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Jared and Mason's Big Day
Hellsheild commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Jared and Mason's Big Day
I love and will continue to love each and every (minus bad, asshole, bigoted, evil, stalkerish) character. They each hold a place in my heart -
Ear splitting smile, God I love this story.
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Missed your story. Still love the energy in it.
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Thoughts: more! Comments: "more please." Complaints: there wasn't more In all honesty I am loving this story and inherently any story with twins needs double the character and you satisfy this with these two and have a great set of brother dynamics. There is emotion, punch, stakes, and energy here keep up the great work.
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I love it! I know I complain about not wanting a story to end but at the same time I absolutely love to read your stories. I love the badass-ness of mekias, and how he is just an emotional open book. Keep up the great work.
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I feel like I'm watching Don Quixote charging at the windmills. There's an importance to the action but it's frustratingly pointless to try to stop or change. Take Roy and the kids with you! I'm sure this will play into the continuation of the story later but it's like watching a good series but at the end of the season the protagonist "has to chase down x to drive the plot to the next season "... so I sit here in my impotent rage carving notches in my wall waiting for the continuation.
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Mekias is probably questioning why his failed housekeeper is dangling from a building lol. No but I am and have been worrying about the chip in his head, though experiments on potential "conquests "seems more than just irredeemable it also feels like you're willing to get exposed to something else from carryover or whatever you'd call it.
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I'm broke as hell and I'd still buy tickets for the meeting of the xx chromosomes
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I feel the phrase full circle coming in to play within the next few chapters.
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I love the "low born being the fresh air to the blue blood " trope
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Ok take Roy, bring pets inside and lock all doors, until everyone else can get their act together and retrieve heads out of asses. Then shoot Cody twice (double tap) then go to the nearest bar get a pint. Then go to Amas place for a great feast
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That was just beautiful.
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I could read so much more from the town, and maybe Ayu having a fight with Rowen magic vs technology ending with marriage to see who wins lol
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I'm glad to see an ending to this story, only because I knew they could make it. I can't wait for more of your stories, but I definitely understand the pressures of the world come first. Hope your work yields great rewards. Good luck.
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I've been rendered speechless. Words fail me. Memes fall flat before the unexpected. M. Night Shyamalan couldn't make a better twist and he's tried with several movies.
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Love this yes. Yes Yes! Yes. Yes yes yes. Yesyesyesyesyesyesyes YES! Y! E! S! Spells YES!
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In Which Aidan Learns Lies Tend To Have Short Legs
Hellsheild commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In Which Aidan Learns Lies Tend To Have Short Legs
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In Which Aidan Learns Lies Tend To Have Short Legs
Hellsheild commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In Which Aidan Learns Lies Tend To Have Short Legs
Talk about winning the lottery! Quick buy a ticket! Saw it a million miles away and was not disappointed. Can't wait for more. -
You didn't have to name a character after me your so thoughtful. 😁 Continuing to love your story. Even when you make us laugh cry or get an overreaction that may or may not have scared my cat at your cliffhangers. Ps you owe me a new lamp lol
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The full name is almost a spell in and of itself. Whenever my mom says it you have no choice but to stand before her. More effective than Scorpion and strangely more damaging considering what follows leaves you flattened and wishing for death.
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Chapter 36 - Facing a delemma
Hellsheild commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 36 - Facing a delemma
Gggggrraaaargggg! "Deep sigh" Ok ok I'm ok. It was a nice Amuse-bouche of what is the main course will be to come. It just ...I want more. -
Cue lightning and dun Dun DUUUN! Sounds
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Cody's Bluebird Surprise
Hellsheild commented on JujuTheDruid's story chapter in Cody's Bluebird Surprise
Jesus Christ man! I mean you had your characters go through pain, but I think I just read something from a futuristic version of Hostel. And Soul poor creature finally forms a spirit only to be shot in the back. -
Authors, what was your favorite Comment or Review?
Hellsheild replied to Former Member's topic in The Lounge
All I'll say about this is that you can't kidnap the willing. I saw the free candy sign on the van and hopped in willingly. But if a ransom appears you can tie me up for appearance...I may like it. -
God I absolutely love reading the life of this family.
