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Oh Dizzy you hurt mischievous muffin, Ok, FUCK EZRA! There it needed to be said...written. Like I said situational manipulation, like he couldn't figure out where when and what time to see the kids after school. He knew about the testing, he can ask the school about the address since hes related or something like the yellow pages, he originally probably thought he'd see Artie alone. I smell a rat!
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Somebody's gonna get it.
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Dick move. Ezra's one of those situational manipulators who can arrange for the moments to occur in favor of his agenda and those kind of weasels are the worst to deal with. Between time constraints and dead time between possible meetings they have time to plan how to make themselves more sympathetic. What Artie needs to do is bring his whole support crew, Colleen, Charlotte, her parents, hell even Jose to give him more to distract his scheming.
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Wasn't he on the list too? I honestly don't remember. But I'm not surprised by the amount of activity he'd been involved in, Ben liked him how evil couldn't he have been.
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But now named Erza because she's a giant weeb who likes Fairy Tail anime, baseball, has a wooden leg, and her big leather bear daddy Betty
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This feels like the climax of the story but I think it's a preamble to either an even bigger climax or a huge character(s) change. I'm so excited!
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You my good person, have kept me riveted to this site for years and have had me hooked waiting in anticipation for the next installment whether it was the next chapter or the next series in your character's extraordinary life that I feel saddened by the end of his tale. I genuinely wish his story wouldn't end, but at the same time I can say that this is a good place to finish his tale. Forever a fan who patiently awaits your next tale, thank you for your time and effort. (Honorably bows in respect)
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I'm surprised you were lenient on mother...for now. She is some lucky she's preggers, but afterwards I feel sorry for the children. Hope Drew has his press face on, he's going to be on every screen soon.
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WAHHHHHHHHH!!! I'm throwing my own tantrum and am sobbing. Its like the family I want is leaving. I absolutely love the story and its characters and don't want it to end and now can't wait for the next installment and where the story goes. I think I just need a tight hug.
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Tears of a new life! It just makes me remember when my niece and nephew were born, and how much I love those two hellions with all my heart.
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Great now I'm just waiting for her butler to come out like Equilibrium but the final shot is Lady in a distant window with a quiet rifle just prim propper, "what foolery is afoot on my estate" dropping goons leisurely.
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(Deep breath in...hold and slow release) Ok you saved yourself from a trans internet violent shaking if you'd of left the cliffhanger as is. This story...I need a xanax. Ben's dead long live the king, I would've swore it would be the father, but still shocking. There is just some crazy you can't account for. This is not only nuts, but mixed nuts in an asylum for the criminally insane on a peanut farm...with honey.
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I've only made it to “Of course. How else would I ruin you?” before I had to put down the story and just...Damn... the staggering amount of crazy just this far in...DAMN!...I'm shivering in 86 degree weather. Ok back to reading.
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I have and I agree he has settled down on the violence...but I had said I would have a chat with him not CJ. Lol. Still depending on if he tries to make an unrelenting ass of himself before you drop him he could still be spanked by one of the other characters.
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Love the story, but that one word now has me wanting a talk with Damien. But I wouldn't say a word...I'd let lola say several words. Kneecap Kneecap Palm Palm Testicles
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I'm dropping huge salty tears everywhere and it's all your fault! (Raises fictional alcoholic beverage) to the best imaginary grandma that I wish I had!
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Ok this is from way back towards the beginning of the story but...I want Ben dead and whoever's this person is. The question is who? Place bets on Mother- coming to get rid of everyone for press purposes Father -press purposes and inherit company of Lady Jane Butler- because they are always guilty, or just tired of the people Or Alice - has the connections between whole family and possibly has access to Jane's investments Personally I'm thinking father, he hasn't been shown to be as evil yet. Abandoning children is one thing but selling them to evil possibly to kill them and inherit company just ticks all my evil boxes
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Love/loved will always love this story. It's not a Marvel movie....nothing extra after the end credits 😁! I'm going to kill several flies in a single strike. Uh hum...the vet would have felt a chip because they do it in the same place for every pet, and it's only so deep,( learned that from my dog Magic, miss you girl!) And of course the dog belongs to them the Halo and how Lex found her. It's his Mother reincarnated! No extra after credits, please you left that open to the dreamers after you said none existed. I say challenge accepted. Lol
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I don't want this to end I love them all and I just want to hug everyone right now.
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I meant crazy, big fan of Alice in wonderland, Burn the Witch!
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But Laura...We're all mad here.
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I was a graph jockey, power point pusher. But my employers were crazy in a different way, I only had to pull not even a handful of late night work in the 3 years working there. So I can empathize with Bunny.
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Slaying bitches left and right. Work it!
