Yes! Thank you for saying that Conflicts is more mature, because that is what I am reaching for.. lol. Reading over some of my older works, I saw that I needed to mature the setting, characters, and such.. to make the story different. So I'm glad you commented on that, because it is a goal with this story and the two other stories that are new and will eventually be worked on and wrote. Flowing and smoothness of the writing is also something I'm trying to work on as well. And I did want this one to involve nature a lot more.
So thanks Tiff!
Krista