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Chapter 1: The Spirit of Christmas
Backwoods Boy commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Spirit of Christmas
Thanks for sharing a great story about what Christmas is all about, and in this case it was just the beginning -
Just for grins, I'm trying to read all of the Christmas stories that have been posted. They are all very different, and each reflects the interests and personality of the writer. Yours is as unique and personal as the rest. A well-written story, my friend.
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An absolutely unique and delightful holiday read. One that will keep you smiling well into the new year.
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Like@Carlos Hazdaysaid, the smile just grew and grew. In a word, Brilliant! 🌲
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Perhaps the old man is wishing the bicycle were his 🤔
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I wonder how many emergency-room visits the finger device caused. "But Doctor, I didn't know it was loaded."
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The Epic of Gilgamesh in a Nutshell
Backwoods Boy commented on Refugium's story chapter in The Epic of Gilgamesh in a Nutshell
A very enjoyable read. Though it may be your own interpretation, the essential components of the legend have certain parallels with another supposedly-unique mythology, always an interesting discovery. Thanks for sharing this. -
Chapter 1: A Lottery Win for Christmas
Backwoods Boy commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: A Lottery Win for Christmas
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This is my first exposure to your writing, and I like it very much. The interactions and dialogue quickly make the characters and family relationships real. The character descriptions are neatly woven into the prose, and are clearly envisioned by the reader. From a technical perspective, the grammar and spelling are excellent. Yes, current writing tools are very helpful, but there's a lot more to it than that. Though a matter of opinion, I like the shorter chapters. A picture is quickly formed and maintained, waiting for the next chapter. Good work!
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Row Row Row your boat
Backwoods Boy commented on WritersBlock404's story chapter in Row Row Row your boat
Very realistic and well-told first-time story - in a perfect setting. -
Anything I could say would be an understatement. So, in the words of one of my favorite characters, prone to understatement, "Very satisfactory."
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I've read most of the stories, but need to read the rest for sure. Horace isn't ringing a bell. Thanks for a great start on Halloween.
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Very much so. I keep my mouth shut least I say too much, but it is fun to observe the conjectures
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I'm through chapter two and enjoying this just as much as the rest of the Christmas stories. I like the clear numerical chapter separations. Chapter two was a little overwhelming, but that's my fault for not reading all of the stories but only the Christmas stories at this point. Thanks for giving enough background to pick up on the new-to-me characters. I'll use the period between now and July to catch up on the Valentine stories and the earlier July 4th stories. Halloween will wait until fall because Halloween, like Christmas, should be enjoyed in-season, IMHO. Thanks for another great seasonal-mood-improver.
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Your solution was much more in line with your premises. Visits will work just as well.
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Thanks for the best present of all.
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So, the boys don't get to take Auggie home with them. I'm only mildly disappointed - it was a stretch. I love Auggie's origins and development. Thanks for making the holidays far more interesting than conditions otherwise suggest.
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Absolutely marvelous, as well as all the comments! But I will pat myself on the back a little. When they went to the basement work shop, I just knew it was one of the mistakes developing a new existence. I hope the boys get to take it home for a pet that nobody else can see.
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This is wonderful. I laughed at the elements of earthly reality, such as the use of UPS, etc. It's nice that magic has a basis in reality, if only in part. I'm looking forward to the rest of this story - and this year's new one,
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Can't Believe I've Been Gone So Long
Backwoods Boy commented on JayT's blog entry in Randomnicity (aka Jay's thoughts)
That's a lot to deal with in a short period of time. My thoughts are with you. -
As I finished this wonderful story and read the comments, I recalled the attached piece of personal history, vintage 1965, halfway through the college experience and home for Christmas. (Linked, as I couldn't insert the image). Thanks again for a great story with the true feeling of Christmas. https://gayauthors.org/gallery/image/16583-19230001jpg/
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… and since I'm two years late to the party, I don't have to wait to find out what it is
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That was absolutely superb. Your imagination knows no bounds. The reading was not without tears - the kind one sheds when one sees something really beautiful. Thanks again for sharing your creativity.
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Now, that was a real holiday treat. I'm anxious to read the other three now. And then it looks like entertainment for other holidays to come. The Valentine's Day opportunities could make January much more bearable. You're a great story teller, and this was a great story.
