Aww, I just stayed up and read all four chapters.. and I know I shouldn't have since I'll now be skipping my classes... well I 'also' have a minor stomach ick to continue sleeping through...
But! This story is well developed so far, like others have said. And, I really do like the different characters and the way Jake interacts with each one of them. The inner thinking/talking is done differently, I think, than most other authors do it, and for me that's refreshing to read (or I could just be needing to read more), but I've thoroughly enjoyed getting the reactions from Jake about what he says or how he reacts to others - it's comical at times, and so dramatic other times. It really adds to the "flavor" of Jake.
Anyway, I like how you ended this chapter - even if the romantic in me is SCREAMING out against it.
You're also getting into the cliffhanger mix... tsk tsk tsk..
Krista