cancer. “Of course I’m sure. I don’t say things I don’t mean.” He chuckled softly. “I very recently heard someone claim that. Trust me when I say; I’ll never doubt it when someone says that, ever again.” 🤔 There are similarities between Adam and Dr. Kincaid….Adam’s a milder, kinder version, lol. “Thank you. Oh, I have so many questions now!” He laughed. “Ask away! I’m not going anywhere.” And we talked and laughed and talked, far into the evening…” *Sigh* 😍 True connections can talk anytime, anyplace, about anything….it wouldn’t matter if their last conversation was two hours or two years ago. “I know you”…. “I can’t stop thinking about you”…. Nothing physical will happen right away ( or maybe it will) but I think Adam and Kai both know this is more than a meeting of friends….this will be a homecoming, for the both of them (and Arya, too 😊)

This chapter was excellent. Introducing some supporting characters, amongst which the most inappropriate doctor you'll ever meet.➡️You didn’t lie, lol!! Seeing Kai within the sibling milieu was refreshing, he has healthy and close relationships with Kellan and Megan….it fleshed him out more to see him as brother, uncle and patient (to a doctor who apparently will be his brother in law, lol). Kai’s family life is the opposite of Adam’s, it will be be interesting to see the interactions between Adam and the most important people in Kai’s life, though “Just promise me you’ll score yourself a nice fat husband down the line and we’ll be square, aight? Two weeks in the Caribbean, his dime.” is a pretty good indication his family is ready to see him involved with someone and Kellan, Adam’s wallet is fat, hopefully that counts. 🙂 Which leads us to….the phone call. While being pen pals was absolutely enchanting, this feels like a natural next step.

Adam’s discipline is impressive, that probably goes hand in hand with being a stickler for routine….he clearly wants to deviate from said routine very much “He was beginning to become a bad influence.” yet still stays the course. Then again: “It was a force of wills and I barely won, but I did win. I’d probably lose, the next time.” lol. 🤷‍♀️ Kai’s blanket acceptance and defense of who Adam is was very touching; it’s one thing to feel it, another to share it, especially as you know it provides the kind of support Adam’s rarely or never received. These two are hooked (and I look forward to finding out Adam’s eye color as well). Yet another lovely link added to the chain of events that comprise this very engrossing story. Thank you. 🎁

From the way Kai describes himself as a partner, I think you are right. Kai’s nature and his career in the military were a perfect match….the shame is he had to pay such a high price for his service.

This. Yes. Exactly.

To read of Kai’s equally eager anticipation of Adam’s letter brought a quickening to my heart….it put me in the mind of two puzzle pieces fitting together, even though the look of each piece differs. “My first thought was that he needed to eat more. I’d have to make sure he ate well, breakfast, lunch and dinner, when I was back.” Kai has already claimed Adam as his and gone into nurturing mode, or is it the Commander looking after his platoon of 1? “I knew the exact floorboard he was referring to. I’d have to hammer it back into place and put new screws in. When he spoke about doing exactly that, I didn’t want him to do it. He’d probably smash his fingers. I should be the one doing that. He could hurt himself. “ I mentally swooned at the protective feelings bursting forth from Kai for his pen pal, the one he “got the urge to reach over and draw him close.” These two❣️❣️ “You don’t get to meet someone like that every day. Some never do in a lifetime. So when you do? Grab them and hold on for the ride; it’s worth it.” The unconditional acceptance Kai has of Adam for who he is (and mourns the parts chopped away by others) brought tears to my eyes. @Andr0gene, if this is what you do with them miles apart, I can’t imagine (yet very much look forward to) what you have in store for when they meet face to face. “The next morning, my coach complimented me on my focus, saying what a good night sleep and plenty of rest could do for you; so much different from yesterday, when my head wasn’t in the game. When he asked what had caused it, I just grinned and responded with, “I got places to be, people to see.” And Adam now becomes an important motivator in Kai’s recovery, both body and soul. ❤️‍🩹 This story is sublime. ❤️❤️

What a beautiful turn of phrase. I dare say this story is bringing out the romantic writer in us all. 😊

I love the idea of the rooms redone via the themes Adam came up with, something tells me Kai would appreciate it, too. “And reading it in bed made it feel intimate. It was easy to imagine he’d be right here next to me in my doubter bed.” Adam’s already more than half in love with Kai, eagerly anticipating a response to his letter with every postal visit. I had never heard of a doubter bed before reading of one here….Adam can keep it, I like a queen size mattress, myself, full size minimum; much as I too would “like lying close to someone, every naked bit of me touching him and basking in his naked body heat,” I need space of my own, lol. Adam’s surprise at Kai’s picture made me wonder if he met Kai’s sister during the sale of the house (I recall the necessity of selling quickly after their father’s death but not if Adam dealt directly with a family member) If he had, maybe she looks far different from her brother (?) Corresponding by letter has this ability to engage its audience that differs from social media, even a phone call….it creates this unique vacuum that inhabits only its occupants, it magnifies their communication, like kissing with your eyes closed….Adam and Kai are already caught up in each other. The layout of the home was very welcome, it served to explain why Adam loves it, as well as giving a glimpse into the family home it so recently was (and may be again). 🤞

Aww, I like the whole “Confounded” series, even considering what happened to Taylan.

Adam and Kai put me in the mind of pen pals with the singular appreciation both have for the written letter. It’s very charming. This is great. Old fashioned and refreshing. I can and can’t wait for these two to meet.

Adam was entranced by Kai through his letter, to me Adam is equally entrancing…his habits and schedules endearing; he is someone very taken with ambiance and atmosphere, who also happens to have a skill of creating a mood and scene of his own. He’s probably a very good writer. I too am a fan of copperplate (which when I looked it up I realized was the cursive writing we were taught in school). Kai has been through a lot & will go through more when he realizes he lost his father. This is a very engaging premise….looking forward to where this goes.

This was exceptional. Thank you for this. 🎁

With the loss of Carlos Hazday still a presence on this site, the loss of Comicality is a fresh reminder that life is fragile and precious. Rest in peace to Comicality….may loving memories of those who knew him personally sustain them in this time of mourning, as we fellow readers will be sustained by the legacy of his stories.

My goodness, what a great series; I was hoping for a few more chapters that at least left all the Kingsman’s coupled up….Janie too, as long as it wasn’t with Will, lol.

Uh oh. What cowpie did I step in? 😳👀

I left it out of my comments but credit is due to River’s mom for admitting to her failings as a parent as well as her desire to improve their relationship….it’s such a distinct contrast to Alec’s mom….River is right, that hateful harpy probably doesn’t feel she did anything wrong in her rearing of Alec.

The slow pace of Kenji and River’s ”courtship” heightens the anticipation of each interaction they have, their chemistry is palpable and Kenji is just as affected as River, he simply has more obligations and responsibilities than River does. While their ride is different, Kenji is River’s Finn.

American Traditional, Trash Polka…. I wonder how many other tattoo styles there are; I’m sure that doesn’t even begin to take account one’s own individual style. Positive or negative, River knows himself very well and seems to be comfortable in his own skin….what a perfect protector for Alec when they struck out on their own….much as I love Alec, I’m starting to equally love River, I don’t recall River being in therapy so it seems much of his progression is self realized; for him to face his own demons while walking Alec through his own is lovingly admirable and impressive. That tattoo client will definitely be back to try and get physical with River….” “You think you’re hot shit? I’ll be back to show you what a bitch you are!” He’s clearly overcompensating for some weakness of his own but he’d better watch out-River seems clearly able to take care of himself, not to mention ex cop Lukas and ex criminal Cameron…. I haven’t even mentioned what reach Kenji has, which seems very deep and he’d clearly use it for River.

Our “Wisdom” is always so much easier dispensed to others than to ourselves, lol. I love the passage “Would that I had A magic looking glass Such tool to surely help The covering of my own ass” 😊 Physician heal thyself, indeed. Lol. I have always admired your poetry, Gary; I admire all who attempt this form…. I must admit I’m inspired to see if expressing myself this way will help life as it looks today. Thank you for sharing. 🎁

The “Secret” that we should love ourselves as much, if not more than the others we are fortunate to bestow love on is a lesson that all too often isn’t learned until we are much older, if we learn it at all. Oh how masterful a life one can live if we learn that healthy love for ourselves first, can only enhance the quality of every single love we experience….circumstances of our environment can derail or destroy that lesson but if that lesson is learned early, the possibilities are limitless.